Originally posted by: darshana23
i will be posting on Monday..... I have written future parts.. but that document is on my laptop......... so cant post....
Rosh,
If u hvn't noticed, I update once a week, toh somewhr around Monday or Tuesday...
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Originally posted by: darshana23
i will be posting on Monday..... I have written future parts.. but that document is on my laptop......... so cant post....
Rosh,
If u hvn't noticed, I update once a week, toh somewhr around Monday or Tuesday...
PART 23
The neighbor is standing there looking at him from top to bottom "Lagta kai nal teek ho gaya, ab toh spanner wapas kar dijiye" Yudi looks at him embarrassed, returns the spanner thanking him and curses him under his breath for ruining their beautiful moment!😡😆
PALACE:
Niharika was sitting in her room with her mother and and thinks how she agreed for her brother's relationship….what made her agree…..😕
Flashback:
More the anything, she had a slight hope if something magical could happen between her and Saksham….at this thought she felt guilty and something pierced her that she was being very selfish!
Finally she knew she had taken a right decision because at the end, his happiness was all that mattered! His happiness was Rani just like a sunflower turn towards the sun…Rani was his!😳
End of Falshback
Village:
Yudi had gone to hs work and Rani is out with her neighbor to collect logs from the forest! Though she was physically present there…She couldn't maintain her calmness…All her thoughts wandered around Yudi😕….She knew what he was going through though he tried to hide…He was sacrificing everything for her……everything! How could he not feel hat he was going through…though he did not express anything….his eyes were enough to communicate and she could see what was going in his mind!😳 She was getting restess every minute…She just wanted an opportunity to speak to RS and convince him somehow, but at this moment she felt very helpless….She wanted to help him in every possible way…For that she needed a job quickly..She wondered how she would get a job! She had to do something…she felt it was because of her that he was going through such a terrible phase in his life!😕
While returning back from the forest, she notices a school where the masterji's is running here and there…..she feels it quite strange and asks her neighbor – "Jyotiji, yeh masterji yahaan wahaan kyun bag rahen hai?"😕
Jyoti: Humare gaanv mei ek hi paatashaal hai aur masterji bhi ek! We ek hi samay par teen kakshaaon ko sambahlte hai!"😲
Rani is shocked to hear it! She decides to speak to masterji once the school finishes and returns home! She comes a little later and casually starts the topic of how manages to teach three classes at a time….Masterji replies that it was difficult to manage initially but now he has got used to it but it was quite tough! Rani immediately offers her help…..He asks for qualification and comes to know that its not high but as soon as he hears that she secures a rank in her school…He immediately accepts her offer! He warns her that she might not get a high income, for which Rani replies that she wasn' worried about the income! She is satisfied with what she is going to get!😃
Rani on her way thinks that one of her wish is fulfilled and wonders when her other wish was going to be fulfilled! She sees a telephone booth and dials the umber and calls someone….She speaks to her for a while and then returns home with a satisfaction!😊
Yudi on the other hand is thinking about his family…….He wonders if everything would've become alright….if RS's anger came down! He was missing Niharika and BR the maximum…he wished Rani was there near him…Just at the sight of her…he starts feeling relaxed….He gets an unknown strength…How he wished she was near him….But she was in that small hut all alone…..He had not bargained for this and knew they have to accept the fact, yet his heart was not ready to accept the practicality…He wanted her to live in the palace as a queen and not to subject her to any toruture but since the day of marriage, he hasn't given her anything except for troubles and fears…..He knew that Rani was feeling guilty for not helping him…He knew her desire to work and desparateness to work…But whatsoever, he was not allowing her to do anything such thing! Even in the small hut…She would be his queen! He just wants to finish the work and leave soon to return to his love!😳
It almost late evening…She is still waiting for Yudi's arrival...She is missing him terribly…Its almost past 9 hours that he has not returned! She somehow passed all her afternoon thinking that he would return home soon…..She wonders how she go through everyday…Everyday she had to see this separation… She couldn't believe that she couldn't be away from for such a short span…..!!! She remembers all of a sudden that she had put the cloths for drying outside…She quickly goes to take it out as the weather was getting windy! She could hardly spot anything due to the wind and blindly pulling out the cloths! Suddely someone from behind and whispers in her ears: "Kisko yaad kar rahi hai aap?" His warm breaths were sending shivers down her spine and that was the sensation only one could bring it to her!☺️ He slowly puts his hand around her stomach and spins her high around She could feel his hand touching her bare skin left uncovered by her saree….…She was pleasantly surprised by his act…She drops the all the cloths in her hand and gives into him completely…both are oblivious to the surroundings…they have landed in their own sweet world!😳
He then palces her down and turns her around and places a warm kiss on her fore head…She too hugs him tightly for all the time she had missed him! He slowly lifts her up in his arms and brings her in…..😳😳
They have their dinner and waste no time in telling how each other's day was!
