AsYa TS 'Another World' Last Part Page 10 COMPLETED

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Suganti Kularaju

@suganti

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

nice chapter.

i thought zoe is not real but din't expect that zoya would turn out as the imaginary friend.

asad killed zara,zoe and ayaan for zoya.

if he loves zoya so much,why did he let zara and zoe entered his life..hmm

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Omg

Some weird shit

Ok this was so sick and twisted tht i am speechless

But well written

Got us intrigue in 1st but clear and make me scared in the end

U made asad a murderer

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Special wala RES for Tehs...😊

Kehte hai...aachi aadatein choothni nhi chaiyeh...😆

😆

Achi baat hai..

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Thank you for the Res Mayur 😃

Awesome suspense this in the story Ashii 👏

Enjoyed it completely. The climax was just too good and unexpected. Well written dear. Aise hi likhte rahoand hume ASYA ks dose dete raho 😛😉

P.S. Mayur, he's not saying nahi to me. He always says Yes to me 😛😉😆

This nahi was specially for our beloved Choco 🤣

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Ashi

I was very very confused..

But understood at the end that Zoya is not real..

But then if he loved Zoya how come Zara and Zoe came in his life?

And is that the end?

Aage Kya?

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Interesting update
Unique one
Luvd it
Cont soon
Thnx for d pm
T.c.

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

This nahi was specially for our beloved Choco🤣

🤣

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KaranSG_01

@KaranSG_01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

hey... i agree i have taken the concept from the movie but i didn't copy dialogues, i wrote it in my way and about the credit i mentioned the film, you can see...

actually i didn't want to reveal the plot by mentioning film name in Part One that's why i got my readers hooked up and when i update final part, i literally forgot to mention the film... thanks for reminding me...

Actually i checked first and couldn't see the credit.Actually its just sad to see so many issues of plagiarism coming up.Im sorry if you felt bad.

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: KaranSG_01

Actually i checked first and couldn't see the credit.Actually its just sad to see so many issues of plagiarism coming up.Im sorry if you felt bad.

yeah i know about plagiarism... and i didn't fell bad at all

thank you for reading my work...