AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

So good upadte n thnx for always giving long updates

luv the asya moment ( more ) finally

n nw as per ayaan & zoya talk i m sure, she is going to stay with them

cn't wait for more . update nxt soon ..

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Loved it

Asya <3

Big family confuses me a little

Continue soon :-))

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

superb part

asya fight in every meeting wow

excited for next

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

continue soon

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Just came across this amazing story

Loved reading it to the core

In love with the plot and the characters of the story

And hats off to you for the amazing execution

Surely the story would get more interesting once zoya moves into asad's house

Looking forward to know what happens next in this amazing story

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

The characterization looks promising..thought too many characters...

Hope the story sees the end and you don't leave it in between..

Will read the story soon

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priya

@preetiasya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

ITS IS RALLY A NICE CONCEPT😊

PLS TRY PM ME😆

a small advise😆

"pls try to maintain gap between each character conversation so tat it looks good & easily understandable".

ITS JUST A SUGGESTION IF U WANT U CAN TAKE IT

NICELY WRITTEN CONT SOOON👏👏

I UNDERSTAND TAT U DONT WANT TO RUSH BUT TRY TO UPDATE SOOON

and more asya movements😳😳😳

and try to write with this type of writing

it looks really good .👍🏼 its just a suggestion.😃

try to complete it dont leave in middle without completing😉😭😭

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting update..👏

Thank You! Hope you enjoy the upcoming parts just as much!

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DailyDaisy

@DailyDaisy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
So good upadte n thnx for always giving long updates

luv the asya moment ( more ) finally

n nw as per ayaan & zoya talk i m sure, she is going to stay with them

cn't wait for more . update nxt soon ..

Thank You! I really can't give short updates even if I tried 😆😆.

I know you're really eager for AsYa moments but you have to be patient for a few more parts before the story starts revolving more around them and less around the family and drama (Sorry 😳). I want to set the background story because it carves the path for the AsYa love story and the actual plot and if I don't set it right it will lead to confusion later. The background will help you understand the characterization as well. The upcoming two parts will have less scenes of AsYa but then after that it will be filled with them. \

The parts that I am currently writing (2-3 parts ahead of the one's I am editing to post) AsYa are already under one roof and it is disastrous to say the least 😆. Yes Ayaan and Zoya's convo hints at that but she will go there for reasons that will be exposed in part 6 or 7.

Will be updating soon! Hope you continue to enjoy!