AsYa TS 'Another World' Last Part Page 10 COMPLETED

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Mujhe kuch bhi samjh nhi aaaya ki aakhir hua kya idhar...😕

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KaranSG_01

@KaranSG_01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Its indeed a very good story.But please do mention that you have taken this from Shirish Kunder's short film 'Kriti'.Each and every scene,every dialogue is same.Its ok to take something from that movie but please give due credit.

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Very very beautiful update

wonderfully written

Awesome concept👏👏👏

really really amazing

just love it

brilliant yaar

perfect one

thank you so much for the pm

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Mujhe kuch bhi samjh nhi aaaya ki aakhir hua kya idhar...😕

bilkul bhi samajh nahi aaya kya 😲

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: KaranSG_01
Its indeed a very good story.But please do mention that you have taken this from Shirish Kunder's short film 'Kriti'.Each and every scene,every dialogue is same.Its ok to take something from that movie but please give due credit.

hey... i agree i have taken the concept from the movie but i didn't copy dialogues, i wrote it in my way and about the credit i mentioned the film, you can see...

actually i didn't want to reveal the plot by mentioning film name in Part One that's why i got my readers hooked up and when i update final part, i literally forgot to mention the film... thanks for reminding me...

Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

speechless!

The climax being the most unexpected part of the story

Really loved the whole plot and your beautiful execution

Definitely gave me goosebumps by the end

Loved reading this unique plot

Was definitely a treat to read it!!!😊

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anuv6

@anuv6

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

impressed one...
i thought asad will break zoya's heart...bt here poor asad.,
confused thi phir nahin phir cofused thi phir nahin...witty writing
bt if there is ASYA, anything is qubool hai