Bhagya Rekha - final part......page 84 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks choco, well get ready.......the next part will up in 10 mins!

RK_Fan......I am soooo happy to read your comments! 😃 Actually that gaan hindi took me so much time to right and I still don't think I did the right job.....But thanks for appreciating it 😳!!!
and what that line means is.... Nakul is saying that Yudi does not have the freedom to do anything of his own accord, their dad directs his life completely. In short meaning the King is living Yudi's life and not Yudi!
Next part is coming up.......Thanks for taking the time to read! 🤗
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Re-cap : The evil plan of Sudarshan and Munshiji gets spoilt. Rani writes a letter to her family and sends them money. Her education starts. Several months pass. Rani realizes she is in love with the King. King's engagement is arranges with Princess Yukta Gaekwad.

PART - 9 : AND THEY MEET.......

Rani is very broken hearted! That evening, when she attends the evening aarati in the temple at the palace, she prays to God to give her the strength and to show her the right direction!! The next day evening when Rani goeds to meet Namrata, Namrata notices that Rani is unusually low and quiet. Namrata asks
Namrata : Rani, teri tabiyat toh theek hai na? Teri aankhen kyun itni sooji hai?
Rani : Kuch nahi Yuvraani ji. Bas raat ko acche se so nahi saki.
And then she looks at Namrata for a second and hesitantly asks her
Rani (keeping her tone as casual as she can) : Woh... woh kal yahaan sab Raaja saahab ki mangni ki baat kar rahe the...kya yeh sach hai?
Namrata (excitedly) : Oh my God Rani, mei toh tujhe bataana hi bhool gayi!! Haan, bhaiyya ke liye ek Raajkumaari mil gayi hai. 😃
Rani flinches and closes her eyes but she tries her best to maintain her composure while Namrata continues
Namrata : Tumne sahi sunaa....lekin jo mangni ek mahine baad hone waali thi, woh ab thodi jaldi hogi. Do hafte mei Raja saahab ki sagaai ha! Aur pataa hai mere bhabhi ka naam kya hai??
Rani shakes her head in the negative.
Namrata (announces) : Raajkumaari Yukta! Oh, I am so excited!!!!
Rani : Aap milli hai unse?
Namrata : Nahi. Actually Rani, mujhe isi baat ka thoda darr hai. Kyonki bhaiyya ke jo shaadi ke baare mei vichaar hai, woh ekdum alag hai. Mujhe bas yahi thodi chinta ho rahi hai ke na jaane woh kaisi hogi! Kya woh bhaiyya ko samajh sakegi? Unkaa saath de paayegi yaa nahi? You know, unkaa Raajkumaari honaa hi kaafi nahi hai. Yeh bahut zaroori hai ke Raajkumaari ke vichaar, unki dhristikon, unki bhavnaaye bhaiyya se mile, nahi toh woh aur bhaiyya, kabhi sukhi nahi reh sakenge!
Namrata is lost in thoughts about her brother and then she says...
Namrata : Rani, sagaai ke din tujhe meri madad karni hogi. Mei jaanti hun kapdon mei tumhaari taste bahut acchi hai! Aur tu toh jaanti hai mei yeh traditional dresses kabhi nahi pehenti!! Lekin uss din toh pehenanaa hogaa. Bol, madad karegi?
Rani shakes her head in the affirmative, hiding her pain.

