FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 33

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Juna04 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh Excellent excellent update and kia and Faiza have said it all - all I can repeat is that I loved the way Yudi took care of Rani and their interaction and romance was amazing and loved it. Please with this cliff hanger cant wait for Yudi to come and rescue Rani from that raging bull. Looking forward to Saksham's plan to woo Nikki. Great update and so much romance 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh mindblowing romance.. I wish RKAB mein kucch aisa
dekhe ki Yudi Rani ko kucch karne nahi de raha...
Yudi to bahut hi naughty hain.. but ab tak khana banane
mein trained nahi hua?? Dont worry ho jayega....

Wow.. Saksh now knew that Nikki loves him. Great!! what he
will do next?? make her jealous??

But ye kya cliff hanger, Rani is in trouble.. Plz dont do anything
to their kid...
usmrasul thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
rosh
i don't want anything bad happen to baby
i don't want anything bad happen to baby
i don't want anything bad happen to baby.....
plz plz plz....save rani and baby

you-know-who...bechara.....itni kam
actually i feel more sorry for Rani...she has to eat those burnt chapatis...well anything for love...huh? 😳
thnx for the update......loved it every way

by the way why Rani calls him Arjun?
Edited by usmrasul - 15 years ago
TSharan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey Rosh....off course achha laga....yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai...........soory i had read it yesterday but didn't get time to write comments.............I like the bold Niharika a lot!! the way she gave it back to Bhavi..........looking forward to that story to unfold...............aur yeh kya tumne bhi cliffhanger daal diya........😲

I liked Yudi's cooking efforts......their interaction n Rani' s masti with Yudi n leg pulling was really nice.
Once again a great update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh- Your's and Bobbie FF rocks!!! Hope both of you decide to post FF on alternate day basis!! It will have a soothing balm effect on us daily after watching the crap episode!

Keep going...look forward to your post!!!
Roshni. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Purva,🤗
Ima so glad you liked it hun! Thanks a lot!😃
Cliffie nahi toh Darshu ko bura lagega naa...ussi ne mujhe sikaya!😉😆
Faiza,🤗
Mei samaj gayi!😳
Thank you so much....
Yudi will save her? Itna bharosa hai mere Yudi par?
Bobbie,🤗
That was so sweet of you!😳😃
Ok..Beofre you all kill me I would do something with Bhavyata!😛
Juna di,🤗
Thanks a lot..Your comments mean a lot to me!
Ok..Ok..No more cliff hanger...Intezaar khatam.
Darshu,🤗
Thank you so much Dear!😳
NiSha ka update zaroor aayega..fikhar not..Saksham will surely do something!😉
Cliff hanger kyun? Yeh tum pooch rahi ho? Aakhir mujhe aap hi ne to sikhaya guruji!
Usma,🤗
Relax Relax.....Kuch nahi hoga!
Rani calls him Arjun because that was the way he introduced himself ti her..I think I've told it previously!
Anshu di,🤗
Thanks a lot!😃😳
Woh aaj kal Darshu update nahi kar rahi hai..toh meine soch usska seat grab kar loon aur cliff hanger daal doon!😉
Iam so glad ki aapko achcha laga!😃
Ruhi,🤗
Thanks a lot dear!
I think I'd make a deal with Bobbie asking her to post six days so that I can post on the remaining one day! You see, I love her FF too!😉
PS: Next part coming in few minutes!😳
Roshni. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 30
Rani lay unconscious on the road while the bull was under control just in time. People gathered around her and carefully bring her back home. Vaidji is called and Rani is examined…Vaidji informs them that there was nothing to worry and she just lost consciousness as she was subjected to sudden tension.

After a long time Rani opens her eyes and looks around to see where she was…the first thought came to her was her child and subconsciously touches her stomach😲….She wakes up with a jerk and sees her neighbor sitting beside her.

