Bhagya Rekha - final part......page 84

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Payal : Thanks dear!!! The next part is 'under construction' 😆 😆 😆. Will be up in a day or so! 😛

RK_fan111 : Missed you!!! I am glad you are here now. Yes, please comment.....waiting for them! 😃

Mannu : Thanks dear, tumhe part accha lagaa! Prince, Rani ko 3 parts ke baad dekhega 😡!

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Nimisha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

hey that wsa awesome

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someandme

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Posted: 17 years ago

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praggu...finally read the last part..i am really amazed of ur writing skills 😳 ...man this is just like our old telugu movies whch had ROyal stories..NTR and ANR movies i watched and i am in completely different imagination of surroundins and chharecters and looks of people ..i didn't watch this serial even a single epi...i like to stick to ur story..otherwise nenu confuse ayipothaanu.. 😆 ..
please do continue soon.. 😃

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Zuzana

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Sorry Pragz for the delay! I will comment part by part! 😃

Part3:

I so loved your description of the palace. 👏 You truly have an amzaing imagination! Kudos yaar! I could visualise it right in front of my eyes! 😳 Rani maa is so kind and she is so charming at this age. Really seasoned and I loved the way they bonded and I am sure Rani maa has a pivotal role to play to bring Rani and yudi together. 😳 cha cha yudi missed Rani 😡 😆 …tu bhi na pargz have become too good in giving hits and misses..just kidding yaar! 😆 Good to hear how the royal family get into business and try to blend with the modern world! Prince has a real good friend!

Part4:

Pragz what do I say..that was a fantastic part…Prince wants to make an album with Rani 😉 …..what an imagination yaar! 👏 And Ranis friendship with princess was a pleasant surprise 😳 …good to see such different plots which we rarely get on the show! I am so eager for Rani maas b'day! 😆

I have become addicted to ur ff dear like before! 😉 It is much much better than the real show! 👏 The positiveness is such heart warming! 😳

Sorry pragz have to rush...will read the 5th part later and come back! 😃

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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chocochip : Thank you!!! Hey, I like your id !! Reminds me of something yummy 😃.

Thank you, Sindhu!!! You are showering me with compliments but I don't know if I deserve that much!!!

RK_fan : Thanks a lot dear!!!! I greatly appreciate your comments! I am gald you liked the album idea!!! I have already thought out some wonderful scenes about implementing that. It will be HIGHLY romantic!!! 😆
Aad yes, don't miss Part 5!! Part 5 is where Rani falls for the King but ofcourse does not realize it yet! 😃

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Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

Pragggggggggggggggg next part likh yaar ..mujhe dekhna hai yudi aur rani ka pyar 😳..jaldi kar na please please 😆

Manpreet

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simpleL0VE38

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Posted: 17 years ago

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@Pragalbha: Woahhhh.. I was just browsing through the forum, and i came across this section with a ton of Kasturians here. 😕 😆 Anyway, I really like the plot of this RKAB so far! 😊 It seems interesting. It's better than Kasturiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. 😡 😡

It took me a while to catch up with the characters and everythig, but I read all your FF parts,and they're wonderful 👏 😃 .. (as usual 😆 )

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tanzhia

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hi praghalba,
your FF is really intersting. you create the environment, that is seem so real and facinating. I think the creators should actually take your scripts and the show will actually start getting more appeal and will be a hit 👏 .
When do u usually post the chapters? please post your part 6 soon!!
looking forward to it.
you rock!keep it up!
tanzhia 😃

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Mannu : Next part aa rahaa hai, bas thodi der mei!

Mike (are you ok if I use your name in the section?) : Hey good to see you here! Yeah, a bunch of us are here 😆. And I agree this serial really has the potential to be something really good. All of us are waiting for that to happen!
And thanks for liking the FF and for the wonderful compliment! 😛

Tanzhia : Thanks a bunch for your kind words!!! 😃 I usually post one part in 3 or 4 days, but this time it got delayed as I was very busy with another serial 😆, but the next part is coming up.....

