AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 64

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Aww, Thanks! I still can't believe it. Am in total shock..I still remember when I posted the intro, characters and first part I thought literally no one would read it and that it was complete garbage and I can't believe today I have 20,000+ views and so much love for my FF! Shall celebrate after I fail my exam tomorrow 😆..I will celebrate all weekend long!

Awesome update dear
Loved it
She broke coffee machine & then his coffee with sugar, only she can do that. Asad was in pain & the song described his pain clearly even zoya felt his pain. Sameer was disgusting. Liked the way zoya stood for herself. She was shaken but decided to fight. Asad Azlan scene was good as well as painful for both. Curious to know the history of azlan accusations on asad. Feroz as usual wanted to know their relation but unsuccessful. Asya scene at cafe & Malik teasing was good. Didn't like Humeira as she just judged her as she like Ayaan. She should get to know their relation & then talk. I feel that S is Asad only. He wanted to know why she was worried. Waiting for next update soon plz. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: -jerry-

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">hay,</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2"> well sorry for a late reply also hope you did well in your exam</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">wishing you to get many more viewers&reader for this FF
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a friendly advice:
I don't know what you might have planned for this FF
but one wrong/bad twist can ruin the entire story/FF</font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">unfortunately it had happened before too</font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">So, just be careful... :-)</font>

Aww Thanks! Fingers crossed the views and comments increase! My exam went well!

😲 You literally have me terrified! What kind of wrong move exactly are we talking about here..I'm scared

Wonderful update Daisy
totally loved it
asad's past haunting him badlly and day by day it is becoming difficult for to him breath
i badlly wanted to know how all this happened though i have a vague idea about it
poor asad already so upset and madam zoya keeping continue her mission how to ruin everything in his house
so it was the incident you were saying that asad will not scold her
she also shocked to see that he did not scold her
asad did not want to worry his mother and sister so pretend to be happy but being a mother dilshaad can see his pain
asad forgets his pain to see zoya in pain and want to erase the sadness from her eyes and ready to do anything for that
zoya as usualy in her impulsiveness changed her coffee with his
loved their banter in cafe
i hate these royals
when they need anything they came to beg
they have no deceny
why cannot they let asad in peace now
even my mood become sour while reading their scenes
zoya's antics are really amazing
even the driver though that his mental balance is not right
loved her way of lesson the stress
so how she marked asad's white haddi
and he did not erase it
one thing i didnot understand why azlan is so angry to see the magazine
in previous chapters he wondered why asad did not look for any girl at IMA and at his bunglow he was teasing him and now he got angry that asad move just bcs he think that asad killed pari's mother
he himself brought every different girl to his house and expecting that asad did not even moven wowi really do not understand his so called love
i really want to kill that sameer
he is crossing the limits now
cannot wait to see asad killing him
asad saw zoya crying but did not much thought about it
oh my god zoya said to zeenat thinking as ayaan
loved the rouge scene
humaira is jealous to see ayaan with zoya and so asad
asad become DJs for zoya
loved the way azlan took care of asad though he himself was the reason behind asad's bad state
asad in his unconsciousness ranted about zoya too and azlan is curious to know who is she
ayaan is really the bestest friend someone wished for
i really loved his bonding with asad and zoya
zoya again doing mischiefs to take revenge from asad
malik make comment about both
being a old man he can see through their fights
i want more malik and zoya bonding
asad got suspected about the signs of depression in zoya
loved zoya's intraction with s guy though i am 101% sure is asad
zoya gave toys to children and laughed with them
asad saw her humanity and respected her though did not admit
zoya's ps4 and jinn
loved that scene too
hope this comment of mine is long enough to fair with long update
thansk for pm
update soon

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

Aww Thanks! Fingers crossed the views and comments increase! My exam went well!

😲 You literally have me terrified! What kind of wrong move exactly are we talking about here..I'm scared

"Sameer Anand Things"
take "ArabFlower's FF Junoon" as example
she lost almost all of her readers due to just one bad/wrong twist.
&
I am sure you aren't that stupid to ruin your FF by your own hand or maybe you are? lol kidding...,
anyways,
just be careful
and
also wish me luck , our third year final is near & I am literally biting my nails 😉

Originally posted by: -jerry-

"Sameer Anand Things"
take "ArabFlower's FF Junoon" as example
she lost almost all of her readers due to just one bad/wrong twist.
&
I am sure you aren't that stupid to ruin your FF by your own hand or maybe you are? lol kidding...,
anyways,
just be careful
and
also wish me luck , our third year final is near & I am literally biting my nails 😉

If you are worried about Zoya actually getting raped by the dirtbag then don't worry. And Best OF LUCK!! You'll Rock it!!

Even i am agreed with @jerry about sameer anand
zoya should not be more manhandled by him
it is enough already
just make asad beat up that moron now
bcs if he did again cheap movement i think story will lost its touch
i started to read this story bcd its storyline matched with qh but in different way which is healthy
hope you would avoid damage

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Even i am agreed with @jerry about sameer anand
zoya should not be more manhandled by him
it is enough already
just make asad beat up that moron now
bcs if he did again cheap movement i think story will lost its touch
i started to read this story bcd its storyline matched with qh but in different way which is healthy
hope you would avoid damage

Gracias

Hey Diasy next update ki timing kya hai 😉 i know its very early to ask but i am eagrly waiting to read hilarious moment of zeenat and zoya and also zeenat taking side of her ladle dever 😆

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Even i am agreed with @jerry about sameer anand
zoya should not be more manhandled by him
it is enough already
just make asad beat up that moron now
bcs if he did again cheap movement i think story will lost its touch
i started to read this story bcd its storyline matched with qh but in different way which is healthy
hope you would avoid damage

Unfortunately it isn't that simple..don't forget guys this sameer isn't a random part time villain who is manhandling zoya for no reason. He is also her Jeejus killer and is an ANAND..he plays one of the most integral roles in the FF if you read the intro. So I can't just kill him off. There is a lot of background there and a lot more to his story but don't worry it will be well handled and not just Asad but even Zoya will show give him what he deserves in due time. Like I said before the story is dark and intense and so I can't sugarcoat too much..I would request you guys to please just trust me. Trust me you will LOVE the story..and AsYa. I appreciate and value all the feedback and advice but don't worry! Their love story and when they will get together will be worth it but in the meantime please enjoy the story! 😳