Meanwhile, Yudi and Pramod are playing racquet ball at the club but he can hardly concentrate! Yudi has just come to know that his engagement has been preponed by 2 weeks, he is feeling very flustered! Pramod notices this and finally Yudi shares his misery.
Pramod (shocked) : Kya??? Teri sagaai pakki ho gayi aur tune abhi tak mujhe bataaya nahi?
Yudi : Sorry yaar, mujhe khudh do din pehle pataa chala. Yeh sab ekdum achaanak ho gayaa!!
Pramod (seeing him restless) : Kya problem hai, Yudi?
Yudi is livid : Dammit Pramod 😡 ....I don't even know her!!! Forget knowing....meine toh usse dekha bhi nahi! Aur naa ussne mujhe!!! 😡 How will this work out? Agar woh waisi nahi hai, jaisi mei chahta hun.....phir toh I am stuck for life!!! Mujhe tumhaare jitnaa freedom nahi hai ke I can get out of a marriage!!! Isiliye mei yeh kadam soch samajhkar uthana chahta hun! Lekin yeh baat mere pitaaji ko kabhi samajh mei nahi aayegi....unkaa hamesha se yahi opinion rahaa hai ke, royal blood matters!!! In all honesty Pramod, there is no more royalty!!! Lekin phir bhi hamaare parivaar yeh puraane soch-vichaar, achhar-vyavhaar mei jakde hue hai!!! Aur inn sab ke beech mei, meri bali chadh rahi hai!!!! 😡
Pramod is very concerned! He had always seen Yudi as a very patient, calm and strong man. Very rarely had he seen Yudi angry. Seeing Yudi's anger today, Pramod realizes how important this matter is from him. He says
Pramod : Please Yudi, itnaa negative kyun soch rahaa hai? Maybe she will be all you want and more!! But to be sure about this....tu ek kaam kar. Try to meet her before the engagement. Ab Rajparivaar kaa yeh ek niyyam tujhe todhna hi hoga!! Uss se milkar thoda time spend karne ki koshish kar. Atleast, tujhe thoda toh idea aayega ke woh kaun hai, kaisi hai.
Yudi likes this idea and decides to implement it. They talk for some more time and Pramod helps to lift Yudi's spirits up! Yudi tries to get to meet Princess Yukta but somehow or the other it does not happen and soon the day of the engagement arrives!!! Family and friends are invited and all the arrangements are made. These 15 days are hell for Rani and the King too, albeit for different reasons! The Gaekwad royal family arrive at the palace a day before the ceremony. The King and his family get to meet everyone in the Gaekwad family except Princess Yukta. Finally Yudi has had enough and he decides to seek Namrata's help in meeting with Princess Yukta. He plans that he will get Namrata to invite Princess Yukta to her quarters and arrange a meeting with him.

