FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 28

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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh,
How could you? 😭
BR is dead.....Yudi not able to see her. 😭
RS is under CR's influence and has agreed to make Rudr the king in a year 😲😲
Yaar ek hi chatke me itne punches? 😕
Like the Nisha parts. Infact loved them. 😳
Who does not agree? Is it CR again? 😲
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh,yaar,BR ko mar daala-kyun,kyun,kyun?
I felt so bad for YuRa-for Yudi especially!
I hate CR!
But,u worote it really weel-it must heartbreaking for u to see Yudi cry,leave alone write about it,na?😉
i loved the way described YuRa's relationship,hun!
continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh, you in right spirits? You killed off BR?! She's supposed to get better, expose CR (it's her right) and then live on to be as old as Baa (however old she is)! And what devil have you made of RS? Gosh, his attitude actually scared me.
But Yudi's grief was emotional and I'm glad Nikki's got Saksham. But who's the dastardly person interfering with their plans?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh, i agree with jennifer
why BR died 😭
you-know-who o helpless and grief-striken 😭
but i think RSs reaction was proper according to his character
i hope nikki-saksam dont get treated the same way as yura
story is definitely moving the way it should have been in real serial 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Faiza,
Calm down my girl....😃
I know Bechara Yudi...I too felt sad for him.
Thanks for your lovely comments my dear girl.🤗
Ciff-hanger o fying😲😲..YES! Thats exactly the word!
jaldi pata chal jaayega! Will post the part by tonight.😃
Bobbie,
Jhatke ke bina kahaani achacha nahi lagta naa...isslye!😛
Thanks so much!🤗
Waito and watcho!😛
Purva,
Haan Purva, maar daala...Kyunki kahaani mei twist!😉
Haan mera pyaara Yudi kitna ro raha tha naa...Aww!
Thanks hun...Will soon update it!
Jen,
*gulp* I wanted to introduce a new twist issliye!😕
RS scared you? WOW! I know a way to scare you then😉😆
Thanks dear for your lovely comments🤗
Usma,
Thanks dear for your lovely comments🤗
No worries..Yeh meri kahaani hai...NiSha ko kuch nahi hone doongi! 😃But no guarantees haan😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

waiting for the next part Rosh....yeh kaisa twist tha Rosh???? BR gone! Anyway you r the writer n u know how u want to take the story forward. ....but things going really good so far....😃👏🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Anshu_A

waiting for the next part Rosh....yeh kaisa twist tha Rosh???? BR gone! Anyway you r the writer n u know how u want to take the story forward. ....but things going really good so far....😃👏🤗

When do you want the next part?
Di, I hope you will getto now in the end...Phir aap kahiye ki twist achcha tha ya nahi!😳
Thanks a lot for your comments di!😃
Aap logon ke support bina....mei kuch nahi kar paati!🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Roshni.

When do you want the next part?

Sooner the better dear....as soon as u can
Edited by Anshu_A - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 25

Saksham and Niharka look at Bhavyata shocked,😲😲she had a look on her face which made Niharika get scared.

Bhavyata: Hum abhi jaake maa ko batate hai ki aapne yeh sab kiya.🤢

Niharika: Nahi Bhavyata ruk jaayiye.😭

Bhavyata: Agar hume yeh sab nahi bataana hai toh aapko humare liye kuch karna hoga.😲

Niharika: Kya?😲

Bhavyata: Aapko vachan dena hoga ki hum job hi mangenge aap woh hume degi.

Niharika😲😲: Hum vachan dete hai, batayiye aapko kya chahiye?😕

Bhavyata: Abhi nahi batayenge…jab waqt aayega, tab aapko pata chal jaayega.

Saksham realizes that she was going to ask something very huge which was going to turn Niharika's life.

Niharika's face drops and Bhavyata happily goes out😡. She laughs at her sister's naivet. Bhavyata had actually heard only the last line of their conversation and nothing else.😲😲 She did not have a clue of what was happening but decided to play. She couldn't bear Saksham talking to her sister so freely and friendly. If she played her cards rightly then she would achieve what she wants…she could easily succeed in her plans.

