New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016) - Page 15

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Bestu I read it...

Tune mujhe maar dia

Originally posted by: AkaiBara

Yeh abhi read bhi krna hai

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Ready karlo update...kal Jumma hai kal dedena update...😳😊😆

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Thanks for replying dear😊

I can't still believe dat Mera Humnava was ur 1st attempt. Tu pehle bhi bhi forum me FF likhti thi kya? