FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow! that was amazing.
Loved Yudi takin caring of Rani.
Their romance and then getting caught by Munna of all people 😳😳
Having house full of guests. Loved how they sleep on terrace 😃😃
Mujhe bahu maza aaya. Enjoyed there little interaction of water games. 😉
Jaldi se agla part post karo.....I can't wait.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Roshni.

Haila!

Aapko error aa raha hai? Ek baar bina sign in karke open kijiye..shayad khul jaayega...!
Pata nahi kya problem hai!😕

Finally I managed to read it Rosh.....god knows what the problem was...anyway...page 39 ko mujh par taras aa gaya aur khul gaya...😃
Lovely update Rosh....Yudi's happiness and his resolve to take care of her is what I liked the most.....Yura sleeping under the bright shining stars was perfect!
Great update and I look forward to more of yura dreaming about their baby......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Faiza didi,
Meine kya kiya?
Thank you, thank you so much dear!😃
Haan..Mujhe Yudi aisa hi hona chahiye, not the one we see these days...Issliye..usse winking ki bimaari!😳
Will continue really soon!
Juna di,
Thank you so much for your lovely comments!
Hm..Everything is gone wrong with the serial and I dont want to repeat the mistakes..I want them to be together forever in every situation and under all circumstances! The main - lead separation just doesn't go with me!
Yes di, Husband and Wife behaving with strangers would be found here...Yudi does a better romance with Imli these days...He is improving
Bobbie di,
Thank you so much for your lovely comments....
I know you like Munna..So include kar diya!😉
Thanks for liking it!
Anshu di,
Thank God yeh khul gaya! And Iam so glad that you liked it!
Will soon continue!
PS: Next part coming up tonight..Depends on the episode..Agar achcha hua toh aaj milega..Nahi toh whenever the episode is good!😉😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
rosh plz post soon
i am quite sure in serial when imli track ends and Ranis pregnancy comes they will show 9 months of it in one single movie song and in next part we will see kanjali going out with a five year old kid to find another cameo to bring trouble
so, your FF is a good source to enjoy Ranis pregnancy time
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Posted: 15 years ago
Usma, Here is you request!
Girls next part coming up in short while!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 29

The next day, Amma , Dadi and Munna leave and promise to come every weekend to spend time with them.😊

Some more days pass by, RS still is fighting a losing battle of whether he must see his son and daughter in law or not and makes his mind finally!

Village:

Rani's morning has completely changed…there is no work to do and Yudi's is opposite to hers!😲 He had taken up the work of preparing breakfast and giving more time for Rani to rest though Rani had protested that she was doing nothing other than resting the whole day considering the fact that she had even quit going to the school! Yudi had to constantly force her to agree and she eventually gave in.😆

Falshback:

It had all started after Amma, Dadi and Munna left. Rani was deep asleep; she couldn't get up on time.🥱 After some time she could feel the fresh aroma of coffee, she reluctantly opened her eyes to see what was happening around her…Her eyes widens with shock😲 when she saw Yudi sitting beside her with a cup of coffee in his hand.😲😲😍 He looked in complete mess…It looks as though he had spilt the milk everywhere over him along with the coffee powder.😳 She was so impressed with him..A prince, who had never entered kitchen all his life, had prepared coffee for her sake!😳 She was looking at him and wondering how a person could look hot and handsome even in the mess!😍 She felt so blessed to have him.🤗

Yudi breaks her reverie and asks her: Kya soch rahi hai?😕

Rani: Kuch nahi, Hum abhi fresh ho kar aate hai.😊

By the time Rani could come, he was preparing the breakfast…To her surprise; she saw him place two plates and wondered what had gone wrong. As Yudi always insisted in eating in one plate😃😳; they would feed each other😳. She keenly observes and reales the reason for the sudden change😆. She cannot help grinning😃. He had kept all the burnt rotis in one plate and the slightly normal ones in the other.😆😆 She couldn't let him struggle longer.

Rani: Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?😲 Aap hatiye hum kar le-

Yudi: Aap bilkul befikar rahiye, Ek din ke liye yeh kaa lijiye..Hum aur abhyas karke kuch hi din mei pakana seekh lenge. 😃

Rani: Aap pehle yahaan se jaayiye aur hume karne dijiye. Hume laga aap ek din ki baat kar rahe the lagta hai aap roz karne waale hai. Hum aisa nahi hone –

Yudi: Agar hum apne patni ka khayal nahi rakhenge toh kaun rakhega? Aap isske bare ab aur kuch nahi baat karegi, humne keh diya na bas kehdiya!😛

Rani wonders why she always would tongue tied in front him😆. Now his request had become a command and she obediently obeyed it! The least she would do was prepare lunch as he was at office and weekends she had the rest for that as well as Amma would take over that work of hers.😔

Present

Rani keeps staring at him while he prepares the breakfast. He had scolded her when she offered to help reminding her that it was his duty to take care of her and not vice versa at least in the current situation😆. She had been sitting idly; she decided to tease him a little to break her boredom😃😉.

Rani: Ab aap jaldi kijiye, kitne der laga rahe hai? Hume bahut bhook lagi hai.😲

Yudi: Rani, bas do minute mei ho jaayega.😃

Rani: Hum toh ek ghante se intezaar kar rahe hai! Ab aur do minute?😲

Yudi: Ek ghante se? Ek ghante pehle toh aap so rahi thi.😆

Rani: Hum kahaan so rahe the? Aapne hi toh hume utne nahi diya!😆

Yudi: Aap humpar ilzaam laga rahe hai😲. Hum toh bas aapka khayal rakh rahe the.😃

Rani: Toh rakhiye naa…Issliye toh hum khaana pooch rahe the.😉

Yudi: Rani, aajkal aap bahut bhukkad ho gayi hai.😒

Rani: kya karen, yeh sab aapke wajeh se hua hai.

Yudi(bewildered): Humare wajeh se?😲 Ab humne kya kiya?😲

Rani: Aur nahi toh kya, aapke bte ke liye bhi toh hume khaana padta hai!😆😛

Yudi: Meri beti apni papa ko kabhi tang nahi karegi, bas unki maa hume tang kar rahi hai.😆

Rani: Hum tang kar rahe hai? Aur waise yeh aapki beti nahi balki humara beta hai!😃

Yudi: Phir se shuru ho gayi aap? Yeh humari laadli beti hi hai.😃

Rani: Beta hai.😲

Yudi: Beti, Beti aur sirf Beti.😲

Both of them were in such deep argument that they did not notice the rotis being burnt; the realization hit both of them at the same time😆.

Yudi goes near the stove and sees the roti in black color. He tells her: Yeh sab aapke wajeh se hua hai.

Rani: Humne kya kiya?😛

Yudi: Agar aap maan leti ki beti hi hogi toh sab teek ho tha!😳

Rani: Beta hi hoga. Par aapne toh kaha ki aap kuch hi din mei kahan banana seekh lenge?😔 Abhi tak nahi seekhe?😲

Yudi: Seekh toh liye par humari beti ki maa ke wajeh se ab hume sab dobara bana na pad raha hai!😉 Hum aapko abhi bana ke dikahte hai ki hum achche se bana sakte hai ya ki nahi.👍🏼

Yudi turns around to make another one. Rani realizes that Yudi was getting late for his work..She chuckles inwardly and goes near him.😳

She hugs from behind and says: Hume maaf kar dijiye😃

He doesn't respond as she was creating a distraction😲…He couldn't make the shape proper.😆

Rani: Aap humse naraaz hai?

Yudi: Ab aap itni pyaar se jo maafi maan rahi hai!😳 Hum aap pe naraaz kaise ho sakte hai?😃....Ab hume kaam karne dijiye warna humara dhyaan kahi aur chala jaayega.

Rani: Hum aapke liye baadha hai?😲

Yudi: Aur nahi toh kya? Agar aap yunhi hume dekhte rahenge toh hum aapki inn pyaari pyaari aankhon mei kho jaayenge😳…He places a kiss on her eyes☺️, aur phir hume mann karega ki hum apne haath inn gore gore gaalon pe rakhen☺️…He demonstrates the same☺️. Aur jab itne paas aagaye toh humara mann karega ki inn laal laal hoton ko chum le☺️….He demonstrates that as well…..He kisses her with great passion. Rani forgets everything around her and responds him back as well☺️…..The rotis lay forgotten😲😆….After some time he separates her and asks: Kya yeh baadha nahi hai?😳😉 Ab hum apne kaam pe kaise mann lagayenge!😳

He ends up not going for work that day. It had been raining all afternoon and YuRa had an awesome time with each other.😃😳

Palace:

Bhavyata had been wondering how to convey her feelings to Saksham. She decides to ask Niharika for help.😲

Bhavyata: Di, hum aapse kuch baat karni hai.

Niharika: Kahiye.

Bhavyata (comes directly to the point): Aapko humare liye Saksham ji se baat karna hoga.😲

Niharika😲😲: Kya? Lekin hum kyun –

Bhavyata: Aapko unse humari shaadi baat karni hogi😲.

Niharika's anger starts building up but she controls it😡.

Niharika: Aap khud keh sakti hai –😡

Bhavyata: hume bahut darr lag raha hai, aur issliye aap humare liye yeh kaam karegi.😲

Niharika: Bilkul nahi.👏

Saksham who had been passing by Niharika's room to tell her something stopped by when he heard his name being taken.😲

Bhavyata: Aap yeh karengi, warnaa hum maa ko bata denge ki aap uss din kya baat kar rahi thi.😲😲

Niharika wasn't scared anymore.😃 She had already told RS about it! 😊The anger she had bottled up for this long just bursts out at that instant.😲

Niharika: Aapko jo karna kar lijiye. Hume koi farak nahi padta. Abhi tak jo humne kiya woh kaafi nahi tha kya? Aapko kya laga? Hum yunhi jhukte jaayenge?😭 Humne apne pyaar ki kurbaani bhi de di.😭 Ab usske bare mei baat nahi karna chahte hai.😭 Humne aapko vaada kiya hai aur humesha woh vaada nibhayenge. Aapko Chotti maa se ya Pitaji se kehna hai, keh dijiye. Ab humse yeh sab bardahs nahi hota. Agar aapko aapka pyaar paana hai toh khud hi unse apni dil ki baat bol dijiye.😭 Issme hum aapko koi madad nahi karenge.😭

Niharika breaks down and sobs uncontrollably.😭

Bhavyata gets angry and decides to go to her mother😡..She comes out of the room weeping😲.