Saksham asks Niharika to carry on with their plan but Niharika is too scared and tells Saksham about her fear. Saksham understands it and asks her to do it a little later when Bhavyata would have forgotten about their speech.😕 Niharika is worried as she knew Bhavyata would not give up anything so easily. Saksham consoles her and asks her to have faith on god! Nharika has no other way, she had lost her sleep and invariably her thoughts would wander to what drastic action Bhavyata would take and fear.

The next few days RS is not to be seen in the palace, he was too involved in the business while CR makes all her plans for Rudr being the next king. Niharika also is not able to live peacefully with Bhavyata stalking her wherever she goes.🤢

Village (10 weeks later):

It was Friday evening; Rani was sitting and correcting some books…She checks the time, its only 5 'O' clock. She sighs and thinks it would be too late before he returns.😳 She is missing him and waits everyday in the same manner for his arrival. She hears a bike sound at a distance and wonders who could be riding so speedily but does not bother to peep out. She is correcting the book with rapt attention.

Yudi slowly comes into the house without making any noise and from behind closes her eyes.😳 Rani gets scared…She feels the hand over eyes and realizes it was Yudi's.😊

Rani: Aap itne jaldi aagaye?😃

Yudi: Aapne hume pehchaana kaise?😲

Rani: Aapke alawa yahaa kaun aa sakta hai? Aur aapko pehchaan neh ke liye aapko bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai, Aapka sparsh kaafi hai!😳

Yudi is overwhelmed by her affection and replies: Achcha yeh sab baatein baad mei,aap humare saath chaliye.😳

YuRa move but Yudi suddenly stops her: Rukhiye...😲

Rani: Kya huva?😲😲

Yudi hands over a bag to her and says😳😳: Aap pehle isse pehniye aur phir hum chalte hai.

Rani opens the bag and is surprised to a see a salwar.😳 She wonders why he got her…

When she is about to question him, He tells her: Sawaal baad mei kijiye pehle aap taiyaar hokar aayiye.😛

Rani gets confused even more but decides to wear it and come…Yudi is restlessly waiting for her.😳 As soon as she comes, he again closes her eyes with his hands and takes her outside. He slowly removes his hands and she opens her eyes…She is shocked to see a Bike…A brand new bike. She looks at him asking for explanation.😲

Yudi: Woh hume promotion mili thi toh humne ek bike khareed li…Aapko roz chalke jaana pad raha hai naa…Ab uski koi zaroorat nahi hai!😊

Rani was so happy, he had got the bike for her sake so that she needn't walk…Rani felt she was the luckiest woman ever on earth. This was truly a surprise for her… Tears started rolling down her cheeks and she instantly went and hugged him and congratuated him😃. Yudi was delighted seeing her so happy!😃

Yudi then separates her and tells: Ab chaliye, mandir chalte hai.😃

Rani now understood why he made her wear he salwaar.😳 Yudi starts the bike and she too sits behind him but does not hold him…he expectantly looks at her but she lowers her eyes and doesn't see him.😳 Yudi smiles and goes in full speed…Rani gets too scared and holds onto him and with her eyes closed. Yudi is supremely satisfied 😃and does not reduce the speed. It's almost 15 minutes….Rani opens her eyes and sees they have crossed the temple….

