AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#911

My condolences

Sorry to hear abt your loss

And here I was all hype for the coming update today

Tht I was hurrying to comment so I dont be left behind

Unres pg 105

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#912

Finished reading part 14..

Very interesting it was

Asya scenes wee nice too..

Welll I don't think we need to guess who the S guy is..

It must be Asad.

I am back with more questions..which I remember now😉😆

Well 1st didn't Anwar and Dilshad find it necessary to let Asad know the back story of Zeenat and why Zoya was coming along with her.

Dint they get the time to inform him even once.

And even now when he is hurling abuses over Zoya about her parents why doesn't Dilshad lets him know the truth?

She is still standing as a spectator.

And when she herself said that Zoya is family why does she keep referring to her as the Mehmaan..

And Asad and Ayaan share such a deep bond then why doesn't Asad know about Ayaan that he has a sister and his family story..

Even when they first went with zeenat's rishta dint he realize this was Ayaan's house...whereas Ayaan knows everything about Asad..

These are some doubts I have while reading..rest is up to u how u show things.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#913

Phew finished reading all the parts..

I'm seriously in love with your story and now can't wait to read more.

Just read your note and sorry for your loss.

Tc and take your time.

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#914

Sorry Guys I know I said Tuesday but I got held back here another day and I don't have my computer with me. Hopefully, Hopefully fingers crosssed I'll be home tomorrow and the update should DEFINITLY be up. I once again thank you for your kindness, patience and understanding. Here's hoping I can get the update up by tomorrow night. First thing as soon as I get home! xoxo!!

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addicted_93

@addicted_93

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Posted: 8 years ago

#915

Just read your note.
So sorry for your loss. Take your time with the update. No worries.

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#916

Okay Guys so I'm finally home and will get started on the update. My internet is acting up again, so your patience is very much appreciated. If I start now it'll take some hours but slowly and surely I will the update the entire part now. Once again, thank you for all your patience and co-operation. Here comes part 17, with YES the big "S" revelation. So I hope you guys seriously enjoy it! YOU BETTER, 😆! and don't forget to leave me nice and long sweet comments! Okay w/o further ado, lets get started...

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy
Okay Guys so I'm finally home and will get started on the update. My internet is acting up again, so your patience is very much appreciated. If I start now it'll take some hours but slowly and surely I will the update the entire part now. Once again, thank you for all your patience and co-operation. Here comes part 17, with YES the big "S" revelation. So I hope you guys seriously enjoy it! YOU BETTER, 😆! and don't forget to leave me nice and long sweet comments! Okay w/o further ado, lets get started...

welcome back
update soonish... i m waiting
ur time start now ... type jadi jaldi 😆

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heike

@heike

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Posted: 8 years ago

#918

Hi daisy
I am new ... love your work

Have you written anything else.
can you please send the links

On page 125 there is no part 17
Kindly repost it

Thanks

Edited by heike - 8 years ago

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#919

Hey guys so part 17 is finally up! I made an error in the A/N and tried to fix it from my phone and the entire thing just got so messed up..so if it puts any of you off like it's putting me off (thanks to the OCD I seemed to have caught from Asad) dont worry I'll be re-editing it tomorrow! For now enjoy the part and drop some love guys! Can't wait to read your comments on this part..especially about the teasers!