Saksham, who had been standing there, quickly changes his direction so it looked as though he was just coming👏. Bhavyata after looking at him cries even more…She expectantly looks at him to console her but she doesn't do so. She gets wild and heads to her mother's room directly😲, her mind working furiously. She stops when she sees Saksham going to Niharika room; she walks back to eaves drop their conversation😲.

He looks at her and says: RS aapko bula rahe hai.😊

Niharika wipes her tears quickly and moves out of the room so that he doesn't notice her crying. Saksham too walks behind her feeling elated as well as dejected. It was now confirmed that Niharika loved him and he also knew the reason for her sacrifice – he had to act soon!😃 And he found a way to play his little game.😃

Village:

After the siesta, Rani searches for Yudi but he is nowhere to be found..

Suddenly he comes in and says: Rani aap utt gayi..Ab jaldi chaliye..Aap ko kuch dikhana hai.😕

Rani got up and followed him and the outside the sight she saw mesmerized her….He was mesmerized looking at her..He placed his arms around her waist and pulled her closer toward him to enjoy the scenic as well her beauty😳. Rani was speechless..She just couldn't take her eyes of the rainbow😃…It made the entire atmosphere happy depicting their feelings😃.

Yudi: Kitni pyaari hai naa?😃

Rani: Haan Arjun, bahut pyaari hai!😃

Yudi: Par apne kabhi ulta indradhanush ko dekha hai?😲

Rani: Ji?!😕

Yudi: Humne dekha hai, who bahut sundar hai, bahut pyaari hai, isse se bhi zyaada pyaari (indicating the rainbow) Usse dekhne pe humara mann bahut kush ho jaata hai aur behkne lagta!😃😳

Rani: Apne kahan dekhe hai?😕

Yudi: Woh ulta indhradhanush hai aapki pyaari si muskurahat. Aur woh hum humesha dekhna chahte hai.😳😉

Rani blushes to his statement and to hide that she hugs him tightly☺️. The rest of the night is spent with Yudi's romantic mood!☺️

The next day,

The day passes very dully to Rani, and by afternoon she is bugged up. The sky is clear. She prefers to walk to the market and bring the necessary vegetables. She returns back thinking about the dish she was going to prepare😊.

She sees chaos everywhere on the road and people looking at her and screaming" hat jaao" 😲She turns just on time to see a bull chasing her. She is scared out of the wits, the next minute the bull's horn is so close to her stomach😲…the last thing she thought was about Yudi and their child!😲😲

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aap logon ko achca nahi laga kya? Please do tell me how it was taaki mei improve kar sakoon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Arre,Rosh,
Tu kyun itna worried rehti hai,itna awesome likhne ke baad??
Hakuna matata,hun!

I just loved ur update-ktna hmm... tha!
Aww... Yudi taking so good care of Rani-(Rosh,uda diya mere hosh 😉 )
Aur romance toh-kya baat hai!Kaise likha?
Meri taraf se jaadu ki jhappi 🤗 🤗

Par yeh cliffie,kyun?Waapis aake complete karo,girl-abhi,abhi;warna red pen se 'Incomplete' remark likh dungi!
Hey,kya RS bachaaenge apni bahu ko??

P.S-I actually wanted to comment before,par computer pe multitasking kar rahi hoon(raat ke baaraha baje 45 minutes ka presentation-ufff)
Edited by andromeda_kia - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh ,

TYhat was awesome , beautiful , lovely , cute ,caring , Romantic , etc. etc.

Yaar word nahin mil rahay ..

Awww....so cute ...Yudi did not allow her to make Rotis aur romance kay chakkar main kitni rotian jala din bhai . ☺️ 😆

i love this YuRa ...Ufffffffff main kya kahun...awesome update by you !!!

Loved to read this as well kay Saksham is now aware kay Nikki is falling in love with him. Ab to uska plan ki execution ka time hai !!!

Aur last main tunay kya kia ? Bull chasing Rani .... 😲
But i know Yudi will save her . 😉

jaldi update kar !!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Roshni.

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Aap logon ko achca nahi laga kya? Please do tell me how it was taaki mei improve kar sakoon!

Abi padne ka samay toh do.....I have to read it a couple of time ok......😃😃
But first time toh bahut bahut bahut achaa laga.....No let me go back and read it again.😉😉
I can just picture Yudi with creamer all over him. Making those chapati's......Bechara sara kaam kar raha hia. 😃😃😛
I like it though.....us women need to make that happen more often. 😉😉
Rani is teasing him....loved that part the most. 😳😳 Him kissing her eyes, cheeks and lips....too good. 😳
Bhavayta is starting to get on my nerves, do something with her. 😡😡

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