AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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Posted: 8 years ago

#921

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#922

This is one of my favourite part of this FF till now...

Asad became suspicious of Akram as he came to know about Zoya's disappearance

Akhram is really such a cheap..

How could he even be Asad's friend?

Zoya felt she had to fight her battle all alone like whole her life..except her prince is going to fight all her battles ffrom now on,, she even thought if she agreed then maybe she could reach her Jiju sooner who could protect her...

And then Asad came to rescue his damsel in distress..

Akram was so scared about him..He know the destruction he could cause

He surely did feel it would be better to be dead rather than facing the wrath of Asad Ahmed Khan..

But now no one can help him...

Loved how you explained Asad adoring her even in her unconscious state...

And then he asked his sister to treat her as he can't delay it any further..Its true that his life is also connected with her..

You beautifully penned down about the void he felt on being parting away from her...

He was totally guilty about his actions still demons of his past is haunting him...

Shireen and Maha...are the main cause for his judgement...

And Maha is Pari's mom...more intrigued to know about his past..

He is very much excited to meet Chutki but luck was never in his favour..

Loved how the innocent Pari asked him whether he liked the girl he was mean to and how he made her believe a girl and boy are only friends or enemies..

I am really loving Pari...

Asad did saw her 7 years back and is having dreams of her since then...Poor guy dont know he lost his mind to only one person..who came to his life few days back but into his dreams years back...

Everytime I read about the scenes between Zoya and Dilshad..how Zoya is in hunger for a mother's love, my eyes would tear up...I so love this bond between them..

Asad dropped her in his SPORTS CAR..!!n then at night he went to pick her up in his bike..

The sexual tension and attractions were all well penned..

She made up a lie to her brothers for Asad...n also him admiring a her even in her morning look was all so adorable.

I am really loving the bond between Farooqui siblings and finally Asad realised there is something deep and relaxed as she called Aahil bhai...

Then my favourite part at the Cafe..

Zoya really had guts to pull a prank on Asad and he let her...

And then when she gifted him the book and coffee...He did drink the sweet coffee not just for forgiveness but for her too..

And AAK was gifted the book "Ettiquetes & Manners for Dummies" 😆😆

And then finally he sincerely apologised and also gave her the kiss which he owe her😳

Loving the story..very muchh...❤️❤️..

GREAT JOB DEAR...👏

Going to read this chapter till you update next...

Edited by --Mirage-- - 8 years ago

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Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#923

Did I really wrote that comment??!!!UNBELIEVABLE!!

This is the longest comment I ever wrote...

Thanks to your amazing work...

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anuv6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#924

U just made my day...WHAT A BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.
Thank u fr the long and so beautiful update dear.
god...really its freaking awesome, sooo damn gud dear.
when i finished reading of this update with the last line "he was falling, hopelessly for her", trust me i realized i'm crazy nd falling hopelessely for this story,
Each nd every line...mind blowing, fantabulous.
the emotions expressed through out the story, its like i'm can see nd feel the emotions
honestly i overwhelmed...no words to say,
bz i missed ASYA like Crazy nd this story is one of the story i have nd had alwys looking for, nd every time the update comes...its more than worth wait
i just want to say u r an amazing writer yaar, its from my heart. Trust me.
so coming to the update ,. i luvd ASYA parts, LUVD IT So so much. the longing, pain, loneliness of them, their attraction towards each other...so beautifully written. Marvellous
i laughed via the "sugar" barista parts...So funny
nd that bike riding...WOW
u reminded the QH 1 too,...beautiful parts
I really LUV the way of ur writing...intense nd cute ASYA parts., i cant ever forgt them,. EVER.like asad felt that zoya looks adorable when she is in her half sleeping state.
nd yess that scene is so adorable , when zoya scold everyone fr disturbng her sleep...its cute nd hilarious.
ayaan- aahil-zoya conv, bhai's concern towards their lil sis Zoya...cho chweet they are.nd asad finally relieved bt kind of confused at ayaan -zoya relation.
nd i thnk every one is realizing asad's care towards zoya as Mr. khan feelings are out of control day by day ;)
totally it is an outstanding , marvellous awesome amazing update which i couldnt get enough nd LUVD IT TO THE CORE.
Nw feeling so so exciting nd impatient too fr the nxt update...dreaming on of ASYA.
update sooonish as u can dear...waiting nd waiting .

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anuv6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#925

is there teaser ?? if there, then i missed.
Where is it ??
did i really missed??
here i'm going mad by thnkng wat'll happen nxt, !!!!
U'll not delay the update with the teaser, na !!
dont do that na,...
waiting very eager fr the nxt update...update soon dear

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fatima30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#926

Well today I finally have some time to type a comment!

I read every single one of your updates and smile laugh and cry with the characters! It is simply amazing and written beautifully. ...
I would like to thank you wholeheartedly for writing this wonderful story...I love the lengthy updates and I look forward
to each and every one of them...

I'm loving the tension between Asya now...and wow that kiss on her hand...was so sweet and cute

Looking forward to the next update! 😃

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shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#927

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finally read it

firstly really sorry mujhse long comment nahi likhe jate ( or u cn say i cn't describe my thought/views in words )

But again words can not describe my feelings for this worder full update ( whole story )

so coming to update ..

love ever bit of it ( i luv asya parts the most ) their nok jhok ,..fir wo gift n wo kiss hayee ...

he is falling for her .. ( i knw same with her also )

ab to next prt ka bhi w8 ni hota continue soon,,( i pls asya prt jayada rakhna mujhe bake log pasand nahi hai .)

THE PICS U POSTED ON LAST IS BEAUTIFULL . ( or zoya he dress toh ,,,AAK ne use lacture nahi dia asie dress dekh kr worndering )

plsss update soon

or ha mere chote chore comment se he kaam chalna padega

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Asif

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Posted: 8 years ago

#928

Awesome update

Loved it

He asked the kids abt the girl who was kidnapped & shocked to know that it was zoya.

He reached there & saved her on time. He was guilty for his action which was his biggest mistake as it could destroy her life & anger on himself as his best friend betrayed him.

He know what he do with akram even akram knew as well.

He wanted to apologise but zoya is zoya, never let him complete his words. Liked the bike scene. It shocked them but he can't control himself when it's related to zoya.

Aahil saw her injuries & asked her. He was relieved to hear sis from Ayaan. Liked the way she handled the situation. She can fight with him but can't see his head down with guilt. Malik uncle didn't buy that reason. Gift was wonderful, I simply loved it.

He got to know finally who that new coffee barista is. Finally he completed his task to apologise her & she forgive him.

In sum up, all the scenes written beautifully.

Waiting for next update soon.

Thanks for pm

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Tabs

@hatelove2012

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Posted: 8 years ago

#929

This was super duper awesome. Full of Asya. Love it. Can't wait for more. Finally Asad is eating an inkling about Zoya and his relationship with Ayan and Ashli. Poor Aahil. Hope he is managed to get away from the engagement and poor poor Anaya. I feel so bad for her. She is going to be so heart broken.