AsYa TS 'Another World' Last Part Page 10 COMPLETED

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Assalam o Alaikum Friends... hope you all doing well in your respective lives...

Bestu mene tere liye ek unique si story plan ki thi for your birthday gift par us din net ne dhoka de diya, khair mene kaha tha I'll post when you will be here par u super busy hai or mai tera gift or delay nahi kar sakta... so here I am šŸ˜Ž

Happy Belated Birthday Bestu šŸ¤— May Allah bless you with all the happiness in the world... May u have many many moreee birthday's... May all your dreams and wishes come true... Ameen...

Yeh raha meri taraf se birthday gift, hope teko acha lagega 😳

Lots of Love...
Ashii...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Banner Credit: Immortal Love šŸ¤—
Inspired by Short Film "Kriti"

Part 1:

Hi, I'm Asad, a painter by profession whose life revolves around colors and colors only... I'm an orphan, I don't have a family that's why I don't know what are relations and their meanings... I was a shy type kid who loved to express his feelings in form of colors only and today here I'm, the most popular painter I guess... anyway I'm here to meet someone special...

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Asad was sitting on a sofa lost in his own thoughts when a lady came there and took a seat opposite to him...

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I look in my opposite direction and smiled shyly, there she was clad in a black dress like always... I never asked but I guess she simply loves black color... oh I forgot to introduce her, she is Zoya, Dr Zoya Farooqui, a psychiatrist by profession... I and Zoya are childhood buddies and she knows me better than me, she is my only friend and I can trust her with my life...

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"Finally you are here Asad, pehle toh har do teen din main aa jaty thy but this time you came after a month", said Zoya...

"Hello to you too Zoya", replied Asad looking directly towards her...

"I was worried for you", said Zoya in a tone full of concern...

"I'm fine, by the way, do you like my paintings???"

"Of course Asad, your paintings were simply awesome, or agar tum ne notice nahi kiya toh let me tell you I'm your big fan now and that's why I put some of your paintings here and some in my bedroom", Zoya told him with a content smile on her face...

"Finally an appreciation by someone close to me, koi nahi dair aaye durust aaye", saying so Asad winked at her...

"That was so mean Mr. Khan"

"Okay okay no more teasing"

"So???", asked Zoya knowing very well Asad must have come to share something...

"I met someone"

"Ohhh... is that someone a girl???", asked Zoya raising her eye brows...

Asad nodded his head in yes...

"Chalo acha hai mere ilawa koi or bhi tumhari zindagi mai aaya, I'm happy for you"

Asad smiled but didn't say anything, Zoya understood his hesitation...

"Baat karna chahty ho"

"Hmm"

"What's her name???"

"Zoe... her name is Zoe"

"Good... when did you met her???"

"I met her a month ago and after a few encounters she moved in with me"

"Oh that's really quick"

"Yeah... that was indeed quick, I too was lil bit shocked at first but I guess it was meant to be and things started falling in places"

"Phir kab mila rahy ho apni Zoe se???", asked Zoya...

"Tum ne btaya nahi tum kesi ho", Asad tried to divert the topic...

"You think I'll fall in your trap and won't ask about Zoe???"

"But you can't meet her", Asad almost shouted...

"Why, is I am your ex and you fear I'll burst the bubble of your new found love"

"Aisi baat nahi hai Zoya, the thing is Zoe is quite busy these days", reasoned Asad...

"Okay no problem, main tumhare ghar aa jati hoon", suggested Zoya...

"No, Zoe will not like it... tum us se mil kar kya karogi???"

"Hmm tum nahi chahty toh koi nahi, khair can I see her photo at least"

"Aren't you asking too much questions???"

"Yes I'm... because I'm concerned for you"

"For me, or for Zoe???"

"Tumhare liye stupid, you are my friend, not that Zoe"

"Bas phir tum Zoe se milne ki zidd nahi karogi"

"Par kyun Asad, don't I have any right on you", asked Zoya with moist eyes...

"You have, but"

"Okay leave it, tell me more about her"

"Hmm Zoe, she is just like you"

"Like me???"

"Yeah, beauty with brains, just like you"

"Thanks for the compliment, or btao na"

"She is a writer"

"Wow, I would love to read her work, what it is about???"

"I don't know, I haven't read her work yet"

"Why???"

"Woh mujhe KaBhi padhney hi nahi deti"

"Hmm, is she on Facebook or Twitter???"

"No"

"Acha phir Zoe se kaho na meet me, I really want to meet her or else I'll die of curiosity, please Asad just for once"

"Mene kaha na you can't"

"Par kyun Asad???"

"Zoe is suffering from agoraphobia"

"What???"

"Yeah, it is a fear of..."

"Open spaces, social situations, aisy log kisi se milte nahi hain, kahin aaty jaty nahi hain, they are quite reclusive, I'm a psychiatrist Asad", said Zoya...

"Hmm that's why I said you can't meet her, but trust me she is very nice girl... I really like her", told Asad...

"Phir toh mujhe Zoe se milna hi hoga, maybe I can help her"

"No, I don't think it's needed"

"It is Asad, I'm saying for her good only"

"Umm okay I have an important work to do, let's save it for another time, bye"

Asad got up from his place and turned to go but Zoya spoke from behind...

"Zara yaad hai tumhe???"

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I had hardly taken a step when I heard Zoya talking about Zara... I immediately shut my eyes as her face appeared in my mind, I took some deep breaths in order to calm down myself...

After a few minutes I turned to face Zoya and looked at her helplessly, my eyes moistened remembering who was Zara and how much I had suffered because of her, but before I would have drown in the oceans of my past I felt Zoya's arms around me and without wasting a second I hugged her back...

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Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Awesome
asad is a painter and zoya is doctor
so asad loves zoe and zoya is his friend
zoe suffers from some phobia
who is zara?
lovely update
please update your another story too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow new story
That's really great
Love it already
Wow asad painter and zoya psychologist
Is asad telling zoya a lie maybe it is zoya only
But he told about disease too
Really curious to read more
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start ...!!!
Its really very Intriguing ... Zoya ... Zoe ... Zara ...
Will love to read further ...!!!
Continue Soon ...!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Didn't Assad love Zoya sad .who is Zoe and Zara cont soon
Edited by preetiasya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey ashii
Finally.. 'another world' is here
I was waiting for it.. lol

And what a story it is ! Awesome it is
Mere saamne ghoom rahi hai story jab maine read kiya toh

Too good

Zoya, zoe, zaara.. interesting

Continue

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..
But what's with this zoya ...Zoe...n Zara...
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So glad to read a new ts from you
Loved reading it
Beautifully written and a bit mysterious
is zoe zoya?
And who is zara
Eagerly waiting for the questions to be answered
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
Many Happy returns of the Bestu...I am wishing to fulfill all your Draems.,Dear.🄳🄳
It was so happy to see you with another story of ASYA(KABHI).😊
It was so Interesting Part.😊
The Banner was so Nice.😊
Asad(KSG) is a Painter and Zoya is a Doctor,it was so Nice.😊
ASYA(KABHI) Conversation was so Nice.😊
ASad(KSG) loves Zoe,it was so Interesting.😊
She is suffering from Phobia,it was so sad.
Who is this Zara?
Please Continue soon and PM to me,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.


Edited by PriyaCherry - 9 years ago

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