FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 43

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update Rosh!!
CR killed herself-deserves it-the evil woman!!
YuRa moment-very hmm........................
P.S. I read on the previous page about u asking for cameos!! i'll tell you-introduce each one of us as cameos!! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
what role will we have Purva? you-know-whos ex-girlfriends?????
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: usmrasul

what role will we have Purva? you-know-whos ex-girlfriends?????



Noin noin Usma, Your you-know -who's past was cryshhhhhhtal clear like diamond the only and pure love was,is and will be Rani ,so i think Rosh can introduce you as his ''kumbh kay melay main bichri hui sister '' 🤣 Chalay ga kya ya doray ga?🤓 🤣i guess perfect rahy ga.👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh... CR captured red handed and died too!!!!! Really thrilling part!!!

But this Rani..... God this girl cant stop even going into nurves in FF also. Why she is caring about person; who dont care about her???
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh I loved it and especially that CR got what she deserved and Yudi and RS brought out the truth about her in front of everyone. But wish Yudi did not give in to Rani's Zidd everytime and this time he plans a surprise Godbharai within the family that way he keeps Rani's wish and his own wish.
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART - 39 (Last Part)


The Next morning Yudi comes with a huge grin.

Rani: Kunverji, kya baat hai? Aaj aap bahut khush lag rahe hai?

Yudi: Baat hi kuch aisi hai! Hum abhi abhi Pitaji se baat karke aa rahe hai!

Rani: Pitaji se baat? Kis bare mei?

Yudi: Aapke bare mei! Aapne jo farmaish ki uss bare mei!

Rani: Kya kaha unhone?

Yudi: Yahi ki godhbharayi kissi bhi halat me nahi rukegi! Kyunki ussi waqt pitaji Saksham aur Niharika ke shaadi bhi goshit karenge! Toh pitaji ne aapke baat taal di!

Rani: Lekin-

Yudi: Lekin wekin kuch nahi! Pitaji ka faisla aakhri faisla!

Rani once again is about to interrupt something but Yudi loudly and clearly says: Pitaji ne bas aapke bare mei sochne ko kaha..Kissi aur ke bare mei nahi!" Rani jo hua so hua..aap unn baton ko bhool jaayiye aur humari beti ka achi tarah se kahayal rakhiye!

Rani gives up…Yudi triumphantly says "Yeh hui na baat"

On the day of Godhbharayi, the function is celebrated as never before, thousands of people gather to witness the occasion as there had been no such function conducted in the recent years! The last they had seen was 25 years ago of CR's! Rani was the cynosure of all the eyes present! Yudi feels so excited and happy looking at Rani, he just cannot take his eyes of her!

Amma fulfills all the rasams along with Dadi, Niharika ,Bhavyata and Bhumi.

After all the rasams are over, Amma asks permission from RS to leave along with Rani! As Amma felt it would a different atmosphere for Rani and could easily get over with what had happened! Considering the peace for Rani, RS agrees to send Rani with Amaa!

When Yudi gets to know of the news, He straight away declines the offer and says his Rani would be with him only, but gives to RS's pressure!!

Amma teasingly promises to send back Rani as soon as the kid is born!

Almost too early for Yudi, it is evening; Amma takes Rani along with her to the village!

Night Time (Palace):

Yudi had been discussing about the school which was opening shortly in the village! He was elated that he actually fulfilled his vow of building a school in the village they stayed after marriage! He goes to his room to share this news with Rani as she also played a major role in the construction of this school calling out for her "Rani, Rani..Idhar dekhiye –" He stops his sentence in the mid way when the realization hits him strongly that Rani was in village and not with him! He felt a sort of emptiness surrounding him! This was the first time they stayed away from each other after marriage! The entire room was filled with her fragrance yet, she was not there! The whole room will was filled with their memories..Yet she was not there to create the memory! Every time, he tried to think of something else, his thoughts invariably rested on Rani! Ultimately, he could do nothing else….He gave in to feeling s he had bottled up for so much time and instantly she filled his thoughts! He wondered – how she was and what she would be doing…"silly" he told himself because it had only been few hours since she left!

Finally, He succumbed himself to what he was thinking with a crooked smile crossing his face imagining Rani's reaction over it!!

Village:

Rani was standing near the window and looking at the moon thinking of Yudi until she notices his photo on the table beside. She picks the photo up and starts taling to it "Aap kaise hai? – Hum bilkul teek nahi hai. Aapne khana khaya? – Yahaan aapke bagair khana bhi acha nahi lag raha hai. Mann toh karr raha hai ki aapse issi waqt mile, par kaise? Aap humse milne ke liye ka baa rahe hai?"