Meanwhile in the servant quarters, Rani has just showered and shampoed. There is a special pooja in the temple today in honor of the guests and its her duty to accompany Rani maa. She is drying her wet hair when she hears a knock on her door.She opens the door. It is Princess Namrata's personal servant. She gives her the message that Princess Namrata had asked her to be present before her immediately. Seeing the urgency, Rani gets a little tensed. She quickly grabs her dupatta and loosely tying her hair quickly starts towards the palace. She reaches Namrata's room and seeks permission to enter. Namrata calls her in and asks her personal servant to leave. Then she turns to Rani and says
Namrata : Tujhe apnaa vaada yaad nahi? Tune kahaa tha na, ke tu meri madad karegi, tayaar hone mei?
Rani (smiles) : Yuvraani ji, Lekin sagaai toh kal hai.
Namrata : Haan, lekin mujhse yeh pallu, ghaghra... yeh sab sambhaltaa nahi. Toh accha hoga agar ekdin pehle se hi mei thoda practice karlu!! Accha, chal mere saath!
She takes Rani to a huge closet which seems more like an interior room and opens the door. Rani is dumbfounded!! 😲 😲 The room is full of closets filled with rows and rows of clothes of all kinds and all colors! Rani had never seen so many clothes at one place!! And its not just clothes, its accessories of evey kind...shoes, bags, bangles....just about everything!!! Namrata sees her looking so shocked and shaking her says
Namrata : Kya hua??
Rani (swallows hard) : Jee, kuch nahi.... Meine itne saare kapde ek saath kabhi nahi dekhe!
Namrata : I know.....mujhe bhi kabhi kabhi bahut ascharya hota hai, ke mere paas itne kapde kahaan se aa gaye!
Rani : Yuvraani ji, itne sundar kapde hone ke baad bhi aap hamesha woh pant-shirts kyun pehenthi hai?
Namrata : Mujhe yeh kapde bahut boring aur difficult lagte hai, Rani. Aur phir mujhe lagtaa hai ke, yeh sab dark colors mujhko suit nahi karenge.
Rani : Nahi...nahi, yeh aap kya keh rahi hai? Aap peh toh sab kuch suit karega, choti yuvraani ji!
Namrata (with a sly look) : Sab kuch kyun suit karegaa? Mei raajkumaari hun isliye?? Mei uss soch koh bilkul nahi maanti! Apne skin-color ke hisaab seh kapde pehanane chahiye. For eg: Tum mujhse gori ho, isliye tumpe yeh Rani Pink dress bahut suit karega, lekin apne liye mei yeh Sky-blue waala choose karoongi.
Saying this, Namrata picks up a beautiful ghaghra-choli set of a dark pink (also called Rani pink) color heavily embroidered with beautiful zariwork and places it against Rani's skin. Rani quickly moves away saying
Rani : Kshamaa keejiye choti Yuvraani, aapke kapde mei kaise choo sakti hun!
Namrata (surprised) : Arre, kapde choone seh kya ho jaata hai?? (A little irritated) Tu bhi na, Rani.....kabhi kabhi bahut bakwass baatein karti hai. 😡 Mei kitni bhi tumhe paas laane ki koshish karu, tu hamesha door rehne ki koshish karti hai!!
Rani (repenting her words) : Kshamaa chahti hun, choti Yuvraani ji. Mei toh bas mehel ke niyyam kaa paalan kar rahi thi...
Namrat (cuts her) : Bhaad mei jaaye yeh niyyam !!! 😡
Rani tries to cajole her...
Rani : Theek hai, aage se nahi kahungi. Promise!
Namrata suddenly gets an idea! She says
Namrata : Agar meraa ghussa kam honaa hai toh tum yeh dress pehenana hoga!
Rani looks at her horrified 😲 😲
Namrata : Phir shuru mat ho jao! Abhi abhi tune kahaa hai ke tu, aage se aisi baatein nahi karegi!
Rani : Lekin....lekin....yeh kapde!
Namrata : Haan, YEH KAPDE!!!
Rani (strongly protesting) : Nahi Yuvraani ji! Yeh sab mujhse nahi hoga!!
Namrata : Arre Rani, itni ghabraati kyun ho? Kisi ko pataa nahi chalega. Koi tumhe nahi dekhega.
Rani : Nahi, nahi!!! Yeh galat hai. Mei aapke kapde kaise pehen sakti hun?? Mei aisa apradh kabhi nahi kar sakti!
Namrata : Arre, meine yeh kapde kabhi pehne hi nahi, toh yeh mere kaise honge? Theek hai, agar tumhe yeh baat khaaye jaa rahi hai ke tum mere kapde nahi pehen sakti, toh yeh lo, mei yeh kapde tumhe deti hun. Aaj se yeh tumhaare.
Rani (refusing to take) : Yek kya kar rahi hai app!!!! Nahi nahi, mujhe nahi chahiye!!!
Namrata : Oh come one Rani!!! Apni saheli ki itni si baat bhi nahi maan sakti, tum??
Rani : Aap meri saheli ke saath saath yuvrani bhi hai. Yeh baat mei kabhi nahi bhool sakti!
Namrata : Theek hai phir, yeh tumhaari Yuvrani ki angya hai ke tum yeh kapde lo!
Rani stares at her surprised.
Namrata : Kya dekh rahi ho? Tum, Yuvrani ki angya maanogi ki nahi?
Rani shakes her head in the affirmative.
Namrata : Toh phir meri yeh angya hai ke yeh kapde tumhaare hai aur tum abhi mujhe yeh pehenkar dikhao!
Rani : Yuvraani ji......
Namrata (puts a finger on her mouth and says) : Shhhhhhh! Ab koi baat nahi hogi!! Tum badal kar aa jao, mei baaki tayyari karti hun.
Namrata walks into her bedroom and closes the door of the closet.
