FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 29

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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww Rosh ,

So Cute yaar ...Lovely update !!

i loved when Yudi brings shalwar suit for her and then Bike Ride , wah !!! i simply cherished the moment !!! 😍 Serail main bhi mujhay YuRa ko bike pay daikhna hai 😳

YuRa on beach 😳 ..So romantic ☺️

Bhavy heard the last line and befooled NiSha ? This girl desrves a tight slap ...Pata nahin kya maangay gi nikki say but Saksham hai na us kay saath !!! 😛

RS ...Pata nahin aaj kal walau RS yaad agaiy mujhay ( good for nothing , only listening to his wife )

But , That was truly mind blowing Update ...You get a big jhappi from my side 🤗 🤗

Continue soon !!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh, you took so much effort and described every moment so beautifully and you have done what RKAB has never done and that is to use all the characters in the story. I enjoyed the bold love expressed by Yudi and Rani's shedding her shyness gradually.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh I read two parts together..........

But yeh tune kya kiya????????// BR is no more!!!!!!!!! Now who could bring YuRa back and tell RS truth of CR..........

Yudi crying like child 😭

Par ye kya next part completely opposite... YuRa and sea romance...... hmmmmmmmmm.................
Ohh sorry sorry Bike wala part bhul gayi.............. Yudi full speed mein chala raha tha.........
Yaar I wish we could see them on bike in RKAB once.........

Us RS ko bolo dekhe ki RuMi kya kar rahe hain.......... then look for YuRa.......
Edited by darshana23 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOW!!
Mindblowing, Fantastic.
Bike Ride!! a beech visit and so much fun!
How did RS see them? Bhavayta is making me mad. Let's put her in her place.
How is CR's truth going to come out? What are nisha up to?
Really like the YuRa part. Post soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Purva,
Thanks a lot yaar!!
Kya karen..Iam addicted to water romance!😉
Time for naya twist naa...So bhavyata...Dont worry you'll know it soon!
Meri pyaari Faiza,
Haan mujhe bhi Yura ko aise hi roop mein dekhna chahti hoon...lekin dekh rahi hai naa kya ho raha hai!
Jhaapi accepted and reversed!🤗
Juna di,
Thanks a lot!
Iam so overwhelmed by your comments..I shall try to maintain the same in future parts as well!😃
Darshu,
Haan haan completely opposite parts....I was tired of amking yudi cry issliye romantic bana dya!
Bike...mei bhi dekhna chahti hoon!😳
Thanks for your lovely comments dear!
Bobbie,
Thanks a lot dear!
How did RS see them? With his eyes yaar! yeh bhi poochne waali baat hai!😳
Cool down..Ek saath kitna sawaal karti hai re tu?
Don't worry..I shall update!😃
Ok Girls, Thanks for patiently waiting...Next part there is a big twist..Hopefully I shall update it by tonight!
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 26

RS furiously to Niharika: Yeh kya kar rahi hai aap? Kahaan le jaa rahi hai?

Niharika takes RS to her room, she makes him sit down and calmly and tells: Pitaaji, hume aapse bhaiyya aur bhabhi ke bare mei baat karna chahte hai.

RS gets up and shouts at her: yeh sab sun neh ke liye humaare paas waqt nahi hai. Aur bhi kaam hai…

Niharika:Pitaaji aap ek suniye to sahi. Pehle aap sachchai toh jaan lijiye unke bare –

RS: Sachchai? Kaisi sachchai, hum bas yeh sach jaante hai unhone BR ki jaan le li.

Niharika: Yahi baat toh hum aapko bataana chahte the..Apphe iss galat fehemi ko hum door karna chahte hai… Kyunki maa Bhaiyaa aur Bahbhi ke bare mei pehle hi jaante the…Unhone hi Bhaiyya ko iss tarah shaadi karne ka upay diya!

RS: Kya aap apni hosh mei toh hai?😲😲

Nihaika: Ji, Pitaji, Hum bilkul hosh mei hai. Maa humesha chahti thi ki Bhaiyaa Rani bhabhi se hi Shaadi karen…Unhe yeh rishta manzoor tha! Unhone bhiyaa aur bhabhi ki sagayi bhi ki aur –

RS:Kya sach mein BR jaanthi thi?😕

Niharika: Haan, Pitaaji, maa sab jaanthi thi, unhone aapse bolne ke liye bahut prayatn kiya lekin aap unka kehne ka galat matlab nikaal baite! Humne bhi aapse bolne ki bahut koshish ki lekin kabhi safal nahi ho paaye!