She seemed to be too relieved on Rani gaining her consciousness and tells her: Bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukr hai ki tu utt gayi😃.Ab ghabraane ki koi baat nahi hai. Aur haan, humne tumahre pati ko suchit karne ki koshish ki lekin we kahi bahar gaye the toh hum unhe bata nahi sake.😊

Rani: Bahut Bahut dhanyavad maasi. Hum bahut ghabra gaye the..laga ki –

Maasi: Tumhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai, uss sand ko rok diya. Ab tum aaram karo. Hume ghar mei bahut saara kaam pada hai. Hum bahar se tala laga ke jaate hai aur jab tumhare pati aayenge toh unhe de denge..aur tumhe kissi bhi cheez ki zaroorat padi toh hume pukar lena..Teri ek awaaz pe hum yahaan aa jayenge.😃

Rani: Ji.

Rani feels too scared to be alone...She is desperately waiting for Yudi to return. She takes his photo nearby and lovingly looks at it😳…she remembers the day when they had taken the photo...it was at Amma's house as a new weds! She slowly drifts of to sleep all the while hugging the photo.😳

Yudi in the meanwhile returns home very happily😃...He just couldn't wait to break the happy news to her. He had just got a new house for them…a bigger and a spacious one.👏 It would be so comfortable there. He stops his bike and expectantly looks for a waiting Rani but he doesn't see her😲…A very unusual thing...He thinks she might be sleeping…but next step he is shocked as he sees the door locked.😲 He gets worried and wonders where she could have gone at this time...It was very strange that Rani could go anywhere without informing him…but in the meantime, maasi looks at him and hands over the key.

Yudi: Maasi, Rani kahaan hai?

Maasi: andar hai beta.

Yudi (stunned)😲😲: Andar? Par bahar se tala kyun lagaya? Sab teek toh hai naa?😲

Maasi explains in detail what had happened in the market area and how Rani had fainted…She also said him that Vaidji examined and she is perfectly alright..All she needed was a little rest. Yudi's expression of shock turns into fear even after maasi consoled him. He grabs the key praying Rani was alright.

He sees that Rani was sleeping...He relaxes a bit and sits beside her. He observes that she was hugging something and slowly pulls out of her grip..But no she would not leave it...Not even in her sleep😊…Yudi tries really hard to take it out out and gets successful after various attempts…He looks at the photo and gets elated that Rani had been hugging his photo.😳

But, Rani meanwhile had felt a sudden loss of something and gets up startled; she looks at Yudi and hides herself in his arms tears rolling down.😭 She gets a wave of relief.😃 Yudi massages and consoles her assuring that everything is alright.😳😃

Rani: Hum bahut darr gaye the.😭

Yudi: Kuch nahi hoga, ab hum aapke saath hai naa. Lekin Rani, aapko akele jaane ki kya zaroorat thi?😕 Hume bata diya hota.

Rani: Ji, hum bahut bore ho rahe the, socha ki thode der bahra jaye toh achcha lagega Toh hum –

Yudi: aapko hume bolna tha, hum aapko lekar jaate ya phir maasi ko saath mei leke chalna tha.😒

Rani feels guilty and lowers her eyes and says: Hume maaf -

Yudi: Nahi, Yeh baat maafi maangne ki nahi hai balki hum bas yeh keh rahe hai ki aapko saavdhaan rehna chahiye.😊 Aur aainda kahi bhi jaaye akele mat jaayiyega. Hum aapko yun takleef mei nahi dekh sakte.😃

Yudi then separates her from the hug and asks her: Yeh sab baton ko bhool jaayiye aur yeh batayiye ki aapko kisne bachaya? Hum unhe shukriyada karna chahte hai.😊

Rani: Ji, hum maasi se poochna bhool hi gaye😲…Um, Hum nahi jaante.

On the cue maasi comes there and tells: beta, we yahin hai, humare ghar mei aur aapse milna chahte hai.😃

Yudi leaves Rani there and is about to go but Rani insists on going to...Yudi reluctantly takes her.

They were lease prepared for the shock awaiting there. Not in the slightest dreams YuRa thought that they would meet RS in such a situation😲. YuRa go and take blessings from him hiding their surprise. RS stops and hugs Yudi.. Yudi is overwhelmed and is unable to speak anything.