Rani changes into the dress reluctantly. The dress is beautiful!!!! The soft silk rests beautifully on Rani's body! And the golden embroidery is reflecting on her skin and making it shine. It is a perfect fit for Rani!!! The pink color against Rani's skin will give a special glow to her skin!! She slowly walks out into Namrata's bedroom feeling very concsious. Namrata is waiting for Rani. As soon as she sees Rani she squeals and runs to her
Namrata : RANI!!!!!! WOW! Pataa hai tumhe yeh dress aur yeh color kitna suit kar rahaa hai??? 😳
Rani is not sure of it and just looks at Namrata unconvinced. Namrata brings her to the mirror. Rani looks at herself and is surprised! She is looking quite good and different. Then Namrata says.
Namrata : Ab next, apne baal khol do.
Rani undoes her hair.
Namrata : Yahin baithi raho, mei abhi aati hun.
She walks back to the safe in her closet. She unlocks it and takes out several boxes of jewellery. She brings them all into the bedroom and places them in front of Rani. And then one by one opens the boxes to reveal the contents. Rani is amazed!!!! The boxes will have beautiful necklaces and chokers and long heavy chains and matching earrings and bangles and so much more jewellery!!!!! Rani has never seen anything like that before. She shrinks with fear and tries to get up!!!! But Namrata holds her shoulders and makes her sit back.
Namrata : hey, hey, hey....kahaan jaa rahi ho? Meri daadi hamesha kehti hai ke gehnon ke bagaair, shringar kabhi poora nahi hota. In sab mei se batao, tumhe kya pasand aaya?
Rani (looking very scared) : Nahi....nahi Yuvraani ji. Mei yeh gehne nahi pehen sakti. Yeh mujhse nahi hoga!!!
Namrata : Rani, kyun itni darr rahi ho? Bas thodi der ki hi toh baat hai?? I promise, tumhe koi nahi dekhega inn gehnon mei. Please......bas aaj ek din meri baat maano.
Rani still refuses to choose any jewellery and so Namrata says
Namrata : Theek hai. Toh mei hi chunti hun tumhaare liye!!
She picks up a beautiful necklace and is about to put it around Rani's neck when she notices that Rani is wearing some kind of a beads chain.
Namrata asks : Yeh kya hai?
Rani : Yeh meri gaanv ki saheli, Gita neh mujhe diya tha. Hum donon ne milkar yeh maala banaayi thi. Toh uski yaad mei ussne yeh mujhe diyaa.
Namrata : Thodi der ke liye isse utaar sakti ho kya? Yeh, iss dress pe bilkul suit nahi karega.
Rani hesitates. She does not want to remove it. So Namrata says
Namarata : Aisa karo, thodi der ke liye isse apne haath peh pehenlo. Baad mei phir se gale mei pehen lena.
Rani agrees. She removes the chain and wears it on herleft hand. Then Namrata puts the necklace she chose around Rani's neck. Rani closes her eyes. She is very tensed! Then Namrata picks up a long chain and puts that around Rani. Then she picks up a armlet and slips it up Rani's hand. Next, Namrata adds a maang tikka to Rani's forehead. Then she adds a light touch of makeup on Rani's face (Though Namrata is a tomboy and doees not use any makeup, she is quite aware about how to use it, thanks to her older sister Bhavyata who had taught her all these things) and then she says to Rani
Namrata : Ek baar aankhen kholo Rani.
Rani slowly opens her eyes and is shocked. Her appearance has completely changed!!! She feels she is looking at a different person in the mirror. Rani looks completely transformed!!! She cannot recognize herself!!!
Namrata gives Rani earrings that match her necklace and asks her to wear them. While Rani is wearing them, Namrata goes into her closet and gets pink glass bangles for Rani. She gives Rani the bangles who wears the bangles too.
Then Namrata makes Rani stand up and turn towards her and says admiringly
Namrata : WOW!!!!! Rani, Tum itni sundar dikh rahi ho!!! Mei toh tumhe pehchaan hi nahi sakti ke tum wahi Rani ho. Yeh khule baal, yeh gehne, yeh makeup....tum toh ek raajkumaari lag rahi ho!!! 😲
Rani blushes 😳 and smiles sweetly.
Namrata (says with a frown) : Lekin kuch kami hai! Mujhe lagtaa hai tumhe kuch aur pehnana chahiye.....
And then she suddenly shouts, remembering something!!
Namrata : I KNOW!!!! Mujhe maalum hai what is missing! Tum yahin thehro, mei abhi aati hun.
Rani (scared and tensed) : Nahi nahi!! Kahaan jaa rahi hai aap. Please, mujhe yahaan akele mat chodiye!!
Namrata : Arre, koi nahi aayega yahaan Rani. Mei bas yun gayi aur yun aayi!
And she rushes out. Rani slowly turns to look at herself in the mirror. She is truly amazed at what she sees in the mirror. She had never thought of herself as a beautiful girl but today that description about her seemed very true!! She turns away from the mirror and slowly walks towards one of the corner window's to glance downstairs and see all the arrangements that are being made at the entrance of the palace. Rani is careful so as not to be visible to anyone. She watches servants cleaning the carpets, gardeners arranging flower garlands and bouquets and electricians arranging lights etc. She is lost in thoughts when she hears someone clear their throat right next to her. Rani spins around shocked and finds herself staring into Yudi's eyes!!! 😲😲