RS takes some time to register what Niharika is saying..Anger is building up in him…Yet, he listens to her.😲🤢

Niharika: Pitaaji, aap khud bataayiye ki Bhaiyaa ne aisi kya galati ki jo aap unhe maaf nahi kar rahe hai? Bhaiyya ne kabhi nahi chaha ki unhe aapke dil ko tes pahunchaaye, lekin aap nahi mane! Unhone sirf pyaar hi toh kiya? Iss mei kya dosh hai?

RS: Kya dosh hai?🤢 Uss ladki mein hai, Ek Naukrani –

Niharika: Woh Naukrani nahi thi, who padi likhi sanskari ladki thi! Unhone yahaan pe sirf maa ke liye kaam kiya! Aap kyun unka darja dekhna chahte hai? Kya aapne kabhi bhaiyaa ke bare mei socha hai? Kya unhone kabhi aapne zimmadari se paiche hata hai? Aap toh unhe bachpan se dekh rahe ki we kiss tarah humara khayal rakh rahen hai? Phir bhi? Humesha aapko izzat karte hai aur aapke baat ko kabhi nahi taalthe..Aur haan aap yahi pooch rahe the na, ki unhone sabke saamne aise shaadi kyun kar li…Aapke wajeh se Pitaji…Bhaiyaa toh aap se milne aaye the naa..Unhone Bhumi Bhabhi se bhi prarthana ki taaki shaadi rok de..Aap toh unke baat sun neh ke liye taiyaar hi nahi the! Agar uss din aap bhaiyaa ki baat maanthe toh yeh sab nahi hota aur nahi hum maa ko kho the!

Niharika is crying 😭and RS is silently drinking the facts Niharika is telling😲😲

Niharika doesn't know if she is doing a good job or not but she couldn't hear the bitterness in RS's voice whenever he mentioned YuRa! She continued to tell him: Ek baar sochiye pittaji, agar woh chahte the toh baag kar bhi shaadi kar lete…lekin unhone aisa nahi kiya kyunki unhe aapki fikar thi lekin jab aap unke baatein sun neh se inkaar kar diya toh maa neh unhe yeh sab karne ke liye kaha! Unke paas iss ke alawa koi aur raastha nahi tha!

RS had heard enough😲😲..He gets up and walks away towards his room.

Niharika sees him get up and tries to stop: Pitaaji Pitaaji..😲😲

RS had already walked away!😡

Niharika breaks down completely😭😭…after all these talk she still wasn't able to convince RS!

Saksham had seen her cry…He feels bad for her and comes in…and tries to pacify her.😊

Niharika: Saksham ji aapne dekha, Pitaji humse roothkar chale gaye! Humne bahut koshish ki lekin we man neh ke liye taiyaar hi nahi the!😭

Saksham: Aap himmat mat haariye –

Niharika:Humne waise hi kiya jaise aapne bataaya lekin lagta hai himne kuch zyaada hi bol diya.

She could not continue, she was sobbing uncontrollably.😭😭

Saksham hesitatingly moves his hand forward to console her but takes it off quickly as he did not want to embarrass her. She sees his gesture and is overwhelmed...unable to control more she hugs him. All these days she had been away from him in solitude but now being in front of him, she is just able to control her emotions. She has some unknown fear creeping in her…When RS refused to accept YuRa's relationship, whatever the bleak chance she had seen had also vanished. She wanted to tell him how much his support meant for her but she was not able to bring it in words.😭

Saksham on the other hand is surprised and taken aback by her act. He is trying very hard to conceal his emotions…he is making herculean effort to do so…He wants to respond but did not feel it correct..he did not want to take advantage of her.

He consoles her and says: Aap shaanth ho jaayiye, hum aapko yunhi toot the nahi dekh sakthe hai.

Niharika: Aap ko aasan hai yeh sab bolne ke liye…Aapko kya pata hum kis mod par kade hai…Aap toh –😡😡

She herself did not understand why she was shouting at him…he had only wanted her to be happy..She stops herself abruptly.

Saksham separates her and looks into her and says:Kyunki hum aapse bahut pyaar karte hai. Hume yeh toh nahi pata ki aap humare bare mei kya sochti hai…Sirf itna jaante hai ki hum aapse bahut bahut pyaar karte hai. 😲😲

He waits for her rely but she has utterly shocked😲😲…She had wanted to hear this from a long time…She had dreamt different ways of how he would propose or if she would propose him or they would ever propose at…But she never expected things to happen unexpectedly…😲😲

Her outburst had brought the truth out…His effort of hiding it from her just broke! He had to face reality and the time had come!