Suddenly she hears some noise out near the window..She goes to see the reason behind the noise, she is unable to see anything, she is about to return, she hears it again..She peeps out the of the window to get a shock of her life!! Yudi was trying to come into the room through the pipeline; she comes out of the shock when she hears him say "Rani, haath dijiye"

Rani helps him to get into the room. The next thing she knew was she was in his arms, his safe arms where she belonged and longed each and every second she spent without him to be there. He kisses her forehead and again hugs her!!

Yudi: Pata hai, humne aapko kitna miss kiya, ek ek pal kaatna mushkil ho gaya tha!

Rani is overwhelmed by what he had just said..She stands on her toes and kisses his cheeks and hides her face in his chest!

Yudi too had no words to describe this emotional moment! He is just rejoicing that moment!!

Rani: Hime miss kiya?

Yudi: Bahut

Rani: Kitna?

Yudi raises his eyebrows. With one hand held around her waist, he traces the other hand along her cheeks and says: Hum yeh nahi batayenge ki aapko kitna miss kiya, yeh batayenge ki kya kya miss kiya!!

He again traces his finger along her cheeks saying "Humare choone par yeh gaal laal rang jo leta hai naa…who bahut miss kiya" Rani's cheeks had turned the deepest shade of crimson!

He traces his fingers over her lips and says" Humare baton ko sun ne pe ek pyaari si muskurahat aati hai naa, use bahut miss kiya"

He traces his fingers on the strands of her hair and says" Yeh hawa ke jhonke se jab yeh lehraten hai toh saath mei humare mann ko bhi behakati hai…Yeh humne miss kiya"

He touches her eyes and says" Humesha hume palkon me bitane waale aapke inn bade bade ankhon ko bahut bahut miss kiya!" aur aase jude hue harr ehasaas ko miss kiya! Waise Rani, jaisa humne socha, hume reaction bhi waisa hi mila! Kitne hairan ho gayi thi aap hume dekh kar!

Rani comes out of the reverie he created and sternly says: Waise aap kidki se kyun aaye? Darwaze se kyun nahi? Aap ab jayiye aur darwaaze se aayiye!

Yudi: Lekin Rani, Amma

Rani: Amma ko hum kahenge ki humne aapko yahaan bukaya! Ab jayiye!

Yudi smiles and agrees to come through the door. Amma is literally shocked to see him and is too happy when he says that he wanted to take care of wife and child.

And so the days pass by, where Yudi takes for morning walk and saw to it that all her wishes were fulfilled and flooded her with gifts!

4 years later:

A kid is running everywhere around the palace and a woman is chasing him!

"Kunver ruk jaayiye….Yeh khana kha lijiye, hum kitne der aapke peeche bhagen? Hum bahut tak gaye hai?

"Maa , aap hume kabhi nahi pakad sakte hai aur hume khana bhi nahi chahiye!"

Rani calls oout" Pakadiye pitaji"

RS: Lo! Shuru ho gaye yeh dono..Har subah yahi…Bahurani aap toh jaante hai naa iss nanhe se shaitan ko pakadna humare bass ki baat nahi hai!!

Rani: Kunver ruk jayiye!

The kid stops and challengingly looks at her : Maa toh kya iss baar hum pitaji ke saath godsawari me jaa sakte hai? Vaada kijiye, Hum aapko bilkul tang nahi karenge!

Rani: acha teek hai.

The kid runs towards Rani, hus her and tells "Humari pyaari maa"

Rani feeds him after which he happily goes off to play! Rani is totally lost in her own world thinking about her son – Advay was indeed like his name – unique! Rani was so lost in her thoughts that she had been walking backwards..She realized that when she bumped into something hard and was about to fall…When she opened her eyes…she found herself in Yudi's arms! The magnetism still existed…They were totally lost in each other's eyes! He lifts her up saying" Doctor ne kya kaha? Aap iss halat me bhaag nahi sakti..Phir bhi?

Rani: Lekin woh Advay baat manta hi nahi-

Yudi: haan, bilkul apne maa par gaya hai! Apne hi zidd par ada hai! Iss baar to beti de dijiye!

Rani blushed...Yes they were in fact expecting their second child in few days time!

Time had changed so much!

NiSha had gotten married and they had a son named Arush!