The King had walked down to his sister's room to talk to Namrata and get her to arrange a meeting between him and Yukta. He had knocked lightly on her door. When knocking, Yudi notices that the door is slightly open. So he pushes open the door and peeks in cautiously. He notices someone standing near the window. It is not his sister. He is about to turn back when suddenly a thought comes into his mind that maybe she is the princess to whom he is to be engaged! So, he walks towards that person. That person has her back to him and is lost in thoughts. In order to let her know of his prescence, he clears his throat. Immediately that person turns around and looks at him.

Yudi draws in a sharp breath and stares at Rani!!! He had never seen such beautiful eyes filled with so much expression in them!!! Its like the eyes are pouring out every inner thought of her, every secret in her heart............and yes, those eyes were revealing so much to him because Rani is rooted to ground!! She is shocked to see in front of her the one person that she had admired for so long, 😲 the one person that she loved so much, the one person who was always present in her thoughts.....in her heart, the one person who was so close to her but yet so far, the one person that she thought she will never meet!! 😲 Every one of the above feelings were visible in her eyes and it was like he was reading her completely through his eyes!!! He is mesmerized by her eyes.......they are completely lost in each other's eyes so when they are rudely awakened by a loud noise from outside. One of the servants had dropped a ladder!!!!

Hey all.......this part was becoming too big and so I split it up and the rest of the scene is in Part 10.

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Re-cap : Prince's engagement is preponed. He is tensed about it and Rani is heartbroken. Rani is dressed up as a princess when the King sees her.

