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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Happy new year to you & your family as well.

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Interesting concept

Looks like a story full of twists and turns

Cant believe they r seperated frm 6 yrs.

Looks like something major took place which seperated them.

N now zoya wants divorce

But it was Bbeautifully written

Their convo was full of passion.

Waiting for chapter1

Plz update soon n do pm me

~JAZ~

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
Bestu, Choto, Choco, Tehs, Saima Api, Nim, Adi, Sue, Shweta, Dillz, Anopama, Annie, Ridz, Yash, Mags, Aju, Arpita, Asif and last but not the least Mayur😃

Thank you Ashu darling

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Omg!new story
&what a updt..
Intense strt..
What had hapnd in the past?very intrstng..
&no zoyan...i knw u ll not *tongue*

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Interesting start...
looking forward to read more...
Thanks for pm

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

I know I know late entry but entry Mari zaroor...😆

And yippeee...welcome back Aroo the writer...

I mean after so long a full fledged Asya FF I will give us..

And you how eagerly I wait to read anything new on Asya,

I'm so glad u decided to come back with a surprise for us.

The banner is good.

The theme the plot is all so good...

Coming to the prologue...

When it started I was thinking what is it...

The came the part he saw her

Then came Ayaan..

I thought again ayaan is his brother here.

But twist hai wahan..

Then the way he pulled her to the corner..

Wow...

That part was so nicely written..

Like there is a lot and lot of past between the two..

And then a boom they are married.

Ok it makes me happy to read that they are married but again sad too that they are apart for such a long period of time.

They are pain...both of them

And reading the part it seems they have trust issues with each other and a third wheel has taken advantage of this situation and created a rift.

Asad ka last dialogue was awesome.

Waiting for updates very eagerly..

I hope u won't take ages for those.

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@Sp8699

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Nice one waiting for the story

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

happy that you have started a new story.

asya already married.wonder what happened for them to part ways.

zoya is engaged to someone else and wanted divorce.

interesting..waiting for future parts.

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: AkaiBara
I

Me

Myself

UNRES

Arshu darling sab se pehle tight hug for your new story 🤗

I'm sooo happy to see you back... blv nahi aa raha kya??? pata hai mai Bano se hamesha complain karti hoon ke mere andar ka reader mar raha just bcox my fav writers quit writing 😭 Choco and Saima Aapi ka toh proper quitting scene tha par tu or teri Apple aka my BESTU bina notice ke gayab ho par jab mene Prologue padha I was like FINALLY

abhi ek or imp baat... response ko dill pe mat lena... forum dead hai par apne loyal readers are here toh bas apni mehnat wasool hojayegi 😉

abhi story pe aati hoon 😳

tu jaanti hai na mai SAD plots se door bhaag rahi thi... not literally par dill karta tha kuch happy and positive sa ho par jab mene yeh padha na mera pehla pyaar jaag gaya 😎

mera pehla pyaar pata hai na... SAD Stories 😳 ❤️

abhi update ki baari 😉

amazingly written Arshu 👏 loved it to the core and I mean it... pata hai jab mene start kiya toh I thought AsYa pehli baar milenge par nahi AsYa toh already ek dosre jaante the... phir meko laga AsYa in love par koi past hai like kuch hua and alag hogaye but tume meko shick plus surprise dia 😃

AsYa married yipeee 🥳

pata hai AsYa chahe poori story ladte rahen rote rahen meko unki shadi se tasalli milti hai ke end mai woh saath honge and I'm so happy wo married hain 😃

mujhe na bohat se sawal poochne regarding past par aise maza kharab hojayega so I'll wait for the update and yes mai WA pe jitn amarzi drama kar ke plot poochon you will NOT reveal it samjhi na 🤓 🤣

dill toh kar raha hai aur bhi bolon par tu jaanti hai mai aksar baaton baaton mai kch zaida bol deti hoon toh mera chup hojana is better 😆

phir se update ki baat karte hain 😉

I love Asad here ❤️ wese toh AsYa in pain par Asad ka dialogue "tum phir se bhaag rahi ho jese 6 saal pehle bhaag ke gayi thi" dill loot liya zalim 👏 👏

overall brilliant plot by wonderful writer

and yes welcome back babz 🤗

P.S tujhe sab se acha mera comment lagna chahiye samjhi na 😈

Hugggiee back to you shona for all the support 🤗

How can you think that I will quit writing on my AsYa😒😲 never ever will it happen meri jaan...Asya were, are and will always be my first love...😳❤️

Han han I know that...jitne hain utne bohat hain coz they still love Asya like ys😳⭐️

Jab mera pehla pyaar phir se jaga hai to tera to jagna hi tha na...after all we are twinnie 😉

Han han mei bhe Asya ko awaen separate krna ka risk hardly lete hn...warna mjhe tera pata hai...tera yeh dirty mind na kya kya Soch ne lagta hai I knw🤣

Yeh ziada code words mai batain na kr...sab ko secret pata chal jana hai😲🤣

Hehehe wo dialogue meko bhe bht mast laga...I was patting my back after writing it😎😆

Love ya babz🤗

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Always_asya
Finally you started an asya story Aroo
love you for this
Awesome story yaar
my favourite concept(sad 😉 )
asad miya is busy in party sharty 😆
zoya madam ne kya kiya got engaged to ayaan without divorcing sher khan and now demandingfor divorce
now on serious mode
it was a beautiful update Aroo sacchi
loved it yaar
asya had their past and got separated
zoya left him six years ago for some reasons of trust
so she saw something may be asad with other girl and asad did not clear anything bcs he wanted to know her trust for him
dekho maine ek minute mein mystery solve kardi with my high alert imagination
🤣
sacchi yaar bahut accha update tha ab jaldi se next update v dedo
aur muje pm chahyie but buddy tumhe hi karna padhega bcs mine buddy buttun is not working
update soon