-Nitya's OS Gallery. updated pg.18 [1/16]

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Index:

Under the Stars: page 1

By Chance: page 2

Diya: page 3

ShaNak's wedding VM: page 5

Tere Liye: page 6

The Note: page 7

Untitled: page 10

ShaNak VM-Jeans Theme: page 12

Hamesha...Forever: page 14

The woes of a lover... page 15

The woes of a lover part 2..page 18



-Under the Stars

'1:30 am Saturday'

Sitting on her bed, head lying against the headboard Khanak was reading the cutest romantic novel known to man. The way the character in the story says I love you to the girl just made Khanak wonder if this was ever going to happen to her. Her dream guy was with her but it still felt incomplete. Shaan was her lover alright but he never said those three words that she's been yearning to hear from his mouth. They've been going out for more than a year and he still hasn't said anything to her. She couldn't help but wonder if he really loves her or not. "Oh well, If Shaan loves me, then he'll say it sometime or another."

She was so engrossed in her book that she didn't notice the rock that was thrown at her window. 'thud' another rock was thrown and this time she looked up. She looked at the clocked and thought "Who could it be at this time?" When there was another thud, she lost her patience and stood up to go to the balcony. When she opened the door and looked down, she saw was a black figure in the fog and it looked like he was holding some kind of a box. "Who are you? And what the hell are you doing outside my balcony?!" she whispered loud enough for only him to hear.

"Arrey what who the hell are you?! You don't recognize your own boyfriend?"He replied back annoyed that she didn't recognize him. When she heard his voice, it seemed like the whole world just stopped'that there was no one else in the world except for them. She recognized his voice in a flash and replied "Oh Shaan tum! I'm so sorry; I thought it was some creep trying to get into my house. Waise tum yahan? Aur who bhi iss waqt?" she questioned.

"Do I need a reason to come and see you?" simple words such as this made her blush. 'If only you could say what I want you to say' she pondered to herself. "Why are you staring into space? Help me come up" Shaan started climbing the pipe and eventually made it into her balcony. She noticed that he was holding a basket and asked "What's in the basket Shaan?" "Arrey, you like picnics right? So I thought why not have a picnic right now." "A picnic at midnight? Pagal ho gayo kya?"

"There's no book that says picnics are meant to be held in the day right? Why does it matter when the picnic is as long as it's fun?" She knew it was a waste of time to argue with him, he's going to win one way or another. She just agreed with him. Shaan and Khanak set up the blanket and the food.
Both were leaning against the wall. Khanak had her head on Shaan's shoulder and his arm was around her. 'It's so peaceful na?" she said it as more of a statement than a question. Looking into the sky, Shaan noticed that there was a shooting star. "Look! A shooting star! Close your eyes and make a wish sweetheart." both Khanak and Shaan closed their eyes. 'I wish he could say those three words I've been dying to here' her wish was made. She wondered if her dream would ever come true.

- A dream is a wish your heart makes -

'Half and hour later'

After cleaning up everything, Shaan stood up to leave. He made his way back to the railings and started to climb down. Khanak stood at the railings and watched as he climbed down. Halfway down the pipe though, Shaan started climbing back up. A frown made it's way to her face and before she could ask him what he was doing, Shaan shushed her and said " I just wanted to say 'I love you.' and with that said, he left a quick peck on her cheek and climbed down the pipe again. Stunned; that was her expression. Slowly she blushed and a smile appeared on her face. She looked up into the night and "He said it! He finally said 'I love you' she happily skipped into the room and plopped onto the bed. Re-playing the moment over and over in her head Khanak fell asleep with a serene smile on her face. Her wish had come true after all. ~

-Have faith in your dream and someday

A Rainbow will come smiling through -

~Cinderella

This is one of my first stories..so it might be messy..i have other ones ( sad ones though) i guess i'll post them later. 😆 I think they're better then this one. this story is kind of suck-ish. 😳😆

Comment/criticism is appreciated :)
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lilindiangurl13 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG nitz the OS is sooo sweet
I love it soooo much
you should definitely write more
i dont know why you think your not good
waiting for you to post all of the ones you wrote soo far
I bet they'll be amazing...
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That was really cute Nitya! Do write some more. :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was soooo cute...😊😊
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Soooo sweetttt os.Plzzz post more os having HAPPY ENDINGS because now we r gonna watch some rona dhona on the show.

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that was soooo sweet & cute Nitya.do write more
luv
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Originally posted by: pickachu

Soooo sweetttt os.Plzzz post more os having HAPPY ENDINGS because now we r gonna watch some rona dhona on the show.

fatima

LOL..i know! that's what my friend told me to do too! at first I was going to post a sad one..with a tragic ending..but then I changed my mind, there's too much sadness going on in the show right now anyways. 😆 I'll post another one when i go home today.
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soo beauutifulllllllllll
please make one on ya predictions about what si going to happen after todays episode heh
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LOL...but for that to happen, i have to make khanak cry. 😆 i don't want chappals thrown at me for making it sad.
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great job nitya,beautiful script and have to say u r very talented writer👍🏼

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