PART - 10 : MISTAKEN IDENTITY

Rani and Yudi come out of the reverie and Rani quickly moves away from him covering her head up with the dupatta, her back towards him. Once she comes back to reality, her heart and mind are filled with fear and tension and anxiety!!!! 😲 Her heart is pounding!!! Yudi once again clears his throat and tries to salvage the situation.
Yudi (looking at her) : Woh...woh darwaaza khula tha toh hum andar aa gayaa. Hame kshamaa keejiye, agar aap ko hamaare yahaan aane se kathinaai hui hai toh!
Rani shakes her head indicating that he did not create any problem for her.
Yudi : Hum hamaare behen Namrata ko dhoondh rahe the. Woh kahaan gayi hai?
Rani (almost whispering) : Woh baahar gayi hai. Abhi aa jaayegi.
Yudi realizes that he is scaring her and so tries to relax her.
Yudi : Arre, aap itni ghabrayi hui kyun hai. Please relax. 😊
He moves away from her slightly to give her some space. He desperately wants her to turn towards him so he can see her again!! Rani relaxes a bit. She turns towards him slightly as it is improper to show your back to the King. Yudi has his eyes on her.
Yudi : Accha hua aap yahaan mil gayi mujhe. Hum waise bhi aapse baat karna chah rahe the.
Rani is surprised! She does not understand what he means. In her tension, she has completely forgotten that she was dressed up as a princess! And Yudi on his part has already concluded that she was Princess Yukta!
Yudi (with a smile) : Dekhiye na, samay itna badal gayaa hai, hum log 21st century mei hai. Lekin phir bhi Raaj parivaaron ke kuch niyyam nahi badle. Aapko nahi lagta ke abhi bhi kai puraani reetiyon se bharaa hota hai hamaara jeevan??
Rani does not understand the context of his speech but still gives a general answer
Rani : Agar niyyam aur reeti hamaari bhalaayi ke liye hai toh hame avashya paalan karna chahiye. Samay ka uss se koi vaasta nahi.
Yudi likes her response. He has very rarely met women who opine differently from him!!! They always agree with him, either out of fear or in order to impress him! ( 😆 ) Any other woman in front of him would have replied "Aap bilkul sahi farmaa rahe hai, Raja saahab". So he smiles 😊 and asks her again
Yudi : Raj parivaar ka ek niyyam yeh hai ke shaadi se pehle ladhka-ladhki ek doosre ko nahi dekh sakte. Unke parivar waale rishta tay kar dete hai. Aapko lagtaa hai ke iss zamaane mei bhi ladhka-ladhki bina ek doosre ko dekhe, bina ek doosre ko jaane, shaadi ke bandhan mei bandh sakte hai?
Rani : Mere khayaal mei shaadi, do logon ki nahi, do atmaon ka milan hai. Shaadi usi se hoti hai, jiska saath bhagwan ne hamaare bhagya mei likha hai. Toh koi bhi tay kare, hoga toh wahi jo hona hai.
Yudi : Kuch hadd tak jo aap keh rahi hai, sahi hai. Lekin pehle seh ek doosre ko jaanane mei kya buraai hai?
The conversation is relaxing Rani and she sheds some of her inhibitions. She turns a little more towards Yudi but her eyes are still downcast.
Rani : Koi buraai nahi. Lekin kya aapko lagtaa hai ke aap kisi manushya ko kabhi bhi poori tarah se jaan sakte hai? Mujhe lagtaa hai, hum kisiko kitna bhi jaane, lekin hamesha woh ek pehlu hota hai jo anjaana rehta hai. Aur mere khayaal se anjaana rehna bhi chahiye! Tabhi jeevan mei ek apoorv anubhav hota hai, ek adventure!! Nahi toh jeevan bahut ubaane lagta (boredom) hai.
Yudi is surprised 😛 at how eloquent and thought-provoking her talk is and he loves her idea of life!! He also observes that she is able to relax while talking to him and so continues the conversation
Yudi : Lekin yeh mat bhooliye ke adventure kabhi kabhi risky bhi hota hai!
Rani : Haan.....kabhi kabhi adventure mei risk bhi hota hai, lekin woh kehte hai na, "When it gets tough....the tough get going". Toh jinmei himmat hai woh yeh risk se kabhi nahi darenge!
Yudi stares at her!!!! He cannot believe it! That was his all-time favourite saying and all his personal stationary was monogrammed with this saying! Yudi is very glad that some of her thoughts really coincided with his opinions!!! He really warms up to her and they really start having a conversation.
Yudi : Wow...bahut badhiya kahaa aapne. Toh ab bataiye ke aapne apne jeevan mei koi dileri waala kaam kiyaa?