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pragalbha

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Re-cap : The King suffers from a heart attack and paralysis attack, the heir prince Yudi is crowned the new King, a grand coronation ceremony is held, Rani sees the Prince for the first time when he becomes the King and gets very attracted to him.

PART - 6 : SAVING THE QUEEN

A couple of days will pass after the coronation. All the guests leave. The royal family and the palace are trying to get back to normal. But Rani is far from normal!! 😳 The King has occupied her thoughts, her mind completely! Try how hard, she cannot forget him. And her restlessness of wanting to see him again will shock her too. 😲 Rani thinks "What is wrong with me? How can I forget my status, my position? How can I forget that my future is to continue my education and go back to my village???" And she will try very hard to control her heart and mind from any thoughts about the King. She will decide now is a good time to talk to Pradhan about her education and decides to do it the next day.
Next day, when Rani goes to Rani maa in the morning, she finds Rani maa still lying on her bed eventhough its time for her morning puja. Rani is concerned and checks with the servant
Rani : Kya hua, Rani maa ko?
Servant : Pataa nahi, Rani. Subah se woh aisi hi leti hai.
Rani : Kal raat ko kaisi thi?
Servant : Kal raat woh bilkul theek thi. Unhone raat ki dawaaiyaan lee aur phir so gayi. Subah dekhti hun toh Rani maa ki yeh avastha hai.
Rani goes near Rani maa and calls her out.
Rani : Rani maa........Rani maa, uthiye. Meri oor dekhiye.
The old queen slightly opens her eyes.
Rani : Rani maa.....mei hun Rani. Pehchana aapne mujhe?
Rani maa shakes her head slightly. Rani notices that the queen is sweating profusely and is becoming unconcsious! She gets very concerned and rushes to the servant.
Rani : Jaldi jaa aur Pradhan ji yaa Lakshmi maasi ko bulaakar laa. JALDI! 😒
The servant rushes out. Rani quickly wets a towel with cold water and goes to Rani maa and starts wiping her and trying to bring her back into concsiousness. She constantly talks to Rani maa, making her respond back. While doing that, she goes and checks the medicine box of Rani maa. She sees several medicines there. Rani looks to see the instructions on the boxes. She finds three kinds of medicines that say
"Dosage : One pill in morning, One pill at night"
Rani quickly checks to see the expiration date and her doubt is confirmed!!! The old queen had taken three medicines last night, all three of which had expired!!! 😲 Rani feels very scared and shakes Rani maa, calling her and tries to maintain her in concsiousness. Within a few minutes, both Lakshmi and Pradhan rush into the room.
Pradhan (with concern) : Kya hua Rani maa ko?
Rani (showing him the medicines) : Pradhan ji, turant Doctor ko phone keejiye! Rani maa ne kal avadhi samaapt hui dawaaiyaan khali!
Lakshmi and Pradhan (alarmed) : KYA!!!!! 😲
Rani : Haan!! Mei unhe hosh mei rakhne kaa prayatn kar rahi hun. Lekin jaldi se doctor ko bulaiye!!
Pradhan rushes to the phone and calls the royal physician, telling him the situation. The doctor immediately says
Doctor : Mei dus minute mei pahunchta hun! Unhe behosh mat hone dena. Kisi bhi tarah hosh mei rakhiye!!
Pradhan : Jee, Doctor saab! Jaldi aaiye!
Pradhan (disconnecting the call and looking at Rani) : Doctor saab ne bhi yahi kahaa hai ke, inhe achet (unconcsious) mat hone dena. Tum yahi karti raho, mei Raja saahab ko khabar deke aata hun.
He looks at Rani surprised that she could read and for a second remembers Munshiji telling Rani sahibaa that Rani is uneducated. Then he rushes out. He first goes to Yudi's room, but he is not there! Pradhan checks with the personal servant of Yudi. He tells him that the King just stepped out for his morning workout. Pradhan rushes to the third floor where the gym is located. Yudi is working out when Pradhan interrupts him.
Pradhan : Pranaam Maharaj! Aap se bahut mukhya baat karni hai.
Yudi puts down the weights and wiping his brow says
