FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 8

Rani in the meanwhile had finished giving BR the juice and medicines all the time thinking how narrowly she escaped from his sight. She had felt Yudi stopping his work and about to turn and she fled from there realizing she had been standing there for a long time😳. She somehow wanted to see his face but missed. She was mesmerized of what she saw and some unknown attraction is just pushing her towards him....☺️she gets out of her silly thoughts and starts' taking care of BR. Rani massages BR's leg with some herbal leaves provided to reduce the swelling. She all of a sudden notices that there are no herbal leaves left, so she instantly rushes to inform Dinu kaka.😕

She goes to Dinu kaka's room and knocks it but there is no answer. She thinks he might have gone somewhere out and decides to leave but she hears someone coughing in the room. She slowly opens the door and gets in. She finds Dinu kaka lying on the bed unable to wake up.😲😲

She rushes to him and asks: Kaka kya huva aapko? Aap teek toh hain?😔

She touches his forehead and feels the temperature quite high and says again: Kaka aapko toh bahut tez bukar, Hum abhi kisi ko bulaate hai.😲

She runs outside and spots Saksham coming.

She runs in that direction and tells him: Saksham ji, Jaldi se kisi doctor ko bulayiye, Dinu kaka ko bahut tez bukaar hai!😲😲

Saksham: Kya? Hum abhi unhe dekhte hai, aap chinta mat kijiye! Yeh unko aksar aisa ho jaata hain.😭

He hurries towards the room and finds him lying pale.

He immediately instructs Rani: Rani aap thodi der yahaan rukhiye . Hume Kunweji ne kuch saumpa hai, Hum unse bataana hoga ki woh kaa humse baad mein hoga aur turant hume Doctor ke paas jaana hai.😕 Tab tak aap please yahin rukhiye. Aur haan jaate jaate hum kisi naukar ke haath kuch aavashyak davaaiyaan bhej dete hai prathmik chikitsa (first aid) ke liye!😊

Rani: Ji..Aap Jaldi se doctor ko leker aa jayiye!😊

Rani waits in the room while Saksham goes to Yudi's room.🤔

Yudi: Arre Saksham, Kya huva? Aapne woh files dekh liya?
Saksham: Maaf kijeye Kunwerji, Who pitaaji ki tabeeyat achanak kharab ho gayi. Hum aapse yahi anurodh karne aaye the ki kya hum woh kaam baad mein kar sakte hai?😔
Yudi: Aap chinta mat kijeye aur jaldi jaakar doctor ko bulayiye. Hum khud kar lenge. Lekin aap doctor ko kaise bulayenge? Aaj toh bees tariikh hain aur aap toh jaante hain har bees tareek ko unki chutti hain!😲

Saksham: Haan Kunwerji. Hum toh bhul hi gaye. Ab mehal ke bahar jaana hoga doctor ko bulaane ke liye. Hum toh pehle yeh davayiyaan (showing a strip of medicines) kissi se bhijvaate hain!

Yudi: Saksham pehle se aap ko der ho rahi hai, davaiyaan hume dijiye. Hum unhe dete hain!😃

Saksham horrified and asks him: Lekin Kunwerji aap kaise-😲😲

Yudi: Aap woh sab mat sochiye, samay beeta jaa raha hain. Aap jaldi jaayiye.😊

Saksham is very apprehensive but does not disobey Yudi's orders and goes out.😊

Yudi quickly goes to Dinu kaka's room.

Rani in the meanwhile is angrily 😡 waiting in the room checking the door every now and then.

Yudi tries to get in but is stopped there!😲

Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Rosh, I see you are taking lessons from Darshana for those cliffhanger. I liked this part though. YuRa are going to meet soon I hope. Do update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh, I see you are taking lessons from Darshana for those cliffhanger. I liked this part though. YuRa are going to meet soon I hope. Do update soon.

OMG! Bobbie...You are so fast, I just updated it and you finished reading!
I dont think this was a cliff hanger...you can guess what is going to happen.... right?
Thanks for liking it.....
Next update hopefully tomorrow and all I can tell you is they are surely going to meet!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Rosh not fair....................cliff hanger pay lakay chordia...........

aur aaj to 20 tareekh nahin hai na 😉............hehehhe who cares ............i love kay doc. is not available...............aur yudi is coming towards dinu kaka's room 😛...............jaldi bhago yudi kay bachay is say pehlay kay rani bhaag jaiy😆

BTW i m totally loving this update aur love u too....................aik ticket main 2 mazay..............1 teer say 2 shikaar.............aur double treat 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
kisne roka yudi ko why did you stop there for this is not fair di bobbie teekh keh rahi hain have you been takin lessons from darsh di plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update fast again
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Hey Rosh not fair....................cliff hanger pay lakay chordia...........

aur aaj to 20 tareekh nahin hai na 😉............hehehhe who cares ............i love kay doc. is not available...............aur yudi is coming towards dinu kaka's room 😛...............jaldi bhago yudi kay bachay is say pehlay kay rani bhaag jaiy😆

