FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 14

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PART 11

Saksham asks Yudi what was all this about for which Yudi just replies; "Kaash haumara rishta RB ke saath itni jaldi pakka na hota" and leaves.

Meanwhile Niharika enters the room and asks: Saksham ji DK kaise hai?

Saksham is shocked and asks how she knew for which she says she met the doctor downstairs and he had told her!

Niharika: Kaise hai inki tabeeyat?

When Saksham was about to reply, Bhavyata enters the room and she starts enquring about DK's health: Saksham ji ab we kaise hai? Doctor ne kya kaha?

Saksham: Ji ab chinta ki koi baat nahi! Ab we bilkul teek hai!

Niharika just opens the mouth to asks where Bhavyata interrupts and asks: Kya hua tha inhe?

Saksham: Normal flu tha, aur kuch nahi.

They continue the conversation for a little more time where Bhavyata does not allow Niharika to speak at all! Niharika feels very hurt and leaves!

Saksham has his eyes only towards her but what could he do? He was a mere servant!

Bhavyata had a triumphant look on her face and asks Saksham to take care of Dk and leaves!

Saksham had not paid attention to whatever Bhavyata said and was simply gazing out of the room to catch a glimpse of Niharika, but she had stormed out to her room. But he vowed to himself that he would get back to Bhavyata at the right time!

Yudi in the meantime is walking towards his room to think whatever has happened in solitude! He remembers and re-remembers her everywhere he goes. Her thoughts just refuse to leave her mind. He wants to meet her again and talk for some more time casually. He lies on his bed and remembers her playing in the rain for the millionth time!

He gets up and walks very restlessly not knowing what to do and finally decides that he has to go speak to her. He tosses the coin to decide if he has to speak to her or not but gives up the idea as it's very childish! Without thinking he just goes to the nearby cupboard and takes the duppatta as though it was going to give him some idea. He still cannot let her go away from his thoughts and frown at himself for this. He had met her only few minutes and ago and she had over powered him completely. Probably the game he thought of playing with her was making him think of her. He wanted to be her friend and nothing else so that he could fulfill his wishes of doing those entire things whatever a commoner does! How could he ask just ask her to be his friend?.he wants an excuse but at the same time cannot give some lame excuse because she might start suspecting him! He thinks and suddenly brightens up!

There is a kind of music playing in his heart?.A soothing music indicating something good is happening, a feeling of satisfaction and something exciting!

(Girls.Please hear this music when you read this.I just meant this kind of music playing in Yudi's heart! Girls I thought to do something different but something else came out but I hope you enjoy!

Ignore the video! I hope it is not a lullaby. If you feel very sleepy then switch off the music playing behind!)

This is the first time he was doing something like this?.Playing with someone who doesn't know his identity but knew that the truth will come out soon. Little did he know that this little game is going to turn his life upside down.

He walks towards the door when he hears the knock. The servant enters and tells him that Rajkumari Bhumi's family is waiting for him downstairs and he has to go there immediately. Whatever the servant had told him wipes the happiness out of him. After the servant leaves?that sentence keeps echoing in his mind. He has no other option other than to go and meet them.

He first takes blessings from all the elders present there and occupies a place opposite to Rajkumari Bhumi where he sees that Rajkumari Bhumi's face is covered with veil. He notices that everyone around him is staring at him. He feels very uncomfortable. RS and CR glance at each other and smile.

He cannot bear the staring anymore and is about to get excused when Karan Rathod (Rajkumari Bhumi's father...I don't know his name in the serial so gave this name.) speaks and introduces himself: Bete hum Karan Rathod hai, Yeh humari dharma patni, Savitha hai(showing his wife).

He shows his daughter and tells yeh Rajkumari Bhumi hai. Humari eklauti beti.😊

Yudi just stares at her covered face when CR notices this and asks Rajkumari Bhumi to remove her ghoonghat so that everyone in the palace can see the beautiful face.😳

They lift the veil from her face and everyone is seeing at the stunningly beautiful face including Yudi because he is totally stunned. His mind only thinks "How could this be possible"! He is astonished because he was staring at Rani's face!😲😲

PS: Please be frank and do comment! This is qucikest update I have done...Please do comment and ignore the typos! I dont know when the next update is!😳
Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Wow Rosh......................beautiful update..................n that theme song 😍

I completely loved this................i think i have heard this in Aish's film JEANS....🤔............

Bhavyata was stupid...............Nikki n Saksh were adorable.......n yaar end????😲..................Yeh haalat hogai hai kay ab Yudi ko har cheez main Rani dikhay gi......😍

POST SOON YAAR,,,,😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Wow Rosh......................beautiful update..................n that theme song 😍

I completely loved this................i think i have heard this in Aish's film JEANS....🤔............

Bhavyata was stupid...............Nikki n Saksh were adorable.......n yaar end????😲..................Yeh haalat hogai hai kay ab Yudi ko har cheez main Rani dikhay gi......😍

POST SOON YAAR,,,,😳

Thank You so much.😃...You liked the theme song? Was it that nice?😕
Yup,Its Ash's movie.😳
Bhavyata's character is like that only...Usska kuch karoongi end mei!😊
Yaar kissne kaha ki Yudi Rani ko har cheez mei dikhayi de rahi hai?😛😉
Soon? Well I'll try to as soon as I write the next part!😳
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NAHINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN di yeh kya kiya i need to know what happens next plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
i loved it yudi lost in thought nikki and saksh i just didn't like bhavy she is so mean
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I liked the first part where he is remembering Rani. The last part was a bit confusing. Is it Rani or is he imagining things?
But do continue I think the confusion may be cleared in the next part.
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Originally posted by: rosh.88

Thank You so much.😃...You liked the theme song? Was it that nice?😕.........yaar that was really dreamy n touched my heart.......Yudi N Rani ................ahhhhh😍why r u confused?? itna talented idea aur confusion
Yup,Its Ash's movie.😳...........oh that means my guess was right😛
Bhavyata's character is like that only...Usska kuch karoongi end mei!😊 ...........aisa kar uska chakkar woh mastani chaal walay princey dude say chalwaday khud hi line pay ajaigi😲......😉........😆
Yaar kissne kaha ki Yudi Rani ko har cheez mei dikhayi de rahi hai?😛😉.........Tu kya woh sach muchi ki Rani hai😲............Nahin............errrrr.........confsing.............jaldi post kar😳
Soon? Well I'll try to as soon as I write the next part!😳...........dnt worry take ur time....hun😳....i can wait...😃

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Wow rosh,awesome!! u making it more confusing for us & Yudi also! 😕 .but,what did rani think of her new'colleague'?Update soon.Btw,i loved that music & didnt sleep midway!! 😆
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Originally posted by: sadia sheikh

NAHINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN di yeh kya kiya i need to know what happens next plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
i loved it yudi lost in thought nikki and saksh i just didn't like bhavy she is so mean

Sadia..Ab teen Back to Back update kiya hai...Ab ideas khatam ho gaye.....so will update when I write up the next part!
Haan Abhi toh Bhvyata ka introduction hua hai....aage jaake dekh (I think I'll have to hide!)
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Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

I liked the first part where he is remembering Rani. The last part was a bit confusing. Is it Rani or is he imagining things?

But do continue I think the confusion may be cleared in the next part.

Thanks Bobbie....Last Part was wriiten to confuse😉....
Aage aage pata chal jaayega dear!

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