Yudi : Angya hai.
Pradhan : Raja saahab, Rani maa ki tabiyat kharaab hai.
Yudi : Kya????
Pradhan explains the whole situation. Yudi immediately gets up. There is not one expression or feeling on his face that will reveal to the onlooker the concern that he is feeling in his heart!!!! Its like, in a flash the Prince has become a King!!! A King who keeps his exterior stoic, calm and in control of the situation!!! Pradhan is amazed to see the transformation in the Prince as soon as he became the King!!! 😳 Yudi says to Pradhan.
Yudi : Doctor saahab ko phone kiyaa?
Pradhan : Ji!
Yudi : Aap jaake Doctor saab ki prateeksha keejiye. Woh jaise hi aate hai, unhe andar laiye. Mei Rani maa ke kamre mei ja rahaa hun. Aur kisike dwaara Rani sahibaa ko bhi khabar kar deejiye! Lekin khyaal rakhiye ke pitaaji ko kuch na pataa chale. Waise bhi unki swaasthya (health) abhi utni sudhri nahi hai.
Pradhan (with respect) : Jo angya, Raja saahab!
Yudi walks out rapidly and he is followed by Pradhan trying to keep up with the King's pace! While Pradhan is waiting for the Doctor, Yudi reaches Rani maa's room. As soon as his entry is announced, Lakshmi, Rani and the other servant quickly move away a little to give space to the King. And they all lower their eyes. One of the rules of the Palace is, you cannot look at royalty, unless you are speaking with them. Yudi enters the room and quickly goes to his grandmother. He does not see anybody else in the room. He sits besides her and talks to her softly.
Yudi : Rajmaata, aankhen kholiye.
The old queen does not open her eyes. This time Yudi says
Yudi : Dadi maa, Dadi maa....Mei aaya hun! Aankhen kholiye!
His voice works wonders on the old Queen!! She opens her eyes, recognises him and smiles. Yudi is much relieved! He smiles back at her and holds her hand while talking to her. In a couple of minutes Pradhan walks in with the Doctor. Yudi quickly gets up. The Doctor wishes him and seeks his permission to examine the Rajmaata. Yudi gives him the permission.
He walks back a little giving more space to the Doctor. He is standing right in front of Rani, a little to her left!! She can almost touch him if she extends her hand!!! Eventhough Rani is not looking at him, every movement of his is visible to Rani!! But Yudi is not even aware of Rani's presence! Rani cannot stop herself anymore from seeing him!! She slowly lifts her eyes and sees him. 😳 His side profile is visible to her. Her heart misses a beat again! He is as handsome as ever!! Though he is trying hard to hide his concern, the tension shows in his demeanor. He runs his left hand through his hair and folds his hands across his chest. Rani feels very bad for him and for Rani maa. She closes her eyes and prays "Bhagwan, Rani maa ko kuch mat hone dena!"
The Doctor checks Rani maa's vitals. He quickly gives her an injection. And then he turns to Yudi and says
Doctor : Raja saahab, hame Rajmaata ko hospital le jaana hoga. Mujhe inka stomach wash karna hoga. Waise toh utni problem nahi hoti, lekin inki umr ki wajah se mei koi risk nahi lena chahta. Bas ek choti si procedure hai. Ek din mei woh Hospital se release ho jaayegi. Meine ambulance ka intezaam kar diya hai. Aapki angya ho toh, kya hum Rajmaata ko le jaa sakte hai?
Yudi : Jaisa aap theek samjhe, Doctor saab!!
Doctor : Thank you!
And he calls on his cellphone to the ambulance asking them to come in with arrangements to take the Rajmaata. While they are waiting, the Queen and the princesses walk in. They are brought up to date on the situation. Soon the ambulance people come in and take Rani maa. Yudi, Doctor and Pradhan follow them. Immediately the Queen displays her displeasure and starts blasting Rani maa's personal servant.
The Queen : Tujhe paisen kis baat ke milte hai??? 😡 Khaane aur sone ke sivaay tu kuch karti bhi hai???? Tune Rani maa ko aisi dawaaiyaan khane kaise di? BOL!!!! 😡 😡
The servant shrinks with fear and she is shaking!!! She musters some courage and says
Servant : Ji.....ji mei Rani maa ko dawaaiyan nahi de...deti thi! Unhone khud mujhe woh kaam karne se manaa kiyaa tha!! 😭
