FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh,
OMG! that was too good. I liked it very much......please don't delay and post soon. I hope Rani does not know about him being a prince for a while. I am enjoying this little game.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

OYE huay..........................Wah ............Mazaa agaya.............kya update hai..
BUT .............it was too short..................Okies...Got your complaint...Ab ek aur post kar doongi! Was it really mazedaar? I still cant beleive it!😲

I love almond eyed rani.............n i loved YUDI............wah wah .......meetha meetha dard in his heart.........😛.............Hahaha....😆 It was the only adjective that came into my mind! Aur Yudi toh....I'll make him how I want him to be!

Loved ur idea.....Rani doesn't recognize him as prince☺️....n ordering him...😎......Zabardast ....n Cool idea......Really awesome yaar......mainay to aisa soocha hi nahin tha😛You Liked it?😲 Yaar meine bhi kabhi socha nahi tha ki aisa hoga! Lets see what happens further!

I cant wait.................update soon...............ab to tujhay agla part jaldi likhna hi hoga.....c'mon dont make me wait too long.....TU Sun rahi hai na....Achacha baba...Kar deti hoon...Just wait for few minutes!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia

Kya baat hai rosh! Mulakat ho to aisi.Awesome!!!!!Continue soon!!ok,me very excited,but all of the above still very true 👏 👍🏼

Thanks Purva! Iam glad you liked it!😃
I shall continue soon dear..!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh,

OMG! that was too good. I liked it very much......please don't delay and post soon. I hope Rani does not know about him being a prince for a while. I am enjoying this little game.

Thanks a lot Bobbie...I very glad that you liked it!😃
Request accepted....She will not know!😳
Keep enjoying while I post the next part in few minutes!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
kya baat hai. Rani ordering Yudi and Yudi speechless. I like this angle very much. Just keep rani from knowing and let us see how far yudi go. I am already liking this. awesome Rosh. continue soon.
Rani to ekdum maharani abhi se ban gayi.😆
or poor yudi he had never thought this day will come in his life and he will act so dumb. maza aa gaya😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 10

Rani comes again to check if DK(Dhinu kaka) was alright. Yudi is sitting on the couch and waiting for Saksham! She sees that DK's fever has come down--------All of a sudden it starts raining!

Rani looks out of the window and suddenly says to Yudi: Hum abhi aaye. Aap kahiin mat jayiye!

She rushes without hearing Yudi had actually tried to stop her! Yudi just shakes his head and smiles!

She runs out to get drenched in the rain as though she was waiting for the down pour! She starts playing with the rain droplets first and then slowly stand in the rain for few minutes taking in the chillness of rain. She then spins around and around with her arms casually playing with the droplets, she stops only to catch her breath!

Yudi in the meanwhile is noticing all these actions from the window and beautiful smile spreads across his face.

Someone else is also noticing this!

Yudi keeps staring at her and does not want to miss a single action of hers! It was very soothing for him.

Rani without noticing the puddle steps on it and is about to fall and closes her eyes. She opens it only when she feels strong arms around her waist. Yudi had seen her move towards the puddle and just wanted to go shout but she was about to fall so he had to save her this way! He just loved the way she played with nature and thoroughly enjoyed seeing it! He was feeling very jealous of her because she was enjoying her life with what she had. She was full of life, energy and enthusiasm! Yudi felt as though he was living for the first time! He had never got drenched at all but she had given him an opportunity to! He was still staring at her unwilling to let her go! Suddenly a thought crossed his mind ...She was pleasantly beautiful! He wondered why he was thinking that but still the thought does not leave his mind! She broke the eye contact as he was not doing it!Yudi felt her moving and loosened the grip!

She thanked him and continued playing in rain while Yudi still was keeping the hand in the same position how he had kept when she fell! Rani played until she saw a car coming through the main door!

She looks at Yudi and tells him: Chaliye chalte hai. Lagta hai, Saksham ji doctor ke saath pahunch gaye!

Yudi looks at his position and gets embarrassed but still nods to her!😳😳(🤣)

The stranger also had seen this! That person smiles and goes in!

In DK's room:

Doctor checks up DK and tells that it was normal flu and they needn't worry. He just needs rest for few days! Doctor prescribes some medicine and goes away!

Saksham sees them drenched but does not question them , especially Yudi...because he was shocked!😲😲

He turns to Rani and tells: Aapka bahut bahut dhanyavaad Raniji jo aapne humare pita ki itna khayal rakha!

Rani: Issme dhanyavaad ki kya baat hai? Hum toh sirf apna farz nibha rahe the!

Sasham smiles and turns towards Yudi and says: Hum aapka shukriyaada kaise Kuw ...

Yudi cuts him sharply and tells: Arre yeh toh humara kaam tha, aur hum apne kaam se piche kaise hat the? Hum toh yahaan kaam karte hai, aut yeh toh humar kartavya hai aur karobari sadachaar (business ethics) bhi!

Saksham looks at him but Yudi just winks at him!

Saksham does not understand and says to Rani: Aap jaante hai naa, yeh kaun hai?

Yudi gives an angry glare to Saksham and says: Haan kyun nahin jaanthi....Woh jaanthi hai ki hum yahaan ke naye naukar hai! Sirf humara naam nahi jaanthi!

Yudi turns to Rani and says: Rani ji humara naam Arjun hai(that was the name he had seen in the book lying on the table and immediately told it else he would have been thinking all along for a name!!)😆😆😛

Rani leaves doing a pranaam and Yudi is still staring at her!😳

Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ramas

kya baat hai. Rani ordering Yudi and Yudi speechless. I like this angle very much. Just keep rani from knowing and let us see how far yudi go. I am already liking this. awesome Rosh. continue soon.

Rani to ekdum maharani abhi se ban gayi.😆
or poor yudi he had never thought this day will come in his life and he will act so dumb. maza aa gaya😆

Di...Appko achacha laga? Iam very happy!
Di..posted the next part as well!
I know...Yudi would never have thought to see a day like this!😲😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ok guys...So a double update...tell me how you liked it(if you liked it or not!)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Loved it.....Rosh.
I really really liked them playing in the rain. Yudi lied to her.....come on...now but I liked that part the best. I am glad Rani does not know about our Kunwar ji.
Saksham knows his secret now. Please post soon. I am getting addicted.
Edited by bobbiedhillon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh...............😆................wow.........YUDI ki position.......Rani ko daikh kay phisal hi gaya 😉............hehehhe.................awesome.....teri rani to cool nikli yaar ...............aik minute main bahar aur enjoying baarish...😎.....

Arjun.................ehehhehehe👏

Aur confused saksham 🤣.................aur Yudi as naya naukar......😳
ab to beta romance pakka hi pakka hai................seriously im loving ur idea......😛
Cant wait.................next update main plz zyada din mat lagana

Aur acha hua tunay karobari sadachar ki tras. bata di warna u know my hindi........mujhay aik aur word ki trans. bata yaar mainay forum pay buaht suna hai..........PRAVACHAN............😕.....does it mean lecture or something like that..........sab rani ko is kay liye blame kartay hain😆

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