Rani: Rukhiye…Rukhiye..Mandir toh yahiin hai…😕

Yudi stops with a jerk hearing her scream and replies: Humne kab kaha ki hum yeh waala madir challenge? Ab aap chaliye and goes with full speed.😛

All the way to the temple, he never reduced the speed and the feeling he was going through was inexplicable giving him energy to ride faster and faster.😃

They reach the temple in few hours…Rani looks at the view and is stunned by its beauty….She looks around the whole temple in awe. It was temple surrounded by sea. It was extremely wonderful to watch and for Yudi it was extremely wonderful to watch her, he could not take his eyes off her. He loves the way he is looking at it.😳

YuRa get inside the temple and pray for each other's happiness… Rani after her offering her prayers return near the bike but Yudi pulls her away. She asks him where they were going when Yudi shows her the beach, Rani refuses to go…Yudi forces and eventually with lots of hesitation Rani goes with him.😳 They still stand shore holding each other's hands and feeling the waves tickling their feet...The sensation was too beautiful!😳😳 They move little deeper into the sea but Rani protests….He lifts her in his arms and take her into the sea, he places her down and looks into her eyes and suddenly kneels down….He takes a rose from his pocket and says:Hum aapse bahut pyaar karte hai❤️…Aur yeh hamare pyaar ke liye….(gesturing the rose).☺️

The waves are fierce…Yudi is enjoying and Rani is nervous….She does not know what to reply…She is stunned, not for the surprise but his attitude of taking risk for her to any extent…She obviously did not expect him to kneel in the water….She was terrified at the thought.😲😲

She tells: Aap pehle utiye yaahan se, yahaan pe tarange (waves) ati krur (fierce) hoti jaa rahi hai!

Yudi: Aap pehle isse sweekar kijiye phir hum utthe hai.😉

Rani gets too scared and takes it from him and says: Ab toh utiye.😳

Yudi: Humne kuch aur hi socha tha, aap kuch aur hi keh rahi hai…Hume abhisweekruthi (acknowledgement) chahiye.😛

Rani is amused and she is angry that he wants all these knowing that she is scared: Yahan pe kitne log hai....😳

Yudi: Jaldi kijiye nahi toh hume tandh lag jaayegi aur aapka darr sach ho jaayega!😛

Rani is scared out of her wits and says😳: Hum bhi-

Yudi cuts her sharply and says: Hume yeh nahi cahihiye…😕

He shows his lips to her…Rani understands what he wants and says: Pehle aap utiye…☺️

Yudi stands up…Rani looks at him coming closer..She moves backwards...She sprinkles water on him all of a sudden…But he is not shocked, he had expected her to defend in some way and hence does not react😛..Rani is shocked at his lack of reaction😲😲… Yudi moves forward again, places his hands on her waist and goes near her to fulfill his intention☺️ …She suddenly moves front and kisses his cheeks and hugs him.☺️ Yudi takes some time to register what had happened but smiles at the same time😃….He wants to look at her but she was tightly hugging him to hide herself from him so that he could not see her red cheeks,☺️ Yudi too hugs her. Rani is embarrassed😳…After what seemed an eternity, they pull themselves…they spend some more time in the water and enjoy themselves and leave to the village.😃

PALACE:

RS angrily returns home😲…CR asks him the reason.😕

RS:😲 Jo nahi dekhne tha who bhi dekhna pada.

CR: Kya huva? Aapne kya dekha?😲

RS: Aapke pyaare bte Yudishtir ko apni patni ke bike mei mazaa lut the dekha!Unhe zara bhi khayal nahi aya ki unke maa ko dehant huye abhi pure then mahine bhi nahi huye. Kya soch rahe the? Pyar karna hi that oh ghar mei beitke karte bahar kyun jaana tha?😲😲

CR is extrememly pleased to see RS fuming at them but she doesn't express it.

She tries to justify but RS asks her to keep quiet and storms into the room.😲

CR happily sits on the sofa and peacefully thinking that no one can ever bring YuRa back.😡

Niharika had been watching this...She had enough of this and decides to put an end….She goes to RS who was about to open his room door and drags him😲😲...RS is shocked!😲😲

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Posted: 16 years ago
Superb,Mindblowing & hmmm......(*screams these words again*)

This is also water type,par kitna alag aur romantic hai, Rosh!! Kaise likha??

Ugghhh...Bhavy-like mother,like daughter! I hope uska popat ho jaaye!

Nayi bike?Aur beach waala temple?Awesome!!!

Nikki fed up of RS's ignorance??Kya karegi woh???

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