Bhagya Rekha - final part......page 84

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tanzhia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#71

wow!!!!!
simply superb!!
i am glad you like my comments 🤗

tanzhia. 😛

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Nimisha

@chocochip

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Posted: 17 years ago

#72

you are a really good writer....keep it up

I have suggestion: Maybe you can get namarta to give rani a makeover and then maybe she can come face to face with yudi, so that he can mistaken her for a princess and then their love story can take a start

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pragalbha

@pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#73

Tanzhia : Thanks a lot!!! 😃

Chocochip : That is exactly what I have planned and am writing. 😃

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someandme

@someandme

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Posted: 17 years ago

#74

praggu...just now read the last part...mein tho tension ke maare idar udar goomna chahthi hoo.. 😆 ..Ding Dong Ding..Ding Dong DING Ding dong ding ding dong ding ding dong ding ding dang ding dong.. 😆 ...so finally love have blossoomed with out knowing each other.. 😃 ..
will wait for the next part..

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Manpreet

@sahib29

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Posted: 17 years ago

#75

Hey Praggg bahut accha part hai yaar 👏...hayye rabba dono ki feelings bhi milti hai 😳....aur tu bhi na ...kaha aa kar rok diya re 😭..ab tu wed ke baad likhegi part ...main kesse wait karungi 😭...main toh sochne bhi lagi hoon ki kya kya hoga jab wo dono milenge 😍

U are best dear 😳...Teri FF ke samne ..serial toh mujhe bakwaas lag raha hai 😕😆...unhe kuch akal leni chahiye tujhse 😆....abhi tak serial meh kuwerji ki shakal dekhne ko hi nahi mili

love u yaar ..jaldi se likh ...i can't wait 😆

Manpreet

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pop77

@pop77

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#76

NICE PART..rani doing good ..finally she realise & accept feeling for yudi..
i read yudi blowed rani for wht? mean next part they going see eachother..
we have to wait until wend..too long..but i am waiting for next part..

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284462

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Posted: 17 years ago

#77

Part 5:

Loved the coronation infact it reminded me a lot of Sundarakandam from Ramayana. Brilliant. Totally loved the fact that rani doesnt come to accept clothes as a servant. 👏

Part 6:

Totally loved the part and the fact that yudi can never forget rani so easily for having helped him twice😳. Okay cant wait to read part 7, to see if they have met or not.

Part 7:

This was a great part and the two dadis stole the show for me for being worldly wise and so sweet😳. Oh i dread what sumitra has signed now and what the evil trio is upto. Great part. And loving ur hindi. 👏 👏 👏

Part 8:

Lucky escape for the evil trio 😆 And the scene where they touch the letter thinking it is rani was 😭

Rani realises her feelings and yudi's marriage is fixed But loved the fact that they both think alike and yipeeeeeee they finally meet next part😃. Cant wait.

Loved reading every part and ur ff is way better than the serial. Great job, keep it up. 👏 👏

shwetha

Edited by sp79 - 17 years ago

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#78

Sindhu : 🤣🤣....Ding Dong Ding.....You are too funny! Love surely has blossemed, though it in only one way as of now! 😆

Mannu : Bahut bahut shukriya!!😃 ......I know serial thoda slow-paced hai, lekin I am sure ke when they pick up the pace, it will be a great serial to watch!!

Payal : Thanks dear. Yes, next 2 parts will be dedciated to Yudi meeitng Rani along with the whole story moving forward!

Shweta : Thanks!!!! Thanks for actually mentioning all the things that you liked and for catching up on the parts!!! I feel it was from the 5th part that the FF became fast paced and a lot of things had happened.

I always look forward for all your comments. Thanks for taking the time to read! 😃

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Nimisha

@chocochip

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Posted: 17 years ago

#79

hey part 8 was excellent.... 👏 👏

I can't wait until rani and yudi meet... 😍 hope you can update both of the parts on wed as the suspense is killing me.....

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Zuzana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#80

Sorry for the delayed reply Pragz!😛

Part5:

You are a perfectionist yaar😳…you googled also….it is so like my husband who goes to lengths to finish a job with perfection! Loved the coronation part and I was reminded about all those mythological movies we used to watch and I imagined the coronation on those basis! And wow they meet for the first time! It had a magical effect!😳 And fair enough when she has such feelings wouldn't want to come in front as a maid!😳

Part 6;

Hai so sweet…Rani is in dilemma about her feelings towards the Prince! 😳And what is this about Queen not hiring literates…will watch for the twist! Yudi does remember Rani..so cute! Hai when will you make them fall for each other!😍

Part7:

Why do I have a feeling that this diamond pendant will land Rani in trouble! 😉 Wow you have brought so much of maturity and class to Rani-maa's character👏….I loved the dialogue 'dhanyavaad karna band karke'..I say that she is my most fav,. Character presently ofcourse it might change after yudi and rani meet!😆 Your hindi is top-class yaar!👏 You can write so gracefully in shudh hindi(spoken by royal family) and switch to village hindi .but somehow I love the gaav hindi .Please do tell me how come you are so good in Hindi I have to read many lines two times to understand! 😆Haila those evils have done their job!😡

Part8: Thanks God!😃 The trios attempt is foiled! Good plotting Pragz!👏 It was such a emotional scene when they get the letter!😭 I really wish to see such tracks in the show also. Loved the frinedship betn Namrata and rani. That was so endearing Pragz! 😳Its good you have taken the story a bit fast..atleast we will be able to see their love story fast!😉 Atlast rani has come to understand her feelings..hope she will do something instead of pining over! And I felt so sad for all the kings who are bound by so much formalities! Eager to know how Yudi would manage this!

Pragz I didn't understand one line yaar ..what u mean by 'Aapki zindagi, pitaaji jee rahe hai' can u explain?😕

Brilliant parts Pragz👏👏👏….eagerly awaiting your next part where yudi falls for Rani!😍