FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wooow simra that was greattttttt
Having in so close to her was bringing those feelings in her stomach again, she didn't know how she was going to handle being alone with him for the next few days.
ooooo we know how rani would feel... with yudi so close... hai hai hai im gonna do a rakhie and faint! hehehe :P
xxxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Still suffering from a shortage of words...
...so
First I was like 😃, Then I was like😆. Then a little bit woah!☺️, and a little bit wahey!👏. Then I went to woohoo!, and then aah 😍, before finally I went *THUD*!
So cheers for that.👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww!!!
thankss for the lovely read :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you!

Originally posted by: tickette97

its reallly gud keep it up!



Thanks I am glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: monu1101

Nice one Sims.. I loved this Yudi tickling Rani of course with his naughty antics n words.. I just loved it when he said 'Aaap fir se hamein chhup chhupkar dekh rahi thi?' and 'Aap aisa ka soch rahi hai ki aapke gaal laal ho gaye'😉😆
Loved it sims..as u said in the post.. Its really perfect...👏



Thanks monu! 😳 ur very sweet!

Originally posted by: pop77

Nice Simara ..waiting for next part..



Thanks! I'll do my best to update soon!

Originally posted by: bsingapury

wow simra it is really very romantic hmmmm yudi playing soccer and too many mastis

keep it up dear
waiting for more



Thanks beenadi (I hope you dont mind me calling you that)! I have no idea where the romance is coming from...LOL

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

"Aap aisa kya soonch rahi hain jo aap ke gal itne lal ho gai hain."
Rani just stood there staring at him feeling like all was right with the world. She had everything that she had never even dared to dream of.
Beautiful Simra, loved it!
So all her dreams came true. I hope even more come true in part 3 😳 😛



Thanks Nisha!!! 😃 Who knows what will happen in Part 3. I just sit down to type when I feel like it and go with the flow...

Originally posted by: jazzybabes7

wooow simra that was greattttttt

Having in so close to her was bringing those feelings in her stomach again, she didn't know how she was going to handle being alone with him for the next few days.
ooooo we know how rani would feel... with yudi so close... hai hai hai im gonna do a rakhie and faint! hehehe :P
xxxx



LOL...don't faint! 😆 I am glad you liked it so much, thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.sooon



Thanks Janu, I'll do my best to update soon!

Originally posted by: rakhie

Still suffering from a shortage of words...

...so
First I was like 😃, Then I was like😆. Then a little bit woah!☺️, and a little bit wahey!👏. Then I went to woohoo!, and then aah 😍, before finally I went *THUD*!
So cheers for that.👍🏼



Still! LOL... I made u faint?! I feel so special...I love how you have such cute reactions for all the parts!

Originally posted by: pinstripedshirt

awwww!!!

thankss for the lovely read :)



Thanks! I am glad you liked it!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ixl105

please post next part



I'll do my best to soon! Promise! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here is the next part. I wasn't planning on updating but after reading the article this came into my head and would not leave!!! I hope you like it.

Part 3

Rani was pulled out of her thoughts by Naina calling out to her from the house. She shook her head to clear her thoughts and walked over to the house and offered to help Naina with the tea. As she made Yudi's tea she remember how just that morning her had tricked her into believing that he was sleeping and how he had been in a mischievous mood since. Remembering this made her feel embarrassed and when Yudi walked in at that moment she blushed a deep shade of red. He looked so handsome in his black shirt and tan pants. She picked up his tea and walked over to him. As she handed it to him, she felt him gently grasp her hands before taking it from her. She smiled shyly, ducked her head and walked over to Naina. She thanked her for all her hospitality saying, "Aap ka bohot shukriya, agar aap hame nahin milte to hum pata nahin kya karte." Naina responded, "Is mein shukriya ki kya zaroorat hai? Hum aap dono say milke bohot khush hui. Bhagwan kare aap dono hamesha khush rahen."

Meanwhile Yudi has finished his tea and walked over to Rani and said, "Rani, ab hame chalna chahiye, warna bohot der hojai gi." Rani nodded and once again thanking Naina both of them started walking back to their car. As they were walking through the village, Rani stumbled over a few stray rock and Yudi reached out to steady her. She thanked him and they continued on their way with Yudi walking close to her, his hand brushing against hers as they walked and slowly he captured her fingers with his. Rani looked up at him startled and then in a move surprising them both, intertwined her fingers with his and looked away. Yudi squeezed her hand tighter and smiled. When they got to the car he helped her into the car and after making sure she was settled, got in and started to drive once again. Looking over at Rani, he saw her hands in her lap and reached over and grabbed one with his left, holding it even as he changed gears. Rani was surprised but she didn't stop him. Yudi was happy that she was finally opening up to him and felt comfortable with him touching her. A comfortable silence filled the car. The two of them didn't need words between them. The silence and the hold that he had on her hand was enough to convey their feelings to each other.

After a little while, Yudi noticed that Rani was nodding off. He said, "Rani, aap theek hai na? Hum abhi tohdi si hi der mein hum poonch ne walay hain." Rani looked up and said, "Hum theek hai kuwarji. Hum to bus asay hi apni ankhon ko araam de rahe the." Yudi smiled and said, "Aap araam kar lijye, hum aapko ponch tey hi utha deinge." Rani started saying something but Yudi looking at the road just said, "Bas. Aap phirse churu ho gai na, ke aap kaisa araam kar sakti hain jub hum jage hui hain? Laikin hum bhi aapko bata dete hain, kay ab hum aapke pati hain aur is ka matlab hai kay ab aap ki zimidari ab hum pe hai. To ab aap chup chap araam ki jiye aur hume harmari zimidari utha ne dijiye. Hum iske aage kuch nahin suna chahte hain."