Rani looks up to him and says softly : Abhi wahi toh kar rahi hun aapke saamne khade hoke! 😳
Yudi is stumped by her frank attitude!! He is drawn to her eyes! There was such an expression in her eyes that he cannot look away from them!!! That expression was a mixture of love, shock, honesty, wonder and longing!!! The eyes were communicating with him.....telling things that they were not supposed to tell!!!
Rani looks away from him breaking the eye contact with him. She was becoming very vulnerable and also becoming concsious of her vulnerability. 😳 Yudi tears his eyes away from her because he realizes that he is staring at her!!! He gives her a few moments and then looks back at her. He is loving this conversation with her and decides to push her to a corner 😉 and see her reaction.
Yudi : Theek hai. Chaliye samajhte hai do logon ki shaadi ho gayi. Phir pataa chala ke donon mei dharti-aasmaan ka fark hai. Kisi bhi baat mei unka ek mat nahi hai. Toh phir kya hoga? Ab toh, yeh har roz kaa adventure ho gayaa na? 😆 Tab kaise nibhayenge?
Rani (smiles) : Mere khyaal se tab shaadi ke bandhan ka mehetva kaam aayega. Yeh paaavan bandhan hi shakti dega nibhaane ke liye!
Yudi stares at her. He is impressed. He says softly
Yudi : Jis se bhi aap shaadi karengi, woh bahut hi bhagyawaan hoga!
Rani looks up surprised. Again their eyes meet and Yudi slowly walks towards her. He cannot take his eyes off her face! The confidence, the sensibility, the intelligence of her character is reflecting on her face and making it even more beautiful and attractive!! He comes close to her, very close never letting their eye contact break. She is looking up to him and starts to feel heady with him so close to her!! He wants to hold her hand, but etiquette demands he maintain his distance.
Yudi (softly) : Aur mujhe iss baat ki khushi hai ke, woh khush-kismat ham hai, Raajkumari Yukta!
The words hit Rani slowly and register in her brain after a few seconds. Yudi referring to her as 'Raajkumari' will bring her crashing back to reality!!! 😲. She suddenly understands the meaning of this conversation and she also suddenly remembers that she is all dressed up!!! Her head is still turned up to him but she closes her eyes. Yudi desperately wants to touch her! Suddenly there is a lot of commotion in the corridor just like the commotion in her heart!! Rani listens to it and quickly opens her eyes and looks at Yudi with fear in her eyes. Yudi understands that she is worried that someone might come in. He quickly walks to the door and checks to see what is going on. A few of the guests are just passing the corridor after visiting the Rani maa. As soon as they pass by once again it becomes quiet. He returns to Rani who is looking very tensed!
Yudi : Bas koi yahaan se guzar rahaa tha.
He notices Rani looking all tensed and he says
Yudi : Arre, kya hua Raajkumari??
Everytime he refers to her as Rajkumari it is killing her!!! She tries to move away from him when Yudi forgets all etiquette and grabs her hand, stopping her from moving away!! His touch will be like an electric shock!!! She will try to free her hand from his grip.
Rani (very flustered) : Mujhe jaane deejiye......aap mujhe galat samajh rahe hai!
Yudi : Rukiye, hamaari baat toh suniye............
But Rani is so tensed and worried !! She tries hard to wriggle her hand out and manages to free her hand. Something slips from her hand but she does not wait to see what it is, she rushes out of the room. Yudi is about to follow her when he notices that something has fallen from her hand. He quickly picks it up and starts after her. He comes out of the room and sees that she has disappeared on him!!! He walks quickly through the corridor but does not find her anywhere. After searching for a few minutes he gives up. He shakes his head and smiles thinking "Ekdum ghabraa gayi". While walking back to his room, he checks to see what Rani had dropped. It will be a chain of beads............but only one half of it!

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
WOW 👏 👏 is all i got to say. Brilliant, excellent, it was more than what i expected their meeting to be. So perfect. I can't praise it more. I felt like i was in the room watching their convo...and what brilliant convo you gave them. It was a very sensitive scn and you made it just right. Great job Pragz. 👏 👏 👏


If only something as beautiful is shown in the real show.
Edited by jinc118 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
Thanks JC!!!!!
I am so happy that you liked it!!!
Yes, the conversation was a very important piece! I wanted Yudi to get to know her as a sensible, intelligent young lady, not just as pretty girl! So that later when he remembers her, he remembers her as a beautiful person, not as a beautiful looking person!

Thanks again! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

Pragggg tumne mujhe PM nahi kiya 😡..main tumse naraz hoon 😔.....😆...dear main kal read karungi both parts 😳

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
wow 👏 👏 i don't have word to praise your writing..mindblowing two parts..now i need more parts..
best part of yudi & rani conversation..
waiting for next part..

payal
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
that was too good.... mindblowing

I can't wait for the next part when yudi finds out that she is not yukta but rani..... the conversation was good. This story is way better then the real story..I think as the story unfolds Namarta will be the cupid for the two love birds....
❤️ ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Hey mannu...........ab tu yeh section mei regular ho gayi hai na, toh phir kyun pm? 😉 😆
Jaldi likh.....mei wait kar rahi hun!

Payal : Hey....very glad that you liked it! So the conversation was good, huh??? Next part will be posted over the weekend...I just started working on it 😃

Chocochip : Thanks dear for liking it! I am glad my effort has paid off! Yes....Namrata will have her part to play!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
so beutifully written chapter. 😳 its amazing that in your FF, how well prince and rani's chemistry work together. i could totally picture the scene of them meeting together i my mind. i liked the conversation they were having, that...how similar their thinking is. prince was so curious about knowing more about rani and her opinions 😛 ....
and yes..of course you can call me tan..! 😃

tanzhia 😊

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