FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
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woooow
double update yayyyyy!!!!
that was really sweet.. rani asking everyone not to hassle kunwarji.. and standing admiring him.. i like this rani.. instead of constantly looking down at floor she is bolder and confident enough to watch him working out.. hai hai.. methinks love will soon be in the air !! :P update soon hun!! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazzybabes7

woooow
double update yayyyyy!!!!
that was really sweet.. rani asking everyone not to hassle kunwarji.. and standing admiring him.. i like this rani.. instead of constantly looking down at floor she is bolder and confident enough to watch him working out.. hai hai.. methinks love will soon be in the air !! :P update soon hun!! xx

😃😃
Thanks a lot Jaz...Me glad that you liked it!!
Will surely try to update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 6

He sees the curtain moving and finds that no one is standing near the door. Rani on the other hand had run when she felt him moving. She reaches BR's room breathing heavily thinking of her narrow escape!

Yudi turns towards the mirror again and looked. He thought it just reflected a simple person in front of him; He was too modest to think above it! But the Mirror reflected an entirely different person. A person with Sharp features, high cheek bones and intense eye which was filled with many emotions, intelligence, kindness, generosity, calmness, respect, love and affection. His image was polished and suave; and successful.

Yudi thinks about his past when Kids of his age were playing, as he was a prince so he had no permission to play and had responsibilities to fulfill. Being an eldest in the family, he had to take care of his brothers and sisters, he was not allowed to live his life, he was treated as big and others had to follow! He could not share his feelings to anyone and he craved for that someone. Mother also being in such a critical stage, He could not converse with his father because he was the king and had no time for his silly sentiments. He lost his fathers love because he was immersed in his business and hearing others difficulties, he understood his father that he also had some duties and responsibilities and cannot always spend time with the family. Yudi at young age learnt how to solve problems of the commoner and not to communicate with anyone unnecessarily!

To kill his solitude, Yudi immersed himself in libraries, horse riding and art galleries. Soon after the completion of his graduation, he joined his father to run their business empire. His father was a brilliant mentor. Next few years Yudi had become invaluable to the company, His presence was inexplicable to his father. RS felt as though some burden has been taken off from his shoulders. Yudi was given more and more responsibilities, reorganizing various divisions and conquering as many projects as possible from all over the world. He was the hearth throb of many girl but he himself did not have any idea about girls and speaking to them was worse than giving an exam!

But whenever he thought about any of the girls, unknowingly he just picked up the duppata which he got on the Jalsa night,he took the Duppata everywhere he went and confided his feelings to it though someone was hearing him and healing his wound of loneliness. That girl's mesmerizing voice had really taken him on top of the world and did not want to return back from the reverie.

A small smile appeared in his lips but vanished as soon as it came....He knew why. It was all a waste of remembering that girl. All he has to do if he meets her is return back the duppata and compliment her voice! He was helpless as he was fixed in that situation!

He thought about the conversation he had with his father and his reply to that the previous day. His thoughts were still haunting him yet he thought there was nothing wrong in giving it a try but one mistake could change his life for ever and cannot even think of coming back! But past is past and today's evening is going to change his destiny for ever!

PS: Please ignore the typos and sorry for the ultra short part!
Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
hey Rosh wowwwwwwwwwwwwww.............ur back with FF...............BINGOOO...........................hehehehhehheee🄳
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oh no.............yudi didn't see rani

tum nay usay bhaga dia...............chal koi baat nahin.........kabhi to milaygi......
it was short ,sweet n cute šŸ‘.....keep it upšŸ‘šŸ¼

u know dear it was a treat..............cz i was waiting for 18th june.............hehehhehehheheee
Edited by Faiza_sam - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great update rosh.ab to yura ko milao. Bechara yudi kab tak duptte se kam chalayega.
keep it up.
chalo RKAB is repeating the song now as well.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

hey Rosh wowwwwwwwwwwwwww.............ur back with FF...............BINGOOO...........................hehehehhehheee🄳
🄳
oh no.............yudi didn't see rani

tum nay usay bhaga dia...............chal koi baat nahin.........kabhi to milaygi......
it was short ,sweet n cute šŸ‘.....keep it upšŸ‘šŸ¼

u know dear it was a treat..............cz i was waiting for 18th june.............hehehhehehheheee

Milenge...Milenge zaroor milenge! Lekin sahi waqt par (Do I sound like Jhumki?)
Thank you so much...I might just post another part tomorrow because after that I will be quite busy!
Chalo..Tumhe achcha laga, Mujhe bahut khushi huyi! Thank you so much for reading!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramas

great update rosh.ab to yura ko milao. Bechara yudi kab tak duptte se kam chalayega.

keep it up.
chalo RKAB is repeating the song now as well.

Thank you so Much di!😃
I'll make them meet very fast! 😳
RKAB mein toh Yudi duppata ko bhul gaya aur duppate wali ko bhi!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rosh, loved it.....Kunwar sharing his feeling.....please update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Rosh, loved it.....Kunwar sharing his feeling.....please update soon.

Thanks Bobbie!
I'll try to update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
Thank you so much Sadia!

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