FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 44

Rosh sach baat kahoon........ Tuze maarne ka mann kar raha hain...
Why did you end ur FF???? I am very much upset........ I know there could be some personal work but yaar kucch din baad update kar deti.......

Me not happy at all.😭😭😭😭😭

Rosh ,

Wowie!!! What an Update ....Absolutely lub it and ofcourse lub you for writing such a wonderful part .🤗
1.First , Godbharai.....Loved this Yudi who made her convince and the function was indeed royal .👏

2. Amma took her and Yudi impatient ?😆Still love the thing .

3. Awwww......Pipe charh kay aaya us say milnay🤣( like my imagination wala Yudi) ....Absolutely loving this passion of him😎..and the way she was missing him and then how she reacted to see him...aw...soooo cute😳 .....i loved those dialogues of him where he expressed how he missed her.😍

4.Awww.....YuRa got baby boy first ....Rani's wish was granted😍Chalo .....Bobbie ka Yuvraj tumharay FF main aagaya. kitna Natkhat hai .....apni maa ko tang karta hai ..hehehhhe.....but i know he would be like his father ....Horse riding seekhnay jaa raha hai na.👍🏼

5. Rani was again expecting ...choooo.....chweeeettt.....i knew is baar Yudi ki beti hi aani thi....aur aagai na.😍

Loved the way You winded up your FF .....it was very well described by you .....

And i love 4 'A's gang😆 .....Sab kay bachon ka Naam A say shru hota hai na.....Chotu ''A'' gang😈 ....RS is lucky ...aur haan Rani taking care of Dadi n Amma ...wow.......so touching ......and Munna went for higher studies ....cool😎👍🏼

I know that Raj parivar will always be happy in our imaginations.😍

At last ....i really want to thank you for entertaining us through this wonderful FF🤗 ...I'll be waiting for your other FF's update .😉

PS: Waisay YuRa ka beta apni maa ko khanay kay liye itna tang kyun karta hai ?😉 Kahin Roshni pay to nahin gayi uski aadatin?😛🤣

Rosh just loved every bit of your FF and absolutely loved the ending. So good to see that YuRa live happily with their small cosy little family

Dear Rosh,

Yours FF was outstanding!!! When good things end...you miss it very badly....I am going to miss your Dastann!

Hope soon you come out with something new!!! I truly enjoyed reading your FF and Thank You for giving us some relief from Samprun!!

Keep Writing!!!

ruhi

Originally posted by: darshana23

Rosh sach baat kahoon........ Tuze maarne ka mann kar raha hain...
Why did you end ur FF???? I am very much upset........ I know there could be some personal work but yaar kucch din baad update kar deti.......

Me not happy at all.😭

😳 Darsh, Kyun marne ka mann kar raha hai?😭
I mean there was nothing more to write, was there? Arrey koi personal baat nahi hai..Just that ki saare loose ends khatam ho gaye toh story also ended! Ab doosra FF jo hai!

Nahi..Dont be sad my dear! I'll try to update the other FF!

Ab iss part ke comments kahaan hai? Yaar last part hai, iske baad chahe toh bhi comments nahi pooch sakti hoon!😉

Rosh,

Rosh....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what a beautiful FF... and to tell i missed it😭.... i have started reading it from today.. have read it till Part 20... all i can say is WOW... 👏

Rosh I really loved this part. Specially when Yudi came to meet her by pipe and then took care of her. And after 4 years their kid is making noise to go for horse riding with Yudi. Shhhoo shweet!!!

But I didnt know that u r going to end this FF. So thats what surprise to me... Yaar kya kare, we never get good scenes on YuRa. So iss forum ke FF hi to ek sahara hain.......

Finally finished reading your FF... it was awesome.. loved every update.. atleast here Yudi is intelligent... hmmmmm our puranawala Yudi... sure miss him..... wow Yudi coming on a pipe... something i would love to watch in reality...