Bhagya Rekha - final part......page 84 - Page 11

Pragu 👏 Amazing. I absolutely loves this part. Its long too. 😃 😃 My favorite is the poem at the bottom. So beautiful 😊 I hope the Prince forgives her immediately and realizes that she is not a cheat. 😳

Though now i am wondering, how will Namrata react when she finds out that her brother is in love with Rani. Will she be able to accept Rani as "Bhabhi". Its one thing to be friends with the servant but to make her a part of the family is a different thing. Will Namrata stand by her brother's love for Rani?

Beautiful part Prags. I am addicted to your FF. Do you know how many times i checked the thread today to see if you updated. 😆 Can't wait for the next...

JC

wow wonderful part again praggu 👏 👏 👏 ..actually i have started a feel like to picturise this story as it is 😳 ..with beautiful looking heroinn and hansome hero.. 😳 ..can't waite for next part..really amazing one 👏 ..and i understood the poem she wrote...i really want to read how king will react whether he will burn or keep the letter. 😃 ..please update in weekend soon.. 😃

prag awosome part..i check many times today did you update part..where did you find the poem. well writing wht king think about girl..anamika..

i think namrata mihgt tell him about rani..when she find out her bro.love with her..may be she support him..

😍 waiting for next part..are you going update?

wow another wonderful part😳...no words to explain dear😳....yudi talked to yukta rudely 😆 😆 👏 i thought he would never do tat...

pragz the poem was concise and simple, wonderfully written😳 infact i byhearted the first four stanza's..i was saying it the whole evening nd my little sis asked weather i was chanting some mantra😆 😆

Thanks a lot JC!!!! I am so happy you liked the poem!!! 😃 And yes my parts are really huge!!! It is all because of the readers of my first FF, specially Krishi, Mannu and RK....they always wanted lengthy parts and as a result now I have become used to writing lengthy parts!
Namrata..........lets see what she will do 😉 😆

Sindhu : Your wish is my command!! I will update again over the weekend, on my Sunday morning and Thanks for liking the part! 😳

aksn : Thanks a lot dear!!! 😃 That poem is mine. I wrote it 😛. I will definitely update again on my Sunday morning!

Famy : Thanks for taking the time to read!

All.....Your words are definitely motivating me to write! I appreciate it a lot 🤗
Also, please let me know if the parts are too lengthy and time-consuming. I will modify them as you want.

no problem praggu...lenghthy parts r best and i don't tired to read them.go ahead..i don't know about others but i am flexi with other desission too.. 😳 😃

Praggg🤗

Wow yaar ...bahut aacha part hai ...u know ,,,mere pass utne aache words nahi ..ki main tumhari tarif kar saku ...cos tum...anmole ho ...😳.....mujhe bahut aacha laga ki yudi kitna helpless aur bechan tha 😭...read karte huye dil kar raha tha ...ki abhi apne laptop meh ander aa kar usse bata doo ki teri rani ..pillor ke piche chiphi hai 😆...par main bhi tere yudi ki tarah bebas hoon 😆...i really loved this part ..and poem ...bahut acchi likhi hai 👏..i love this poem ..and am sure ..yudi usse maff kar dega 😳..aur wo sure ho jayega ..ki jo bhi ladki hai mere ass pass hai 😳....bas ab tum jaldi se part post karo ..i can't wait 😳

Manpreet

Prags i was in no way complaining about the length. I love to read you. You write so beautifully that i just want to keep reading. So continue to write long. 😆 OR i will pester you too like RK, Mannu and Krishi. 😆 😆 😆

mindblowing part..i read five times..yudi face shocks to see princess..i thing namrata help him to find his anamika..i love your peom..
waiting for next part..

i also need biger than wht you wring..no problem...

payal

Hey that was too good especially the poem, i loved it... and i also like the detailing that you give in your description of a thing or person... Hope you are updating soon.. I can't to see what happens? All the Best... 😊 😊 😊