FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 2

Originally posted by: pop77

wow Samira..i agree with kirti still feel shiver in my body..

please continue..

Originally posted by: Shafza

Simra that was excellent...damn the creatives they can go on a strike as long as they like (ha..just joking..😕)...we've got our own writers!!

Have to echo Nish's comments and say its definately the continuity issue the way you've linked the epi with ur piece..I can see this happening after the lake scene...and its so true..if it wasnt the strike then how would we have come across such fab VM's and FF's...and ur one of the few who have managed both...well done!

Well here is Part 2...I hope you all like it. I wrote it out of happiness of the strike ending. Hopefully the strike stays over...ENJOY! and plz let me know if how I can improve!

Part 2

Yudi walked towards Rani while she was pretending to be searching for clothes and went a stood behind her. He leaned down as whispered in her ear, "Aap hume phir se chup chup kar dekh rahin thi?" Rani surprised to hear him behind her twirled around only to be trapped by his arms on either side of her. She looked at him in shock surprised to find him behind her when she had just seen him standing right in front of her just a minute ago. Blushing at the thought of being caught spying on him she just shook her head and said, "Nahin, woh to hum soonch rahe the kay hum...hum..."

Yudi smiling whispered, "Jee aap soonch rahi thi kay?" Rani flustered just said, "woh, hum soonch rahe the kay hume der ho rahi hai, aap jaldi say kapde badal lain phir hame jaana chahiye."

Yudi just shook his head at her and said, "Theek hai, laikin hum kapde badlain bhi to kahan pe." Rani looked around and sees the kids that had interrupted them earlier. Remembering the moment in the lake she blushes. Yudi sees this and trailing his fingers along her cheek asks, "Aap aisa kya soonch rahi hain jo aap ke gal itne lal ho gai hain." Rani embarrassed quickly pointed at the children and said, "Hum un bachon say poonch kay atay hain, shayad un ko koi jaga pata ho jahan hum kapde badal lein?"

Yudi seeing her point turned and Rani used this opportunity to create some distance from him. Having in so close to her was bringing those feelings in her stomach again, she didn't know how she was going to handle being alone with him for the next few days. She was used to admiring him from afar and wishing for him to be hers. Having him completely to herself was like a dream and she prayed that this was real and that nothing was going to come between them because being with him and seeing him every day had become as necessary as breathing to her, if something happened she would not be able to survive. She then shook her head and told herself to stop thinking such thoughts and looked around to find that Yudi had put on a shirt was talking to the children. She stared at him and smiled lovingly at him happy that everything was perfect.

Yudi turned around to see her smiling at him with such a loving expression in her eyes that he just kept staring. Rani seeing him staring at her blushed and went to get her clothes. Yudi felt a tug on his pants and looked down to see a little girl staring at him. She said, "Aap ko kapde badal ne the na to aap hamare saath chaliye." He nodded and said, "Jee, hum bas apni patni ko bula kea ate hain," smiling because he was finally able to call Rani his wife.

He walked over to Rani and said, "Chaliye hum ne kapde badalnay ka intezaam kar liya hai." Rani picked up the clothes she had taken out for him and herself as he locked up the car and said, "Chaliye." Yudi pretending to be taking the clothes from her gripped her hands knowing that Rani wouldn't let him take them used it as an excuse to hold her hands even if it was just for a second. As he predicted Rani said, "Nahin Kuwarji hum pakare wai hai na, aap chaliye, hum sahi hain." Yudi just squeezed her hands tighter and was about to let go when he felt her grip his hands a little tighter. He looked at Rani in shock who herself was surprised at her bold move and was blushing. Yudi smiled happy that she was becoming more comfortable with him. He then remembered the children and looked back at them to see him all staring and laughing at them. He shook his head to clear his thoughts and getting Rani's attention nodded towards them. She embarrassed by being caught by the children again nodded and started walking with Yudi following her.

The children took them to a small village nearby. The little girl who had tugged on Yudi's pants earlier took them to her home and called out to her parents. Her mother came out and hearing that they needed a place to change showed them to their bathroom. Yudi upon reaching the bathroom smiled remembering the time in the village when Rani had shown him to her to the bathroom in her house and how he had slipped and she had fallen on him. He looked at Rani and smiling said, "Aap pehle kapde badal lijiye. Hum aapke baad badal lainge aur hum jaante hain ke aap kya kehne wali hain, kay hume pehle kapde badal line chaiye kyuke hume sardi lag jai ge laikin hum aapke koi baat nahin suna chahte. Aap jaiye hum aapka intezar Karenge." Rani surprised at him knowing her so well walked in to the bathroom and started to change into a green sari, one of ones that her kuwarji had chosen himself for her mahira ki rasam. While wrapping it around herself she remembered how shocked she had been to see Saksham and was grateful that she had such a loving husband, blushing at the word husband, who cared enough to ensure that her family would not be embarrassed for any reason. She finished changing and walked out to see Yudi playing soccer with the children just as he had been the day when she had taken him to see how village people lived. She smiled and stared at him until she heard a cough next to her. She saw the little girl's mother smiling at her and got flustered. Naina, the girl's mother, smiled and said, "Aap dono ki jodi aisi lagti hai jaisa ram aur sita ki. Aaiye humne aap k liye chai banai hai." Rani embarrassed thanked her and said, "Jee shukriya, hum bas aate hain." Naina smiled and walked away.

Rani walked over to Yudi to tell him that he could go change but just as she was about to reach him he turned around to pass the ball and ended up knocking them both over. Yudi noticed that she was wearing one of the saris he had chosen for her and said, "Aap is sari main bohot achi lag rahi hain. Bulkul aik pari jaisi. Hume pata tha ke yeh sari aap per bohot achi lagay gi."

Rani happy that he liked the way just smiled at him and they both were lost in each other's eyes. Then they heard the giggling and remembered where they were. Yudi got off her and helped her up. He held on to her hand and said, "Hum abhi kapde badal kar aate hain." Rani just looked down and nodded. Yudi walked into the bathroom whistling.

Rani just stood there staring at him feeling like all was right with the world. She had everything that she had never even dared to dream of. She remembered when the fortune teller had predicted that she would one day be a rajkumari and when Gauri had said that she thought that Rani should marry kuwarji not Rajkumari Bhoomi and all the other events that had led to this point. The point in her life where everything was perfect, where all her unsaid dreams had come true, the point where everything in the world was beautiful, where she and kuwarji had been accepted by everyone and most importantly the point when she was forever joined to her kuwarji and he was to her.

Nice Simara ..waiting for next part..