Niharika feels too shy to reply😳…She knows that Saksham is waiting for her reply but she doesn't know how to express it!😳

In the meanwhile a servant comes and informs him that CR was calling him…

He can see her faltering, hesitating….He looks at her for one final time and says: Aap job hi nirnay lenge hume who sehmat hai. Agar humne aapka dil dhukhaya, hum kshama chahte hai. Jab tak aap uttar nahi dengi…hum aase milne nahi aayenge aur tang bhi nahi karenge.

She looks at him till he completely disappears out of the corridor. She looks at the place where he was standing and tells: Hum bhi aapse bahut pyaar karte hai…..Par hum aapko kaise bataaye!😳😳

Bhavyata had heard everything..She thinks it's not the right time to interrupt her sister and walks away.

RS is in his room pondering over what Niharika had said… How can he have judged Yudi so wrongly…He thinks about the past..How responsible his son was…How he used to obey him…How he fulfilled his duties..How he took care of the siblings…how he expanded the business…how he excelled in everyting…RS wondered where he had gone wrong in judging his son..His son all the qualities that a father would dream of…Slowly realization hits him🤢…He wanted love..He was longing for it…He was regretting…How he thought that Yudi was responsible for BR's death…He had thrown Yudi out when he was pleading to see his mother👏….He wanted to go meet Yudi but he no courage…What would Yudi think of him…He knew that sooner he would make an attempt to catch a glimpse of him at least!

It had been almost two months now and yet RS was not able to go and see Yudi…

Village:

It's a busy morning…YuRa are getting ready for work…Yudi drops Rani at school..She waves at him and is about to go when Yudi stops her

Yudi: Aap kuch bhool toh nahi rahi hai?

Rani instantly checks her things and says: Nahi
Yudi: Aap itne jaldi bhool gayi…Hume aapse yeh ummeed nahi thi.😲 Agar aap nahi dengi toh hume kaam karne ke lye taakat kahaan se hoga?😉
Rani: Hum kuch samjhe nahi –😲
Yudi: Taakat ka daava de dijiye, hum chale jaayenge!😉
Rani gets even more confused…She looks at him and sees a mischievous smile spread acroos his face..She understands what he wants…She tries to go away but yudi pulls her back😳

Yudi: Jab tak aap dava nahi dengi, hum aapko jaane nahi denge!😳

Rani: Aap kyun aise zidd kar rahe hai? Sab dekhenge…😲
Yudi: Hum kuch sun ne ke liye taiyaar nahi hai.😛
Rani looks all around and sees only few people are around and before anyone could notice, she kisses his hands…He yanks his hand in disbelief and says to her: Rani, yeh kya? Humari shaadi ho chuki….Aisa karenge toh hume taakat nahi milega…Apnapan mehsoos nahi ho raha hai!

Rani looks at him shocked😲…The bell rings and she turns to leave…He looks at her beseechingly…She turns to go away…But instantly turns towards him..runs and kisses on his cheeks and runs into the school turning crimson.☺️ He smiles at her and wonder if she would ever forego the shyness😆...He goes to work all the way thinking about her.😍

Palace:
Niharika carefully prepares herself to tell her heart out to Saksham…She had wasted enough time..She had no courage to tell..She now thinks it's too late…

Bhavyata comes and asks her: aap kahiin jaa rahi hai?

Niharika: nahi toh
Bhavyata: aapko yaad hai aapne hume vacham diya ki hum job hi maangenge aap hume dengi…
Niharika gets scared and asks her: aap jo chahe pooch lijeye..Hum mana nahi karenge.

Bhavyata: Saksham😲😲

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Posted: 16 years ago
I can only imagine YuRa on bike and geting goose bumps.. Amazing I will catch eventually waht I missed great update Rosh. keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh ,

It was beautiful update by you . 🤗

Totally emotional yaar. I loved Nikki's effort for her bhayya n bhabhi..

Saksham expresses his love . i loved it !!!

Nikki shy ..hmmmm....aik din to bolay gi but bhavi 😡

And , and ,and

Yura little and cute scene reminds me today's scene ...I loved your scene to the core .. 😳

Love you ...keep writing 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh,awesome!

I loved it when Nikki gave a piece of her mind to RS-he needed that reality check!
U analysed RS's emotions perfectly yaar,after all a king is but a human & a father!

Aww,Rani still feeling shy & this makes Yudi feel awkward-so cute & hmm...

Ugghhh Bhavyata-how dare she??Now,Nikki isn't going to be rude to Saksh is she?*shakes her head*

Why am I suddenly feeling like a murderess on the loose??
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Posted: 16 years ago

What? Bhavayta wants Saksham......? That two timing you know what....How can she do that.

But loved the YuRa scene. 😍 Could totally picture Yudi and Rani.
So RS is starting to come around. He misses Yudi....how touching.
Really nice update Rosh. Thanks..
Do post soon.

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