BTW i m totally loving this update aur love u too....................aik ticket main 2 mazay..............1 teer say 2 shikaar.............aur double treat 😛
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Cliff hanger? Kaisa cliff hanger? Mujhe woh sab nahi pata yaar!😳😆
update aur ek hafte ke liye bees tarikh hi hai!
Thankkkkkk you so much dear! Iam glad ki you enjoyed!
woh double update kyunki pata nahi aagla update kab hai!
Mujhe bhi comments padke bahut mazaa aaya!🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sadia sheikh

kisne roka yudi ko why did you stop there for this is not fair di bobbie teekh keh rahi hain have you been takin lessons from darsh di plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update fast again

Yudi ko kisi ne bhi nahi roka...!
Ok jaldi update kar deti hoon! Haan woh Darsh ke FF pad padke aadat ho gayi na issliye!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 9

Rani: Aap itne dheere se aa rahe hai? Davai kahaan hai? Jaldi se inhe dijeeye!

Rani doesn't know she is talking to the prince because she had neither seen his photo nor him directly! She thought it was the servant who Saksham had sent for looking after Dhinu Kaka. Yudi as usual was dressed in the most simplest way and no one could tell that he was a prince!

Yudi: Hume maaf kijeeye. Hum toh bas ...

Rani: Koi baat nahi. Ab aap inka khayal rakhiye, Hum chalte hai.

Yudi: Lekin -

Rani(In a very concerned manner): Kya huva? Koi problem hai kya? Aapko pata hai naa, aapko kya kya karna hai?

Yudi: Jee..... Nahi, Hum bas -

Rani: Chodye inn sab baaton ko, ab baaton ka waqt nahi hai. Hum batate hain ki aapko kya karna hai. Aap jaldi se paani laayiye, hum geela kapda laate hai!

Yudi: Are you sure? -

Rani: Ab jaldi jaayiye warna inki tabeeyat aur bigad jaayega.

Yudi goes and powders the tablet and mixes it with the water. He lifts Dhinu kaka's head gently and makes him drink the medicine.

Rani hands over the wet cloth to Yudi. Yudi stares at her not knowing what to do. Rani goes near him and asks him:

Rani: Aap yahaan naye hai?

Without allowing him to answer she continues to instruct each and every method and leaves the room.

She is about to return but suddenly remembers something and asks him,

Rani: Kya aap humariliye ek kaam kar sakte hai?

Yudi lifts his head up just to see those beautiful pair of eyes. Those almond shaped eyes are just indicating her innocence and beauty. He keeps staring at her until she speaks again.

Rani: Aap Bhanumati ji se poochke BR sahiba ke liye Jadi bootiyaan jo rakhi hai, woh laa sakte hai, Woh Kahtam ho gayi, aur hum Abhi nahi jaa sakte hai kyunki humne BR ko bahut der se akela choda hai, Hum unke halaat dekhkar phir lauthe hai.

Seeing his hesitation , Rani understands the situation and tells him she would do it herself and not to worry about it anymore. She asks to take care of Dhinu kaka and leaves.

Yudi tries to stop her but she is gone, disappeared like wind. He is totally bewildered of what happened. He just met a person who did not know he was! He is shocked to the core. He had never been in such a situation where others instructed and he followed. This girl had not allowed him to open his mouth!! The way she showed concerned towards Dhinu kaka was remarkable and he liked her caring nature.

He was astonished by her act - that was an understatement-Because what he experienced was more than astonishment!

He knew the truth will come out very soon and she will come to apologize to him! But he did not want any apology, but he was enjoying this..At least he play a role of commoner in front of someone! He rarely met someone who opposed his opinions, they would either do it either out of fear or to impress him, but he was not impressed, but today he genuinely was!

The child hood desire of having friends, craving for company and to be a normal person had raised its head in his heart. He decided to give in until she found out the truth herself, but he decided no matter what he would not tell her the truth, because the first time in his life he is able to act as a common man, he would net let go off the opportunity whatsoever!

Suddenly he was broken out his thought when Dhinu kaka coughed. He looked over and touched his forehead and fever had come down a little but still burning hot! In the meantime, he still thinking of Rani!

Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OYE huay..........................Wah ............Mazaa agaya.............kya update hai..
BUT .............it was too short..................

I love almond eyed rani.............n i loved YUDI............wah wah .......meetha meetha dard in his heart.........😛.............

Loved ur idea.....Rani doesn't recognize him as prince☺️....n ordering him...😎......Zabardast ....n Cool idea......Really awesome yaar......mainay to aisa soocha hi nahin tha😛

I cant wait.................update soon...............ab to tujhay agla part jaldi likhna hi hoga.....c'mon dont make me wait too long.....TU Sun rahi hai na....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kya baat hai rosh! Mulakat ho to aisi.Awesome!!!!!Continue soon!!ok,me very excited,but all of the above still very true 👏 👍🏼

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