Princess Bhavyata : Kaam chor kahin ki! 😡 Ab jhooth bhi bol rahi hai! Pehle jo kaam karna hai, woh nahi kiyaa aur ab Rani maa ko doshi bataa rahi hai!
The Servant vehemently denies and Lakshmi interrupts
Lakshmi : Kshamaa keejiye Yuvrani! Yeh sach keh rahi hai. Rani maa ne isse dawaaiyaan dene se manaa kiya tha, kyonki isse padhna-likhna nahi aata. Rani maa ko darr tha ke yeh kahin ek dawaai ke badle doosri na de de.
The younger pincess, Namrata is watching all this quietly. Seeing that the problem might blow up on her face for hiring illiterate people, the Queen quickly says
The Queen : Theek hai, ab sab jao! Iss vishay ke baare mei baad mei nirnay liyaa jaayega.
She and the princesses leave. Lakshmi, Rani and the servant also follow them out and walk towards their servant quarters. Meanwhile the hospital staff, Doctor, Yudi and Pradhan are walking out when the Doctor says to Pradhan
Doctor : Yeh bahut hi accha hua ke aapne Rani maa ke asvasthatha ka kaaran sahi sahi pehchana aur unhe hosh mei rakhne ki koshish ki. Nahi toh bahut badi samasya hoti!
Pradhan (looking at the Doctor) : Kshamaa keejiye, Doctor saahab. Iss prashansa ka asli hakdaar mei nahi. Yeh bhala kaam toh kisi aur ne kiyaa!
Yudi : Kaun hai woh?
Pradhan : Ji, woh Rani hai. Usine yeh sab kaam kiyaa.
Yudi (stops in his tracks) : Woh ladki jo gaanv se aayi hai?
Pradhan : Ji, wahi ladki.
Yudi is surprised that it is the second time she has helped him out. He says to Pradhan.
Yudi : Mei uss ladki se milna chahta hun. Kal ya parson, usse mere saamne upasthith keejiye!
Pradhan : Jo angya, Raja saahab!
Rani maa is lifted up into the ambulance and taken to the hospital. Pradhan accompanies Rani maa to the hospital. Yudi goes back to his room, with an intention to get ready and go to the hospital himself. He is about to start when Namrata seeks his permission to go to the hospital with him. They reach the hospital. Rani maa will have just undergone the procedure and she will be shifted to a private room. Yudi and Namrata go in to meet her. Namrata goes and sits besides her. She feels so sad to see her grandmother on that hospital bed! And her eyes fill up tears. 😭 Rani maa reaches for her hands and holding them, smiles
Rani maa : Ro kyun rahi hai, pagli? Mei bilkul theek hun. 😊
Namrata : Dadimaa, aapne toh hame bilkul daraa hia diyaa! Yeh sab kaise ho gayaa?
Rani maa (sighs and looks at her and Yudi) : Galti meri hi thi. Pataa nahi meraa dhyaan dawaaiyon ke expiry date par kaise nahi gayaa!
Namrata (angrily) : Nahi Daadi maa!!! Yeh galti aapki nahi! Yeh galti maa ki hai! 😡 Pataa nahi unhe kya obsession hai, hamesha anpadh logon ko mehel mei kaam pe rakhti hai!!! Agar aapke paas padhi-likhi naukraani hoti, toh aaj yeh naubat hi nahi aati!
Yudi (looking at his grandmother) : Namrata sahi keh rahi hai. Yeh galti ab dobaara nahi honi chahiye. Woh toh saubhagya se woh ladki Rani ne yeh dekh liya ke aapne expired medication liyaa, nahi toh....
Rani maa interrupts him surprised..
Rani maa : Rani??? Rani ne mujhe bachaaya?
Yudi : Ji.
Rani maa : Lekin woh kaise jaan saki ki meri tabiyat, expired medication ki wajah se kharaab hui thi?
Namrata : Kyonki, Rani padhi-likhi hai, dadimaa!
Both Rani maa and Yudi are surpised.
Rani maa : Rani, padhi-likhi hai?
Namrata : Haan, ussne high-school pass kiya hai!
Rani maa : Agar woh padhi-likhi hai toh, Rani sahibaa ne usse naukraani ki tarah kaise rakh liyaa?
Namrata shrugs her shoulders and says
Namrata : Pataa nahi. Lekin uskaa padhna-likhna hamaare liye ek badaa vardaan banaa!!
Yudi smiles and agrees. He checks his time and realizes that he is getting late for a meeting. He says to his grandmother
Yudi : Accha dadi maa, ab mei chalta hun. Shaam mei phir milne aa jaunga!
Namrata decides to stay a little longer. Yudi kisses his grandmother's forehead and leaves. Namrata and Rani maa continue to talk.
Namrata : Dadimaa, Rani ne jo aaj kiyaa, uske liye usse kuch uphaar dena chahiye!
Rani maa : Sahi kahaa tune, mere ghar waapas aate hi woh kaam karenge.