Rani tells him about the school and how she was accepted by Masterji!😃
Yudi: Rani, aap paatshala ka kaam keh rahi hai, issliye hum kuch nahi keh rahe hai kyunki iss she aur koi punya ka kaam nahi ho sakta! Agar aapne humse naukri ke bare mei bataate toh hum aapko zaroor rokte…lekin ab hume aap par garv hai!👏
Rani is delighted but at the same time shocked how he knew about her desire to work and help him!😲 Yudi feels worried but at the same time happy for her!😕
Next morning….Their routine starts…Yudi is getting ready to leave for work and Rani for her school. Both of them hear a knock and wonder who could be at the door at this early hour!
Yudi opens and is shocked to see Niharika waiting outside with Saksham! Yudi greets her and calls Rani…Niharika and Rani hug while Yudi is still surprised too Niharika and Saksham!😲😲
Yudi: Aap log yahaan? Kaise…Yeh jagah aapko kaise pata chala?😲
Saksham: Niharikaji bahut zidd kar rahi thi aap dono ko dekne issliye.
Niharika: Aap hume nahi bataate toh kya huva…Hume humari bhabhi ne bataaya!
Yudi: Rani ne?😲
Yudi glares at her…He wonders what he did to get such a wonderful wife!😳
Niharika: Haan, Bhaiyaa, bhabhi ne! Kal unhone hume phone kiya aur bataaya ki yahaan pe kya kya chal raha hai! Bhaiyaa, humme aap par poora yakeen hai ki aap iss lakshya mei kamiyaab honge!
Saksham: Kunverji….Aap bilkul mat ghabraiye…Hum sab aapke saath hai!
Yudi is overwhelmed by their behavior and vows to fulfill his dream soon and get back to RS as a son who would never betray him!
Yudi: Maa kaisi hai? Pitaji kaise hai? Aur baaki sab log?
Niharika narrates the whole incident after his marriage….how RS forced Rudr to marry bhumi and how is angry with the duo…
Niharika:Maa teek hai…bas unhe aapki bahut yaad aa rahi hai! Jab se Rani bhabhi chli gayi, unka dekhbal mei karti hoon…Abhi bhi Chotti maa unke paas hai…Humne unhe baaaya ki hum mandir jaa rahe hai….. Pitaji ne ghar mei hume aap ke naam lene se mana kiya hai….unhone yeh bhi kaha ki agar aap dono ko milne ki bhi koshish naa karen, warna unhe bhi ghar se bahar nikaal denge!
Yudi becomes very sad and dejected…..He asks Niharika to return as she was not obeying her father….Niharika feels very bad for not handling the situation gracefully…
Niharika: Bhaiyya, aap dheeraj rakhiye….Sab teek ho jaayega…bas pitaji ek baar appko dekhlenge to unka gussa kam ho jaayega! They talk for few more minutes…Niharika and Saksham leave!
Rani can see the pain in Yudi's face…..She cannot take it more….She drags him out of the house and stops a taxi: Bhaisaab Shishodhya Rajmehal chaliye!
Yudi is stunned😲😲…he does not know what Rani was doing…but he gets into the taxi and asks her…For which she replies....
Rani: Arjun, aaj jo bhi ho jaaye, hum RS ko mana kar hi wapas aayege! Yeh sab ki wajeh hum hai…Hum aapko iss halat mei nahi dekh sakte!
Yudi tries to tell something but Rani says she is determined about her act!
