FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 45

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Juna04

Rosh just loved every bit of your FF and absolutely loved the ending. So good to see that YuRa live happily with their small cosy little family



Thanks Juna di! I'm really very glad that you liked it! I hope I lived up to your expectation!
But, I think I never separated YuRa in my whole FF nor did I create misunderstand unlike the one who gives us the story one! I think that's is what you all wanted! I'm really very happy to have completed one FF!
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Posted: 15 years ago
didi yeh kya your ending your FF yeh kais ho sakta hain i reallly loved the last part but still app kaise end karsakte hain
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Posted: 15 years ago

Rosh...I just read this lovely end of the FF. It was indeed lovely and awesome! I won't complain why you ended it...becoz you really justifiedthe end, very logical and magical. But quite honestly, I would indeed miss it. But thanks a ton for this beautiful story.....your YURA with 2 beautiful kids makes me a happy reader!!😃😃😃😃

Thanks so much dear!!👏👏👏🤗🤗🤗❤️👍🏼❤️👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ruhik

Dear Rosh,

Yours FF was outstanding!!! When good things end...you miss it very badly....I am going to miss your Dastann!

Hope soon you come out with something new!!! I truly enjoyed reading your FF and Thank You for giving us some relief from Samprun!!

Keep Writing!!!

ruhi



Ruhi 🤗

That was really sweet of you you! No worries...Doosra wala hai naa!😳
Thank you for reading my FF! I'm really glad that I was able to give you some stress relief!😳


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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Rosh!! I am so very sorry,for not commenting earlier!!
Well,mein kya kahoon? I just loved the way you wrapped things up in a nice wrapper in the end!!
CR done away & what cute kids!! Haila,2nd child bhi? And the same romance-hmm......................
Nikki-Saksh, RuMi all settling into good married happy lives,I say!!
I just wanna say that u're FF has been awesome,hun & me lucky here to have read it!!
The forthright,confident Rani, simple Yudi-the perfect ingredients to a zabardast FF!
I so wish that u could continue further,but since u've ended it nicely,me not complaining!!
Lookin forward to more writing from you!!
P.S. Loved the kids' names-so very queet (cute + sweet) !!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Rosh ,

Wowie!!! What an Update ....Absolutely lub it and ofcourse lub you for writing such a wonderful part .🤗
☺️ Thanks a lot Faiz.. I'm really glad that you "Lubed" it.😳
☺️1.First , Godbharai.....Loved this Yudi who made her convince and the function was indeed royal .👏
Haan, You all wanted it that way and were pretty tired of seeing Rani's mahantha right? Thats why introduced Godhbharayi here!😃
2. Amma took her and Yudi impatient ?😆Still love the thing .
HeHe, Kya karen Adat nahi usko Rani ke bagair rehna, issiliyye woh restless aur amma chedofying him!😉

3. Awwww......Pipe charh kay aaya us say milnay🤣( like my imagination wala Yudi) ....Absolutely loving this passion of him😎..and the way she was missing him and then how she reacted to see him...aw...soooo cute😳 .....i loved those dialogues of him where he expressed how he missed her.😍
😃 I was actually a little tired of this Rani - Humesha rona dhona and they never missed each other yaar Ghusse me aake yeh sab likh diya! I'm really elated that you liked it dear!
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4.Awww.....YuRa got baby boy first ....Rani's wish was granted😍Chalo .....Bobbie ka Yuvraj tumharay FF main aagaya. kitna Natkhat hai .....apni maa ko tang karta hai ..hehehhhe.....but i know he would be like his father ....Horse riding seekhnay jaa raha hai na.👍🏼
😳 Bilkul apne papa pe hi gaya hai, issiliye maa ko sirf thoda hi tang karta hai!

5. Rani was again expecting ...choooo.....chweeeettt.....i knew is baar Yudi ki beti hi aani thi....aur aagai na.😍
Haan Haan Yudi ka wish bhi poora hona hai naa..Kitne baar Rani ka wish poora karte rahoongi?😆

Loved the way You winded up your FF .....it was very well described by you .....
Thank you soooooooooooo much my dear! And here I have to say that thanks for standing by my side and commenting or criticizing in every update! I'm really thankful for your gesture! I hope I haven't disappointed you in any of those parts!🤗

And i love 4 'A's gang😆 .....Sab kay bachon ka Naam A say shru hota hai na.....Chotu ''A'' gang😈 ....RS is lucky ...aur haan Rani taking care of Dadi n Amma ...wow.......so touching ......and Munna went for higher studies ....cool😎👍🏼
I thought ki there must no descrimination in name as well and they should be ahead in everything! Atleast the kids should stay with other without fighting - toh the starting point was name...Sab ko ek hi letter se start kar diya! I think it had meaning too!! You know, I had written this part long long ago, only thing I could not post it because I was searching for a preoper name...And when I found themI just posted! I hope you liked it! I'm really glad that you did not find it weird!😃
As for Munna, his inspiration ofcourse is Yudi! - He is also grown up and has to take responsibilities right?

I know that Raj parivar will always be happy in our imaginations.😍
"And they lived happily ever after" - that is what we have been hearing in the end of every Fairy tale and this is also one according to me - though the CV has destroyed it completely!

At last ....i really want to thank you for entertaining us through this wonderful FF🤗 ...I'll be waiting for your other FF's update .😉
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 Thanks Faiza! i will try to write the other one soon!

PS: Waisay YuRa ka beta apni maa ko khanay kay liye itna tang kyun karta hai ?😉 Kahin Roshni pay to nahin gayi uski aadatin?😛🤣
Spot on!😎 Acha yaar I confess, yeh meri hi adat thi aur hai! Mumma ko bahut pareshaan karti hoon khaane ke maamle mei! Bechari tang aa jati hai!😳


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh,

Very nice ending. But what is with the names that all begin with letter A. Pura Ka Pura Khandaan letter A se start hota hai.
But I really liked the way you ended you FF. 😛😛
When is the next one coming. 😉😃



Thanks a lot Bobbie 🤗
Haan, I purposely started the names with A - I thought it would look nice and I guess they had meaning as well!

The next one - Let me see!😉😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey that was a fab ending
loved every bit of it
i am sorry for commenting so late
kya kariun aisi hi hoan
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yay!

Rosh, me first! 😉 (I mean I finished urs b4 u finished mine...lolz)

Super duper ending! CR deserved wat she got. The Shishodiya Kingdom was liberated of an evil woman albeit a good queen. Wow, the A-gang was cute. Indeed, one girl and three guys, the girl wud surely be pampered a lot if the story were to continue.... *sigh*

Anyways, thanks for entertaining us wid this lovely FF. You started after me and ended before me, and I'm still nowhere near finishing. I think I shud learn something from you.

How abt a new FF now?

P.S: Sorry for the delayed comments. 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: darshana23

Rosh I really loved this part. Specially when Yudi came to meet her by pipe and then took care of her. And after 4 years their kid is making noise to go for horse riding with Yudi. Shhhoo shweet!!!

But I didnt know that u r going to end this FF. So thats what surprise to me... Yaar kya kare, we never get good scenes on YuRa. So iss forum ke FF hi to ek sahara hain.......



Thank you so much Darsh!! I'm very glad that you liked it!😳

I myself did not know I was going to end it...but good that I did...Did you see where RKAB has gone😭😭

Haan Darsh, Lets see if another FF could do!😉 and thank you so much for your encouragement!🤗

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