FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 41

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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 37

RS and Yudi are stunned hearing this.

Yudi consoles Rani saying: Rani aap chinta mat kijiye, Iske peeche zaroor koi wajeh hogi.

Rani accepts the reason the reason as she knew that CR loved BR more than anyone and hence she could not have played with her life, yet for the first the first time her mind was saying something different and unacceptable to her and the family!

A week passes by...Only two weeks are left for the godhbharayi... The arrangements are going on in rapid pace.

One hand CR refuses to come out of her until her plan is successful. She expresses the same concern to RuMi who are least bothered and Bhavyata doesn't care a bit either! So CR had to do something to save her own skin and the day she targeted was the Godhbharayi when the palace would be packed with people and not a single soul would ever doubt her! That was her final plan!

RS and Rani were sitting and discussing about the work in the main hall with the TV on…Suddenly both of them hear a very familiar voice being interviewed by the reporter, both of them see..Rani is pleased while RS is shocked to see Saksham on TV! Saksham's project had been a huge success overnight and it was going places with the new computer programming which he introduced!

Rani thinks it's finally the time to talk to RS..She keeps staring at the TV! RS notices this and asks her: Aise kya soch rahe hai?

Rani: Jee...Kuch nahi Pitaji...Bas Niharikaji ke bare me soch rahe hai!

RS (confused): Niharika ke bare mei?

Rani: Jee, Pitaji...Aapne hume Niharka ji ke koi acha rishta doondne ke liye kaha tha na...Ussi ke bare mei soch rahe the!

RS: Hum kuch samjhe nahi

Rani: Pitaji – Kyun na hum Niharika ke liye Saksham ji ko chune? Ab toh unki status bhi bad gaya hai…We koi Raja se kami nahi hai! Aur we pade likhen hai, Ache sanskar hai, Dekhne me bhi ache hai! Aur hum unhe kai saalon se jaante hai ki we kaise hai..Toh kissi anjane admi ko dene se behtar hum Saksham ko hi chunte…

Rani starts stuttering in fear of rejecting but still continues what she wants to say about accepting Saksham.

Rani: Pitaji, aapne hume bhi toh sweekar kiya na. Agar dekha jaaye toh Saksham humse sau guna behtar hai –

RS: Bas kijiye..Aap aapne aap ko kyun niicha dikahne ki koshish kar rahe hai! Aaj aapne yeh baat kar liya – aainda dhyaan rakhiyega ki galati se bhi aise baat karne ke liye anumati nahi hai aapko!

Hum zaroor iss bare me sochte hai.

Rani feels overwhelmed and proud of RS..She feels the very lucky to get such a loving family!

RS casually while walking towards his room looks at Niharika happily talking over the phone to someone! He goes to her room seeing that she disconnected the call…

RS: Hume pata hi nahi chala ki humari beti itni badi ho gayi hai…

Niharika is utterly shocked by his behavior…never once had RS talked to her so lovingly..What had happened to him all of a sudden!

RS continues: Humne aapke liye Var doond liya hai!

Niharika: Lekin Pitaji…

RS: Lekin kuch nahi..Arrey Bhai..Hume bhi toh humare damaad dekhna hai! Pata hai woh kaun hai?

Niharika: Kaun hai Pitaji?

RS: Saksham…Aur kaun!! Agle hafte hum unse baat karenge! Taaki godhbharayi ke din hum yeh khush khabar bhi saath mei ghosith karenge!

RS leaves and Rani with a smile is listening to all the conversation! She goes into the room to see a blushing Niharika: Kyun nanad ji…Aapko yeh rishta manzoor hai? Agar nahi hai toh bata dijiye..Hum Pitaji se baat karte hai…

Niharika is very happy …She hugs Rani and with gratitude she tells that she would never forget this favor which brought all the happiness to her life!

Yudi returns home very late from the office, tired and disturbed!! He goes to the room to see Rani sleeping (thankfully)! For the first time, he wished she was asleep because she would find out the tension on his face which he could not tell! He had to talk to RS first!

He slowly goes and sees RS doing his work while CR trying to concentrate on the book she is reading..He sees an unknown tension or rather fear on her face…something he did not understand!

Yudi: Pitaji..Aap humare saath chal sakte hai? Hume project ke bare me kuch dikhana hai!

RS understands what Yudi wants to talk about and swiftly goes with him!

RS: Kunver, aapko pata chal gaya ki who kaun hai jo badibahurani ko chot pahunchna chahta hai!

Yudi: Teek se nahi pitaji..abhi bhi raaz hai! Lekin job hi karna hai hume aaj hi karna padega! Kyunki Godhbharayi ke din kuch galat hone waala hai! Jo bhi ho..Woh godhbharayi ke din ko chun sakta hai taaki hume kissi pe shak nahi aaye!

RS: acha, jaldi batatyiye ki aap kya karne waale hai!

Yudi: Pitaji..aap toh jaante hai ki uss din jab site pe aag lag gaya tha..jis admi ne aag lagaya, woh marr gaya..Lekin woh baat sirf aap aur hum jaante hai..Ab uss admi ko zinda karna hai.

RS: Zinda karna hai? Hum kuch samjhe nahi!

Yudi: Matlab yeh ki saare mehal ko pata chalna hai ki uss aadmi ko humne pakada hai…

Yudi tells the entire plan..RS approves of it and both of them start into the plan!

Yudi and RS walk in the palace making noise and calling all the guards! Hearing the noise, CR, RuMi , Bhavyata, Niharika and Rani also come to main hall!

Yudi: Guards…Aap yeh baat dhyaan se sunn lijiye!! Ek aadmi ko humne kaal kotri me band kar rakha hai..Aap kisi ko andar jaane nahi denge! Samjhe?

