FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 25

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Posted: 16 years ago
Too cool,Rosh!Just awesome-YuRa married in instantaneous mode!I love ur Yudi-so independent-i loved the way BR supported her son!

I liked Nikki-Saksh help-too good!

Loved the YuRa scene in the end-so cute & hmmmmm....

Okay,there isn't anything i didn't like about this update,so would this suffice?

I loved it 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ohooooooooooo.................YuRa Married

And Yudi took spontaneous decision ....hmmm.....i guess He was absolutely right.. 😉

Bhoomi married to Rudr ( same in drama na )

But i loved dignified Yudi...He is taking care of his beloved wife's reputation...Aww..so cute...

Ab yeh dono kahan ja rahy hain...🤔
But i loved the ending...how he hid her from cold 😳

Agla part kab hai ? 😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh,
You guys are really going to make me earn my keep as a judge aren't you? Everytime the FF gets better and better. Romance ki to hadth hi tod di tum logo ne.
Ab mujhe bar raise karni paregi.
But this was fantastic with my darring YuRa will to take the leap and give RS a run for his money. I hope someone can save BR. Poor Niharika and Saksham.......
Rudr and Bhoomi deserved each other. Do continue soon....I want the details about the suhaag raat. Do continue soon. 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
👏 rosh it was awesome specially the last part 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Roshni!

Ur story is moving super-duper fast!!!

loved every bit of it!

The ending was just too cute....

so RuMi married, lets see how they get along n break the rules-together or separately...

But YuRa being thrown out of the palace is an angle which no one has touched save you and Raju di too, I s'pose. but I think in her FF they had run away...

As about chorifying my ideas, lets see u hv the liberty to do so....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia

Too cool,Rosh!Just awesome-YuRa married in instantaneous mode!I love ur Yudi-so independent-i loved the way BR supported her son!

I liked Nikki-Saksh help-too good!

Loved the YuRa scene in the end-so cute & hmmmmm....

Okay,there isn't anything i didn't like about this update,so would this suffice?

I loved it 🤗 🤗 🤗

Aww! Thanks a lot Purva!🤗
BR ko dikhate hi nahi...So I just wanted her to play some role!
I wonder if BR knows her son is married or not in the serial!
End scene...? Liked it? That was a last minute addition warnaa next part likhti!😳
Thanks a lot for reading it and liking it!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Ohooooooooooo.................YuRa Married

Haan Haan..YuRa married...aur tum itni kush ho gayi?😲 Kya baat hai?😆

And Yudi took spontaneous decision ....hmmm.....i guess He was absolutely right.. 😉
Haan..I want my Yudi to be like this....Issliye yeh decision😳...Guess? You are not sure?😕


Bhoomi married to Rudr ( same in drama na )
Yep....RuMi married...I wanted to concentrate only on YuRa! Baaki purva karegi apni FF mai!😳


But i loved dignified Yudi...He is taking care of his beloved wife's reputation...Aww..so cute...
Yudi is always like that...Yeh serial walon ne uska reputation barbaad kar dia par mei nahi karoongi!
You liked it? Thanks yaar!😳

Ab yeh dono kahan ja rahy hain...🤔
Pata chal jaayega...Bas thoda wait kar!

But i loved the ending...how he hid her from cold 😳
😳 Mei kya karoon....thoda toh romantic hona chahiye naa....What say? Though Iam trying to cope with you...!😳😳

Agla part kab hai ? 😍
After I write it!😳

Thanks a lot for liking it dear!🤗

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh,

You guys are really going to make me earn my keep as a judge aren't you? Everytime the FF gets better and better. Romance ki to hadth hi tod di tum logo ne.
Kya karen yaar...Romance toh dikhaate nahi...Issliye we took the liberty to write the romance while let them take care of the saazish!
Bobbie, Judge ho yaad rakhna...meine paise diye hai tumhe...!😉
Ab mujhe bar raise karni paregi.
But still my amount will be the same!😉
But this was fantastic with my darring YuRa will to take the leap and give RS a run for his money. I hope someone can save BR. Poor Niharika and Saksham.......
Thanks a lot dear🤗.....
Hain naa...I never felt that YuRa can have a good time in the palace...So! BR? Hmm..Sochna padega!
Poor Niharika? Yaar she is a princess and yet you are calling her poor...😆 (Sorry for the bad joke!)😳
NiSha ka story ko aage badaana hoga ab...!😳
Rudr and Bhoomi deserved each other. Do continue soon....I want the details about the suhaag raat. Do continue soon. 😉
Chi chi...Badi hoke kaise demand kar rahi hai? Haila! Mujhe bahut sharam aa rahi hai!😳😳😳

Originally posted by: usmrasul

👏 rosh it was awesome specially the last part 😉

Thanks a lot Usma dear!😃
Last part? Sab isske peeche kyun hai? Kya sachchi mei achcha tha?😕😳
Thanks a lot once again!😃

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Roshni!

Ur story is moving super-duper fast!!!

Sachchi? Tia I thought it was going the weirdest way!
loved every bit of it!
Thanks so much dear!

