FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 13

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Loved it.....Rosh.

I really really liked them playing in the rain. Yudi lied to her.....come on...now but I liked that part the best. I am glad Rani does not know about our Kunwar ji.

Saksham knows his secret now. Please post soon. I am getting addicted.

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Rosh...............😆................wow.........YUDI ki position.......Rani ko daikh kay phisal hi gaya 😉............hehehhe.................awesome.....teri rani to cool nikli yaar ...............aik minute main bahar aur enjoying baarish...😎.....Yudi ki postion...achchi thi naa?😆 Ab toh sirf aadha phisal gaya...pura toh phisalne de!😉 Rain sequence toh hona hi tha!

Arjun.................ehehhehehe👏Yaar mujhe kuch aur naam nahiin mila!

Aur confused saksham 🤣.................aur Yudi as naya naukar......😳Saksham ko koi aur tatteke se nahiin dikha paayi! Issliye aise!😳 Yudi toh jhoot bolne laga hai...abhi abhi starting hai naa...dheere dheere samaj jaayega sab taur tarreke of telling lies!
ab to beta romance pakka hi pakka hai................seriously im loving ur idea......😛Kisne kaha ki romance aane waala hai? woh toh tera kaam hai!😛 Idea toh aisi waise bhatakti rahegi😳

Cant wait.................next update main plz zyada din mat lagana Got the point! Will try to update soon!😳

Aur acha hua tunay karobari sadachar ki tras. bata di warna u know my hindiWarna sab confuse ho jaate, waise hi there are only few readers of this FF, I dont want to lose them at any cost!😳

........mujhay aik aur word ki trans. bata yaar mainay forum pay buaht suna hai..........PRAVACHAN............😕.....does it mean lecture or something like that..........sab rani ko is kay liye blame kartay hain😆Yaar pravachan means lecture. long explantation or bhashan! Yeh kaafi hai? Aur synonyms mujhe nahi aata!😳

Originally posted by: andromeda_kia

Wow,Rosh,double update.I just dunno what to say or write for that matter.Mai to dreamland mein hoon.Aura mere ghar ke bahar bhi baarish ho rahi hai.Pata nahin who will cum to catch me!! 😍 😆

Neways i hope they meet again soon!!!

Originally posted by: darshana23

wow Rosh I loved it completely specially Rani ............. Bechare Yudi ko chup kara diya??????????

Originally posted by: sadia sheikh

i loved it i dont have time to comment yet but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continnue asap

Originally posted by: jazzybabes7

ooo ilove the idea of this.. rani not knowing who yudi is... totally opposite to the way it was in rkab !! im liking the way this story is unfolding.. cnt wait to read on!!! xx