Guards nod and immediately take position.

Yudi purposely goes near Rani and says: Rani, ab aapko chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai! Jis aadmi ne uss din aag lagaya tha, humne usse pakad liya hai! Wahi ab Kaal kotri mei bandh hai! Subah hote hi hum uss admi se poochtach karenge!

CR is very confused as she was the one who killed him but how could he be alive, she thinks someone saved him! She thinks she has to kill that man by night so that no enquiry takes place!

All of them go their respective rooms!! Yudi and RS stay back and talk for a while!

It's almost midnight, No lights are on except for one light lamp… the room of the Kal kotri opens..To CR's surprise, she sees the guard fallen asleep! She takes her gun and nears the man..She sees that he is covered in blanket..She removes the blanket and sees that he was wearing a mask! Without further delay..She straight away shoots him on his chest!! She then talks to herself "Hum kabhi nahi haar sakte" But the man gets up and removes his mask and it is Yudi…

PS: Updated after a long time! Hope you like it!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Haila Rosh,itna suspense??
CR ki baj rahi hai pungi!!
Yudi to bohot hi smart aur intelligent nikla!!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh ,

Thank you so much for updating it after a long time .🤗

So, Raja sahab is agreed for Nikki-Saksh marriage . i loved YuRa's plan to make Saksham establish first and then talk to RS for Rishta.😎And i am haapy for Saksham as well . Good boy !!👏 Yar Rani to bari blackmailer hai 😆...kaisay RS ko mana lia.

Oye Huay !! Yudi dude is so clever yaar.kya plan banaya hai ....ab to CR gai .👏 👍🏼

Agar next part jaldi update nahin kia na tooooo......🤔 wait karungi aur kya?😔 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
what?😲
CR caught????????
OMG rosh, that was really good.....what would she do now?
Jaldi update karo
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh,
Yeh kaise ho sakta hai!! Yudi aur itna smart.......yaar you are breaking all the rules. Mai forum wala Yudi chod kar tere wale Yudi ke peeche lagne wali hoon ab!! 😉😉
RS and Rani part was awesome. Liking your story of Nisha too........Itna talent aur hume woh log kya dikha rehe hai show mai.
Chal ab jaldi se next part update kar de. 😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
yudi ko pata chal gaya lekin yaha kyun rukh gayin didi agla update karo na
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey awesome ff about rani yudi
this the first one i am reading abt my one of my fav jodis
its really good
plz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh...after long time you updated!!! Would luv if u update on weekly basis!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia

Haila Rosh,itna suspense??

CR ki baj rahi hai pungi!!
Yudi to bohot hi smart aur intelligent nikla!!
Continue soon!!



Purva, Suspense ke bina kuch hota hai kya?😉 Haan! Ab toh CR ki band baj gayi!😃
Mera Yudi bilkul mujh par gaya hai!😳
Sure! I shall continue soon!😳

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Rosh ,

Thank you so much for updating it after a long time .🤗

So, Raja sahab is agreed for Nikki-Saksh marriage . i loved YuRa's plan to make Saksham establish first and then talk to RS for Rishta.😎And i am haapy for Saksham as well . Good boy !!👏 Yar Rani to bari blackmailer hai 😆...kaisay RS ko mana lia.

Oye Huay !! Yudi dude is so clever yaar.kya plan banaya hai ....ab to CR gai .👏 👍🏼

Agar next part jaldi update nahin kia na tooooo......🤔 wait karungi aur kya?😔 😆



Faiza 🤗
Thank you so much my dear girl!
Mere YuRa toh smart hai!😉
Yudi ko clever kisne banaya?😈 Haan ab pakaa CR gayi!😳
Wait karo! Waiting ka phal meeta hota hai naa?

Originally posted by: usmrasul

what?😲
CR caught????????
OMG rosh, that was really good.....what would she do now?
Jaldi update karo



Thank Usma dear!🤗
Wait and see what she does now!😳😃

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh,

Yeh kaise ho sakta hai!! Yudi aur itna smart.......yaar you are breaking all the rules. Mai forum wala Yudi chod kar tere wale Yudi ke peeche lagne wali hoon ab!! 😉😉
RS and Rani part was awesome. Liking your story of Nisha too........Itna talent aur hume woh log kya dikha rehe hai show mai.
Chal ab jaldi se next part update kar de. 😛😛



Bobbie, Aise hi ho gaya!😳😳 Yudi is supoosed to be like that! He is smart but people are make him dumb!
Don't talk about the show! Mujhe ghussa aata hai!
Haan HAan jaldi update karti hoon!😳

Originally posted by: sadia sheikh

yudi ko pata chal gaya lekin yaha kyun rukh gayin didi agla update karo na



Sadia, I shall continue soon my dear! Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: topsyturvy23

hey awesome ff about rani yudi
this the first one i am reading abt my one of my fav jodis
its really good
plz add me to ur pm list



Thanks for reading my FF!
Thanks for this compliment! I shall surely PM you about this when I update!😃

Originally posted by: ruhik

Rosh...after long time you updated!!! Would luv if u update on weekly basis!!


Ruhi🤗
Seeing your comment after a long time!
Thank you so much for this lovely comment!
I shall continue soon!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
didi i am so sorry i ws looking through your ff and i saw that u were still waiting for my comment on part 36 i am so sorry for it being this late
so here goes
it was so sweet the way yudi kept comforting her and she was holding his hand telling him not to leave.
lekin yeh kya cr gave medicine even though she knew not too abi lagta hain cr ko pakar nay mein deri naahin hain
hain na

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