AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 62

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Are agar cry baby nahi toh sad baby toh bana hi diya na 😆 in whole update he was sad from his past and azlan made it worse

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">S- Go. (Zoya somehow felt compelled to do as he said. No questions asked. She just..she just trusted him. Just as she turned around to walk away and took a step away from him his glove clad hand shot out and grabbed her wrist. Zoya gasped softly at the contact. Her heartbeats spiralling as he touched her. Albeit without skin-skin contact. She hesitantly turned around, breathing heavily as she did and saw him standing in the same position as before, looking straight ahead, not making eye contact with her) </font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">S hi likha hai. Agar Asad hai toh its an error but I checked repeatedly it says S.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">You're making me paranoid😆😆</font>

Originally posted by: Always_asya

well what i gave you my proof and you gave your
i do not understand how is this possible
the page i have saved says two time s and two time asad
i think zoya ke mr jinn bahar nikl aye hai 😉

Originally posted by: Always_asya

many times must I tell you for
you to finally understand to
not leave your home after
sunset? This is KASAULI. It's
dangerous..don't you get that!
Do you have a death wish or
just a general knack for
trouble. Have you seen how
bad the weather is. Theres
going to be a storm and your
out here..(he sounded
exasperated and Zoya looked
bewildered. She had not
expected him to lash out in
worry at her. Why was he
worried for her anyways?
Who was she to him? Why
was he always showing up
before her? Was he following
her) what the hell are you
doing at the library at this
time anyways. (Shook his
head) GO HOME. And STOP
leaving the house after
dark..it's not safe.
Zoya - Wh..wha..t about you?
Is..isn't it unsafe for you too.
Shouldn't you be at home too.
(There was complete silence
for a few minutes. Zoya felt
herself burning under the
intensity with which he stared
at her as she posed that
question to him. The only
sound was of the wind
blowing outside before he
spoke again)
Asad - Hum jaison ka koi ghar
nahin hota. (Zoya felt an
ache in her heart at his
confession. A pain because
she could relate so much to
those words. And her heart
ached for him because she
knew how painful living with
that fact was, and just as her
eye's began softening at him,
almost understandingly/
sympathetically he turned his
back on her again almost as if
he was scared of seeing
something. Her seeing
something in his eyes and/or
him seeing something in her
eyes that he didn't want to or
wasn't ready to.)
Asad - Go. (Zoya somehow
felt compelled to do as he
said. No questions asked. She
just..she just trusted him. Just
as she turned around to walk
away and took a step away
from him his glove clad hand
shot out and grabbed her
wrist. Zoya gasped softly at
the contact. Her heartbeats
spiralling as he touched her.
Albeit without skin-skin
contact. She hesitantly turned
around, breathing heavily as
she did and saw him standing
in the same position as before,
looking straight ahead, not
making eye contact with her)
Asad - Is there something I
should know. Something,
anything you wish to tell me.
(And in that moment Zoya
felt like screaming, screaming
and letting it all out. All her
pain, all her frustration, her
pent up emotions her
heartbreak her years and
years of wounds and suffering
and pain. She didn't know
why but she felt like telling
him EVERYTHING, felt like
falling apart in his arms and

with this you are confusing me

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Haan Asad is generally a sad and angry baby. Uska past, like I repeatedly say is very very dark and troubled not just because of his step father and father and IMA or money issues. There are actual incidents that happened when he grew up that haunt him..like his nightmare that he had in this part in the beginning is VERY crucial and significant to his past. It is one of the main highlights of the story and then Paris mother there is a LOT there that is left hidden at the moment. Iss liye toh Zoyas happiness and smile attracts him. He is a dukhi aatma😆</font>

Originally posted by: Always_asya

I am curious to read what happened with pari's mother
one thing i am trying to say please do not use abusive words in your update
please do not mind me saying it
it is just that it makes the update little ugly

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Oh, that truth will shock you completely! If not haunt you like it haunts Asad. I was very hesitant about writing abusive words because I don't know how all the readers take to abusive language but it makes the update more real because that is how I imagine the situation to play out. The actual story is actually more dark and ugly than what I have introduced so far...which is why in the end I chose to write it!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I don't mind you saying it at all! </font>

Originally posted by: DailyDaisy

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I don't know..IF was giving me trouble yesterday but it says "S" I checked 5 times. </font>