New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016)

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

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OMG 33 likes ho bhi gaye😲😲 (biting my nails)

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: jas91
Chalo now me going 4 break

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: jas91
OMG 33 likes ho bhi gaye😲😲 (biting my nails)

Ready karlo update...kal Jumma hai kal dedena update...😳😊😆

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Nice update
Loved it
Zoya & Zara, partners in crime. Liked their scenes when Zoya was complaining & dilshad fakely scolded her & Zara also did. Asya scene was good. It was but emotional. Asad understand Zoya PoV & the dam broke. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

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ChipChipiBhaalu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: jas91

Thank u so much Juhi 4 reading & comnting...I m glad u liked it

Well i don't know if kids understand but this is where we writers can take liberty & put 4ward our imagination😉😆

Hated him lol that's a strong word😆...Well at d moment Asad lived all his life in a certain way & even after his wedding & kid he didn't had 2 face any drastic change so now that Zoya has entered his house he's just having difficulty 2 manage wid her & also...I can say he's searching his bestie in her but bcuz she had changed a lot its troubling him 2 understand how 2 behave wid her

About manhandling yes that's wrong but we also know Asad always had a problem 2 handle his anger although Asad here is very different from d show he doesn't act in anger all d time it was this 1st incident 4 them only bcuz it was a sensitive issue 4 him... & 2 clear d air bcuz i haven't done that in d part...I did mention that they fight like Tom & jerry 7 that's that..they r totally harmless...Asad just reprimands her of her ways & doesn't even our parents does that 2 us its bcuz they care...

You r absolutely right about Zara's Bday see that's why i created that scene... A person who is in pain doesn't want 2 see sense so it's d duty of his near 1's 2 make him understand about that & only that Zoya did...I wrote that part 4 that reason only cuz i wanted Zoya 2 make him see sense & this will lead 2 create an strong emotional bond btw them which would b a turning point in there story😊

Ayesha was just simple next door girl dear & d way Asad wanted his partner...& there is nothing wrong in wanting 2 have partner of ur choice... She wasn't stupid it was an emotional decision... There was less chances of her survival but she was still hopeful its sad she couldn't make it

LOL just 2 relife u this much no he won't blast on her this time😆😆

Thanks 4 such an descriptive comnt Juhi...I loved reading ur review ...hope i cleared u everything😊

Thanks for replying dear😊

I can't still believe dat Mera Humnava was ur 1st attempt. Tu pehle bhi bhi forum me FF likhti thi kya? Aisa lagta hi nahi hai ki vo tera pehla story tha.

I don't know much abt little kids as I only saw them closely in my village where I had my cousins. We wud visit for maximum only a week. 4m 12 years, I did not went to my village.

Vo kya hai na bahot saare story me kiss ya hug k baad Asad aur gussa ho jaata hai aur aise react karta hai ki vo galat tha isliye muje thoda doubt hua.

Hey, I did not meant dat Asad can't have a partner of his choice but I personally get bored of d women wid Ayesha's description u mentioned but I will also get irritated wid a girl like Zoya always doing uchhal-kood n eating like 2 years. In QH, Sanam was somewhat of Ayesha's description & I did not liked her much. More than Zoya n Sanam, I liked Seher as she was bold, modern, intelligent n did not acted childish but she was also made dumb like Sanam to show Tanveer as intelligent like cvs made Zoya dumb to show Tanveer intelligent.

Next time jaldi update de na😆

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: jas91

Congrats Depu 🤗 jahan chah wahan raah😉

I know 1st part mera bhi fvrt tha... Zara is story main kam rehne wali thi but phir i added so many scene's of her😆 & i m happy wid d outcome😃

yeah desi tome & jerry😆😆 but they r harmless ekdum cartoon ke jaise😉

Ab Asad chup chap maan jata & blast na karta toh baad ka patch up scene kaise milta Depu😉 everything happens 4 a reason na

I m hopeful u'll love this bumpy ride hearafter too 😆

nxt part ready hai btw🤣

Haha...Thankew ji...bur seriously sometimes Chah hoke bhi Raah nahi milti...*sigh*

ohh...it's nice then that you added her scenes...and you are so perfect on writing that part...i can imagine Zara's reactions...so cute that was...

yes...everything happens for reason...and I hope it will lead their relation towards the new path...

of course...koi shaq hai aapko...

ready hai...to update jaldi na...tarsao mat...