YAY!!!😆
Rosh,
wada pura kiya!!😛
awsum update! luved the way ur portraying their struggle....
oh woh clothesline ka scene cute tha....😳
haay! Niharika n Saksham... good good!😆😉
are ye RS bhi na...ufff!!!😕
okey to ye done ab raj mehel chale....
par ye BR ko kya ho gaya????😲
arey yaar tumhe cliffies dena zaroori hai kya??????
PART 24
YuRa are shocked… They slowly go in… they first see people gathered at a particular place, they feel scared and make way slowly… Yudi is flabbergasted seeing the scene infron of him…… A crying Niharika, CR, RuMi and Bhavyata!😲😲
Tears start flowing from Rani's eyes….how could this happen?😲 She was alright…Then all of a sudden she died….BR died!🤢 It was an utter shock to both of them! 😲
Yudi shouts "Maa", until then no body had noticed them…Niharika lifts her head up and is about to run towards him when RS stops…. He is furious…He shouts at Yudi: Yahaan kyun aaye? Yahaan ke mauj masti dekhne? Aap to aapko bahut kush hoga na? Dekhliya aapne? Yeh sab aapke wajeh se hua hai?! Aapne itne gire huye harkat ki hai, Aapne aapki maa ki zindagi le li!😡😡
RS had lost his temper…
Yudi: Pitaji-
RS: Bas Kunver, hum aapke muh se ek shabd bhi nahi sunna chahte hai….! Hume nafrat hai aap dono se…khaas kar iss ladki…Iss ladki se…! Abhi abhi unke tabeeyat mei sudhar dikayi diya…isse pehle who teek ho sake, aap dono ne milkar unhe maar diya!😡
Rani: Raja Saheb-
RS: Tumhe baat karne ki anumati kisne di?
Rani keeps quiet and lowers her head down…She was helpless…She couldn't do anything!😔
Yudi: Pitaji, Bas ek baar hume maa ko dekhne dijiye..Bas ek baar…Hum chale jaayenge!😭
RS: Agar aapko apne maa se milna hai toh iss ladki ko humesha humesha ke liye bhool jaayiye aur andar aakar Kunver hone ka farz nibhayiye!😲 Hum aapko rokhenge nahi!😲
Rani was shocked to hear this😲…Yudi was angry that his father was taking advantage of the situation...He wanted to meet his mother desparately but no way could he agree to RS's condition! How could he….?
Yudi: Pitaji hum aise kabhi nahi kar sakte hai –😒
RS gets wild: 'Guards' 'Guards' Inhe abhi issi waqt iss mehal se bahar nikaliye! Inn logon ke liye humesha ke liye yeh darwaaze bandh rahenge!
CR looks at the scene in front of her and continues her acting!😭🤢
All the securities are holding Yudi's hand but he is fighting hard to meet his mother…RS sees that Yudi is winning…He looks at Rani disgustedly and drags her! Rani is weeping…Yudi sees that immediately stops fighting…He releases himself from the securities clutches and runs behind them.
RS goes near the gate and pushes Rani out…Rani falls on the ground…Yudi runs to lift her up!😲
RS: Humare liye aap mar gaye hai! Aainda iss taraf apna shakal dikhaane ki zurrat bhi mat kijiye!😡😡
RS leaves them there and runs towards BR! He sits beside her and starts crying…Niharika gets even more emotional, RS hugs Niharika and both of them start crying!😭
CR who had been acting till then gets up smirking! Finally her dream has come true! As expected RS had blamed Yudi and Rani for this act! She was too happy that her wait was fruitful. When Niharika left BR alone in the morning, CR had seized the opportunity and mixed the poison in her medicine and given it to her!😈😡
She looks at RuMi and gives them triumphant look. RuMi are equally happy!
Outside Yudi lifts Rani up.
Yudi: Aap teek toh hai naa?
Rani: Hum bilkul teek hai. Hume maaf kardijiye Arjun, Yeh sab humare wajeh se hua hai! Humare wajeh se aaj maa ka yeh haal- aur pitaji ne aapse aise keh diya… Aap jaayiye, hum kanhi aur –
Yudi: Bas Rani, Aapko kya laga hum aapko yunhi chod denge? Hum zaroor maa ko diye hue vachan ko nibahyenge! Yaad hai naa apko ki hum aapko humesha khush rakhenge! Ab chaliye yahaan se!