RuMi after the dramatic exit of CR changed themselves for their living and tried to follow RS's and Yudi's instruction carefully! They too had a son – Adarsh!

Bhavyata still was the arrogant herself but was trying to follow the footsteps of Niharika!

Munna had gone abroad for his higher studies his idol being Yudi! Rani took care of Amma and Dadi!

A few days later, YuRa were blessed with a baby girl! Yudi named her Adiya meaning jewel! She was indeed the jewel of his eyes!!

RS's was reliving his youth – His only pass time was playing with the kids which he failed to do when Yudi was a kid!

Yudi had become the king – he was a perfect and the best king the kingdom had ever seen!

Rani was Yudi's strength ans he was hers! Her world now revolved around him and the kids..She still admired his charisma secretly!!

Every morning Rani's prayer started off with the well being of family bonded with love forever! It was always granted!

PS: With this I end my FF, I hope you all liked it..For the previous comments, I will reply now! Thanks for taking the pain so far to read all the parts! Ab vote of thanks bhi baad me karoongi!😳

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Hey Rosh ,

That was really zabardast Update yaar🤗 ,i love the way u explained that how Yudi got to know about truth even RS was aware.
CR commits siucide...huh....she better be...

Lekin yaar tunay RS ki both wives ko maar dia ?ab woh akelay kya karaingay ?😆jokes apart ...i like that he is with our YuRa.

Aur yeh ending kahan ki hai ?😡😆i wanna read more n more ......God bharai in room?😍kab hai ....mujhay invitation hai ya nahin?😕😳😆

Update soon...dnt make us wait for so long.😃



Thanks so much Faiza baji! I'm really happy for standing by me for the entire update!🤗
Kya karoon..Waise sach kahoon toh iss angle me socha hi nahi..But CR deserved it naa?
Haan ab readoooooo Invitaion mil gayi naa?

Teri farmaish poori ab padke toh bata ki kaisa tha!Embarrassed
Ab mujhe lamba wala comment chahiye! No escapes haan?

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh,

What no godbharayi? Now fair. 😲😲
Yeh nahi ho sakta. There should be double celebration now that we have gotten rid of evil CR
Let Yudi change his mind......please, please, please. 😕



Thanks Bobbie..🤗

Just read on then you'll know why no godhbahrayi!!! I hope you are satisfied now!




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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sadia sheikh

didi cr commits suicide OMG i am gob smacked. this was a wonderful update i felt really sorry for yudi and RS loved the way they explained everything. the end part was really cute but no ghodbarayi??? how can that be
ps is BR also dead or is she alive



Sadia, Thank you for you lovely comments! They always mean a lot to me!😃
Godhbarayi - How can I cancel it when you were anxiously waiting for it?
PS: BR is dead!

Originally posted by: usmrasul


😲 you are trying to suicide too? honestly, its a gobar effect on you if you bring unnecessary cameos



Usma, honestly, iam no cometition with Sampurn..He can carry on his way and I have carried it on my way!
I hope I have justified it!

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia

Awesome update Rosh!!

CR killed herself-deserves it-the evil woman!!
YuRa moment-very hmm........................
P.S. I read on the previous page about u asking for cameos!! i'll tell you-introduce each one of us as cameos!! 😉



Thank so much Purva dear!😃
PS: Purva, I'll do it the next time! Ek saath itne imli's toh Kiran di aur mujhe heart attack aajayenge!😉🤣

Originally posted by: darshana23

Rosh... CR captured red handed and died too!!!!! Really thrilling part!!!

But this Rani..... God this girl cant stop even going into nurves in FF also. Why she is caring about person; who dont care about her???



Thanks Darsh.

No No..My Rani is very sweet! See what Yudi made her do!😳

Originally posted by: Juna04

Rosh I loved it and especially that CR got what she deserved and Yudi and RS brought out the truth about her in front of everyone. But wish Yudi did not give in to Rani's Zidd everytime and this time he plans a surprise Godbharai within the family that way he keeps Rani's wish and his own wish.



Juna Di🤗....Welcome..I missed your comments terribly!
Di, i hope this time I have lived up to your expectation..I did not dare to cancel the godhbharayi!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh
Darling
why?
getting too busy? oh, your FF ended so soon, i really wanted much more yura scenes from you***sniff******
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: usmrasul

Rosh
Darling
why?
getting too busy? oh, your FF ended so soon, i really wanted much more yura scenes from you***sniff******



Usma no worries...The other one is still there!😳
How did you like this part?😳🤔


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