The ending was just too cute....

😳 Thanks a lot Tia!
so RuMi married, lets see how they get along n break the rules-together or separately...
RuMi? Hmm...chalo dekhte hai!😛

But YuRa being thrown out of the palace is an angle which no one has touched save you and Raju di too, I s'pose. but I think in her FF they had run away...

Oh! I havent read Raju di's FF as yet......I hope its not the same! Haan Yura are thrown out I want them to eastablish themselves and return back to palace!
As about chorifying my ideas, lets see u hv the liberty to do so....
Thank you...Thank you...Ab chorifying with permission!😉

Edited by Roshni. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 22

The new morning arrives bringing in lots of hopes……😳😳

Rani wakes up first and sees sheirt around her….She thinks that Yudi might have been shivering due to her and looks at Yudi…blissfully asleep!😳 She slowly removes her pallu and covers him with his shirt…..!😳 He is about make him even more comfortable but the truck stops with a screeching sound…and Yudi wakes up! He wears his shirt and both of them get, down thank the driver and leave towards their new life……!😊

Its all very new to them….People recognize Yudi and bow to him..He feels very awkward!😳 YuRa then hunt for a suitable house for a long time…and finally finds a small house…hut….It has only room which is divided into two…. The other side was the kitchen…..There was already a cot and few unused utensils left by the owner. The owner tells there was no place to keep these things in house so he shifted them there…. and moreover they might need it now! The owner somehow doesn't question yudi about his marriage. The house was surrounded by garden and behind the hut was the bathroom. He notices that pipe was placed at quite high level like a shower and wonders how Rani would reach till there and laughs at his own question!😆

YuRa had no choice but to accept it as they could afford only so much at the moment!

Yudi thanks the owner and pays the rent. He looks at the mess around and tells Rani: Aap ghar sambhaliye…hum naukri doondte hai! Aap bas yeh khat safai kijeye aue araam kijeye…Phir jab hum lautenge toh poora ghar saaf kar denge!😒

Rani gets shocked and says: Aap itni jaldi jaa rahe hai? Thoda toh araam kijeeye! Aur phir aapne kuch khaya bhi nahi…Hum –😕

Yudi: Rani, ab yeh baton ka waqt nahi hai…Hume ek naukri zaroor chahiye…. Aur yeh asaan baat nahi hai…Hume abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga!

Rani tries arguing but gives up seeing his determination.

Yudi gets ready and takes his certificates and leaves. Yudi hands her over some money and tells her to eat something from outside. Yudi goes near the door….He turns back and looks at her: Aap hume wish nahi karegi?😳

Rani feels embarrassed and runs towards him to hug...…..She then wishes him!😳😳

Rani prays to god that everything should be alright and yudi should get job immediately and return home! She starts feeling too lonely but she has to get used to this…This is how her life was going to be from now onwards….Thinking that she looks around and starts cleaning the house…! Its almost evening by the time she finishes everything. Rani uses a stick to open the tap in the bathroom…She gets ready comes quickly thinking yudi must have returned by then! She gets worried that Yudi has not returned home….She hides her fear and starts acting normally…..She diverts her mind….She had skipped her lunch thinking that she would eat with him!

She then takes that money and buys the groceries for two days. She tries to cook but later realizes there was no log…she goes to the nearby house and asks her where to collect logs…the lady pities Rani and gives her some and tells : kal se mere saath aajana hum dono milkar lakdi ikatta karenge. Rani agrees, thanks her and goes. She starts cooking all the while thinking about Yudi! She sits on the doorstep and looks at the sesrted road. She leans her head on the door and controlling all the tears that threaten to pour any time! Not after long, she finds him walinkg tiredly towards the house. She runs towards him and hugs him tightly feeling very releived! Yudi who was drained feels very energetic and elated after seeing her! It was clearly visible that she had been worrying for him to the core!🤗

Yudi calms her down and asks: Aap itni gabra hui kyun hai?😲

Rani: Isska jawaab aap nahi jaante kya? Itne der kar di aur upar se pooch rahe hai humgabra kyun gaye?😕

Yudi: Andar chaliye hum sab baatein batate hai!😕

YuRa go in…Yudi is shocked to see that room is clean and understand the pain Rani must have gone through doing it all alone!

Yudi is about to thank her but Rani cuts him and asks: Aapne kaana khaya?

Yudi: Nahi…-😒

Rani: aap jaldi se taza ho kar aayiye hum kaana laga dete hai!😊

Yudi comes back within few minutes and starts eating…suddenly he sees that she made them all…- Rani yeh sab…?

Rani: Woh hum samaan kareed ke laye aur kaana banaya.

Yudi: Iska matlab hai ki aapne dopeher ko kaana nahi khaya?

Rani avoids his question and starts serving….Yudi understands that she skipped her lunch and asks her to sit next to him…He feeds her….Rani doesn't argue and simply takes it…She too takes from the plate and feeds him….Both of them feed each other and totally lost in each other's eyes. They can only find unconditional love for each other and nothing else! Rani is praying that their life should only be filled with happiness and nothing should ever break this unconditional love!😳😳

They finish eating and Rani goes to finsh all the chores…yudi is sitting on the cot and watching her do it with in ease and hopes that everything would be alright and so that he can take her to the palace! She returns back in few seconds…Rani sits beside him and asks him to tell about the job.