Rani starts crying and so does Yudi😲… Rani wipes his tears and he wipes hers!(😳)
YuRa get into a taxi and return to the village.
In the taxi…Yudi is not able to tolerate the pain, he breaks down! He was trying very hard but noe nothing could be done…..Rani consoles him…He slowly places his head on her shoulder….the only place where he could find peace.😃
The reach the village, Yudi goes into the house while Rani calls up her village and informs her family about BR's demise!😭
Rani gets in the house and sees him sitting in the corner of the cot in deep thoughts. He was crying like a little child! Rani had never seen him break like this…He was too brave and could handle any situation with ease but his mother's case was entirely different! She goes and stands beside him…
Without looking at her he tells: Jaanti hai, Maa ko teek hote huye dekhne ke liye humare aankhe taras rahe the! Bachpan se yahi ummeed, issi sapne se hum jee rahe the! Aaj woh sapna toot gaya! Sapna, ek sapna hi reh gaya…Kabhi sach nahi ho paya! Yeh sab ki wajeh hum hai….Humne maa par poora dhyan nahi diya… His words are not coherent…a wave of emotion hits him and he hugs Rani placing his head on her stomach and hugging her tightly…Rani does not know how to console him…She just massages his head and consoles him.🤗
The day passes by without either of them talking much to each other. Yudi just lives in BR's memories!
The next day Amma, Dadi, Chacha, Chachi and Munna comes to visit them. Yudi tries to behave normally but Amma finds it out and asks him to consider her as his mother...All of them try to cheer him up! Yudi tries to recuperate!😊
In the Palace:
CR had taken advantage over the situation and starts completely playing with RS's emotions! She makes him hate Yudi and Rani!🤢
Days pass by…
For Yudi, Rani was his world…His day started with her and ended with her…She was everything to him…his family…his friend…his companion…his wellwisher…everything! He deeply indulges himself in the work to prove himself and earn a reputation!😳
Rani too gets started with her school…Her only aim was to keep him happy in every possible way!She could got o any extent to keep him happy. Every weekend they would go to Rani's village and spend some quality time with everyone!😳
Palace:
Niharika had become very lonely….she had lost her mother…now she was not allowed to talk to her brother too…She had no one inspite of being with everyone! There was no one whom she could share her sorrow with!
RS had made himself busy in projects and left other works to CR....CR had also suggested that Rudr would become the next king…and RS had heartily approved her decision but not carry on as Royal family had to mourn for a year and no functions could take place!
RuMi were having a time of their life…There was no one to control them and question them….Bhumi was very happy. She had concluded that she had better life with Rudr than Yudi…Almost everynight was spent in parties and dicotheques!😲😳
Niharika had locked herself in her room and refused to come out! Saksham was deeply hurt b seeing this and decided to end this!😊
He goes to her room and sees her sitting in a corner with her mother's photo!😭
Saksham: RajkumariNiharikaji aapne khana khaya?
Niharika realizes someone is talking to her and looks at Saksham…But she doesn't answer him….She simply shakes her head in negative!🤔
Meanwhile Saksham orders the servant to bring the food…She protests but he forces her!😃
Saksham: Kha lijiye, warna aapko apne baiyaa aur bhabhi ko waapas lane ke liye taakat kahaan hoga?😉
Niharika looks at him confused!😕
Niharika: Kaise…? Bataayiye? Hum abhi woh karte hai! Hum bahut utsuk hai jaan ne ke liye!😃
Saksham: Pehle khayiye phir hum batate hai!😛
Niharika eats the food and gives him an angry look for making her eat!😡😆
Saksham:Aap hume yun gusse se dekh rahe toh hum upay kaise bata sakte hai?😆
Niharika is helpless and finishes her food quickly: Ab batayiye!😃
Saksham tells her the plan and she who heartely approves it!
Saksham: Aap khush toh hai naa? Koi aitraaz toh nahi –
Niharika: Bahut badiya hai aapka upay...Hume manzoor hai!😎
LEKIN HUME NAHIIN…Thunders a voice and both of them looks at that person shocked!😲😲😲