Rani who had been staring at him in shock blushed when he called himself her husband and decided not to argue with him. She closed her eyes and leaned back in her seat allowing herself to relax and get some rest. She was lost in her own thoughts of her now complete life and slowly gave into her tiredness and went to sleep.

Yudi looked over to see her asleep and pulled the hand that he was still holding to his lips and kissed it gently. He once again thanked god for her presence in his life and continued to drive until they finally reached their destination.

The sun had set and the area was covered in a blanked of darkness. He leaned over and gently shook her shoulder while whispering her name in her ear. Rani slowly woke up and turned to see his face right in front of hers and they both got lost in each other's eyes. Yudi slowly moved forward and Rani with nowhere to go turned red and looked down. He smiled and brushed his lips gently over her ear whispering, " Rani, Aap hamari jaan hai, hume nahin pata hum itne saalon aap ke bina kaise rahe." Rani shivered feeling his breath tickling her cheek and ear. She smiled happily hearing his words and staring into his eyes whispered back , "Kuwarji, hume bhi nahin pata kay him aapke bina itne saal kaisa rahe laikin ab to hum hamesha ke liye aap ke hain." Yudi smiled after hearing this and said, "Chalein?" Rani nodded and he got out of the car and walked around to help her out. Rani looked up to see individual cottages at a distance set up around a larger building. There was such breathtaking beauty around her that her breath caught. She looked at Yudi confused and he led her into the larger building. As they went in they were greeted by the manager who gave them the key to their own little cottage and informed them that their things had been taken there already. He led them to their cottage, a small little one set apart from all the others surrounded completely by beauty. Yudi thanked him and he left.

Rani was taking in the surroundings when she felt herself being lifted and she looked up to see Yudi laughing at her shocked face. She held on as he took her into the cottage. She looked around and saw that the entire place was filled with beautiful furniture covered with flowers but he didn't give her a chance to take it in. He continued walking until they entered the master bedroom. The entire floor was covered in rose petals and Rani saw a huge bed taking up most of the room in the room covered in silk covers surrounded by flowing white net curtains. She blushed and looked away and whispered, "Ab to hume uthar dijiye." Yudi just laughed and said, "Kyun? Hume to lagta hai ke aap bilkul sahi jag ape hain. Hamare bahon mein, hamare dil ke pas." As he said this he started walking towards the bed and sat down holding her in his lap. Rani now completely shocked and embarrassed beyond belief just looked away and said, "Woh, kuwarji, hame hame jaane dijiye na." Yudi turned her face towards him and pretending to be sad said, "Aap hamesha hum say dur kyun jaati hain? Lagta hai kay aap hamare saat waqt nahi bitana chahti hain. Theek hai jaiye." With this he released her. Rani hearing this was saddened that she had caused him pain. She reached out hesitantly and said, "Aisa mat kahiye kuwarji. Hum to bas thode sai ghabragiye the." She blushed and looked away. "Woh, woh, hum, woh' , " she stuttered until she blurted out still looking away from him, "woh aap jab hamare pass hote hain to humare under aik ajeeb si feeling hoti hai aur aise lagta hai kai pait mein titliyan urdh rahi hain." She still refusing to look at him walked over to the window.

Yudi surprised that she would open up to him like that was pleased that she had and followed her to the window. He stood behind and gently grasped her from behind. He gently leaned forward and whispered into her ear, "Jab hum aapke pass hote hain to hume bhi kuch aisa hi lagta hai." He slowly pulled away and looked at the crisscrossing ties holding her blouse together. He slowly reached up to her pallu and brushed it aside. Rani went completely still and her breathing sped up. She didn't quite know what to do with herself. Yudi slowly leaned and placed a gentle kiss on the skin that he had exposed. He then slowly undid the ties holding her blouse together and turned her around. Rani looked at the floor, her cheeks red and her heart racing. He gently picked her up and carried her over to the bed. He put her down and sat down himself. He leaned towards her and she turned away. He smiled at her embarrassment and kissed her cheek and moved up kissing her eyes and forehead while pushing them both into a laying position.

A wind blew through the partially open window and the curtains around the bed danced in the wind celebrating the love between the prince and his soul mate because this was a couple made in heaven and no power on earth could break them apart. He was a part of her and she was a part of him without each other they were both incomplete.

Edited by sakuraa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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"Kyun? Hume to lagta hai ke aap bilkul sahi jag ape hain. Hamare bahon mein, hamare dil ke pas."

"woh aap jab hamare pass hote hain to humare under aik ajeeb si feeling hoti hai aur aise lagta hai kai pait mein titliyan urdh rahi hain."

☺️😍

"He was a part of her and she was a part of him without each other they were both incomplete."



It's...I'm...like...wow.

I love the stuff that comes into your mind 😛 I hope even more gets there and we get more scenes from you.

Edited by Nisha_07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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"A comfortable silence filled the car. The two of them didn't need words between them. The silence and the hold that he had on her hand was enough to convey their feelings to each other."
👍🏼
"woh aap jab hamare pass hote hain to humare under aik ajeeb si feeling hoti hai aur aise lagta hai kai pait mein titliyan urdh rahi hain."
☺️😳 Me too Rani, oh me too!
"the love between the prince and his soul mate because this was a couple made in heaven and no power on earth could break them apart. He was a part of her and she was a part of him without each other they were both incomplete."
👍🏼😍 Uff! Fantastic. But yeh dil mange more...so...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
Simra just brilliant.. i mean i m totally speechless ..what to say .. u know i m infact imagining Kapil Anjali like this ..ur last 2 paras has actually created goosebumps in me ..please have more .. i want to read it yaar!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey just wanted to say the three parts were AMAZING! Keep up the good work and cant wait for more! 😳

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