Yudi starts telling one by one…How from morning one after the other he had been hunting for job…Most of them were ready to give him the job just because he was a prince and not looking at his qualifications……He had been really frustrated and finaaly by evening he found a job where the manager did not recognize him and gave him job looking at the certificates. He tells her that he got a job as a supervisor in one of the construction company!😃😃

Rani feels very happy and congratulates him and she too narrates how she passed the day and the chores she did.😃

Seeing Yudi very tired… Rani asks him to sleep.

Yudi gets up allowing her to sleep on the cot and he would sleep down.

Rani gets shocked: Arjun, yeh aap kya kar rahe hai? Aap upar so jaayiye, hum neeche so jaate hai!😲😲

Yudi disagrees….Rani protests…Rani finally manages to convince him and makes him lie down and covers him with a blanket. Rani turns to make herself a bed but she is not able to move...She looks back and sees Yudi holding her saree! He slowly pulls her towards him and then reaches her hand…He holds her hand tightly and starts pulling her and makes her fall on him……They keep looking at each other……Unknowingly Rani climbs beside him….and lies on his chest…His chest was her pillow…..A pillow which could talk thousand words to her and that was her life…that was all she needed to survive…! He hugs her tightly and and places a kiss on her head…She turns upwards and looks at him….He had lost the battle…He could no more control himself…..He slowly pulls her upwards……reaches for her lips and kisses them intensly.😳😳😳

He then realses her and tells: Ab hume koi avaran ki zaroorat nahi hai!

Rani blushes….!☺️

Rani was too close to him….their bodies were touching at every level igniting fire in them……they passionately make love to each other…knowing that this feeling for them would never reduceand everyday was going to be as wonderful as this!😳

Palace:

Sukhiya goes to BR's room and is shocked to see Niharika there….Sukhiya doesn't know what to do…He reports to CR…..CR gets angry on him and is frustrated for the unexpected delay…She couldn't send sukhiya again as it would raise doubts…She forgot that sometimes Niharika stayed on BR's room for her help!

Village:

Rani hears the bird chirping….she doesn't want to open her eyes…It was so wonderful to be in his arms…..! It was the same case with Yudi too…He doesn't want to leave her! Rani reluctantly opens her eyes and looks at hm…He has his eyes closed but feeling her move….he opens his eyes….Yudi suddenly grabs her right hand with his left and looks at her longingly……Rani understanding his desire blushes and lowers her eyes☺️…..looks at Yudi's watch….and abruptly gets up……Yudi is shocked at her behavior!😲

Rani: Arjun, bahut der ho gayi hai….ab hum kya karenge…Aapko kam pe jaana hai…aur humne aapke liye kuch bhi nahi banaya…..ab hum kya karenge…..Hum –😲😲

Yudi: Rani aaraam se…Der nahi hui….Aaj humaara kaam dopehar ka visthapan (shift) hai…Aap chinta mat kijiye!

Rani relaxes a bit and starts her work……She goes to bathroom and opens the tap…..and no water….Rani is shocked!😲

Rani: Arjun….Arjun yahaan aayiye….!😲😲

Yudi panicking rushes to her and asks her the problem…Rani explains that the water was not coming.😲

Yudi looks at it and asks her bring the spanner from the neighbor…She gets them and watches Yudi repairing it….. She tries to finish the cooking by then. She manages to cook the breakfast and goes to see if Yudi had finished it…..Meawhile Yudi was having no luck and trying every possible way….He moves backward all the way scrutinizing and Rani comes towards the door…Yudi suddenly turns back to tell Rani that they would have to call the plumber but doesn't see Rani behind him and collides with her making her fall and him over her! At that time water starts pouring from the tap….Both of them are drenched…She looks to hot and seductive…….He wants to complete the task he left it incomplete few hours back….He reaches her lips and kisses; and surprisingly Rani too responds to him….He then pulls her above him….and then with other's support they manage to get up…! He holds her saree and starts' removing it…...Rani gets embarrassed and goes and hugs him before he does that! He slowly places his hand upwards and starts moving it upwards…..😳

Suddenly KNOCK KNOCK😲😲….Rani pushes him out to open the door😳😳

Yudi opens it …AND…..!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
Uh-oh Rosh,I am falling off my chair!This is so hmm.........

I am at a loss of words,yaar-what is this?

This is so,so romantic & so lovely-yeh sab kahaan se layaa ha?

I loved the way u showed their hardships hun-they care so much for each other!

I love a frustrated CR!
Par,darwaaze pe kaun tha?
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh... I read 2 parts together............. I must say ab yeh jo part post kiya na wo bahut bahut bahut accha tha......................... Romance in water.😍

Most surprising thing is they got married in dramatic way....... But yeh kabab mein haddi kaun aaya hain???

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