He falters and finally gets his words….Yudi: Pitaaji, aap?

RS: Haan beta...aap dono se milne ka bahut mann kar raha toh hum chale aaye. Jab se hume sachchyi pata chala hai, hum dono ko milke maafi mangne ke liye taras gaye the.😭 Par hum itne khayar ho gaye the..aur humne jo vyavhar aap dono se kiya..hum apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paayengi aur aapko muh dikhane ki laayak nahi rahenge😭..Lekin aaj himmat karke aap se milne aaye.😃

Yudi: Pitaji, aap yeh kya keh rahe hai? Hume koi shikayat nahi hai, aur hum bas isse ek mauka samjte hai apne aap ko saabit kanre ke liye.😃

RS: Aur hum yeh garv se keh sakte hai ki aapne saabit bhi kar liya. Hume pata chala ki aap ek ghar bhi kareed liye?😲

Yudi was so shocked as how RS could know it soon and so was Rani. Rani was so surprised by this news and looked at Yudi. Yudi looks apologetically at Rani as he couldn't say it before.😳

RS looking at Rani: Haan beta, apne liye shehar mei ek ghar khareeda hai aur hume kaise pata chala woh bhi inti jaldi..yeh toh uss owner, jo humare dost hai, se poochna padega jinhone yeh ghar bheja.😃

YuRa smile at him.😊

RS goes near Rani: Kya aap bhi hume maaf kar dengi?😭

Rani: Aapko yeh sab kehne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, balki hum aaone aap ko doshi maante hai ki hum aapke naraazgi ki waajeh bane😭. Hume aapse maafi magni chahiye.😭

RS: Nahi beta bilkul nahi..Apne toh hume bada tohfa bhi de diya..Hum dada jo ban ne waale hai.😃

Rani lowers her eyes in shyness and tries to hide behind Yudi and turn deep red…😳

RS asks her: Agar aapne hume kshama kar diya toh kya hum aapse kuch pooch sakte hai?

Rani: Ji, poochiye

RS: aap dono ko mehal lautna hoga..Kal subah.😲😲

Rani looks at Yudi who signals a yes; Rani replies the same.😃

RS: Ab hum chalte hai aur kal subah hum aap dono ki prateeksha karenge.😃

Yudi: Teek hai pitaji.

RS leaves supremely satisfies with his behavior..He finally had overcome his cowardice and planned to meet YuRa but on the way he had seen a woman being chased by a bull and had run to stop it. He had then seen it as Rani and when Vaidji checked and informed him that she was pregnant😳😃…he was ecstatic😃…and his happiness knew bounds.😃 He was going to surprise them with a grand welcome which no one had seen in centuries👍🏼...and the very reason he had asked them to come in the morning so that he could make all arrangements.👏

YuRa in the meanwhile had been thinking so excited. Neither of them are able to sleep that night and spend the whole night talking about the new morning waiting for them😳…..They finally sleep cuddled cozily in each other's arms.☺️

PS: Girls, aaj no cliffhanger so that you can all read peacefully until I do the nest update which will be a month later! Kya karoon..Exams!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part Roshni............... Wah wah!! RS ne kya perfect entry maari hain............. But i liked the way Yudi consoled Rani and their discussion when she was scared............. Its really great news that RS invited them back............. Hope CR doesnt play her tactics again
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yay!!!!
yuRa waapis ja rahein hain!!!
Meine kaha tha ki RS bacha lenge Rani ko!
Awesome,yaar!Inna saara excitement aur action ek hi part mein??Wah wah!
Hmm......
P.S.I undertand,exams yaar(Psssttt...I'll be on leave the next month😔)
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Posted: 15 years ago

It was lovely part....

I completely enjoyed it.
RS saves Rani from a bull. How funny.......but it was funny in a good way. 😉 I liked it very much.
Rani sleeps with Yudi's picture......kind of like we do Rosh.... 😍😍
Yudi as ususal was fantastic and I am like starting to like this maasi character.
YuRa going back to the Mahel. 😍🥳
Very nicely done Rosh.....good luck on your exams.

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