That night Rani cannot sleep. She is so dejected that once again her intention to confront Pradhan has to wait. With Rani maa in this condition, she could not bring herself to talk about her issues. And to top it, whenever she is alone her thoughts directly turn to Yudi! She suddenly feels very alone and cries herself to sleep thinking of her mom and daadi. 😭
The Rajmaata stays under observation overnight in the hospital and the next day she is discharged and taken to the palace. She has recovered very well and is almost her old self! As soon as she settles back, she decides to call for Rani. Yudi says he would also like to meet her. Her personal servant is dispatched to fetch Rani. Rani accompanies the servant back to Rani maa. Rani maa opens one of her jewellery boxes and takes out a beautiful diamond pendant. She decides to give that to Rani. She is about to show it to Yudi, when his cell-phone rings. It is Pramod. Yudi takes his call.
Yudi : Haan Pramod, bol.
Pramod : Hey Yudi, Rajmaata ab kaisi hai?
Yudi : Woh acchi hai. Abhi abhi mehel waapas bhi aa gayi hai. She is doing good.
Pramod. Good!
He hesitates for a second and says
Pramod : Yudi, Sorry aise samay mei tujhe takleef de rahaa hun.....ummmm.....if you don't mind.....teri madad chahiye.
Yudi : Arre, bol na, kya hai?
Pramod : actually woh presentation jo humne finalize kiyaa, uss mei ek critical problem aa gayi hai. We need your help. Kya tum aa sakte ho?
Yudi : Abhi?
Pramod : Haan, abhi!
Yudi turns around to see his grandma. She is doing good and so he answers back.
Yudi : Theek hai, abhi thodi der mei pahunchta hun.
Pramod : Thanks a lot buddy!!!
Yudi : No problem.
He ends the call and tells his grandmother that he has to leave for an emergency. Rani maa understands and gives him permission to leave. Yudi is about to leave and walks towards the door and Rani and the servant will just turn the corner into the corridor in which Rani maa's room is present. Rani sees the King walking out of the room. She freezes !!! 😲

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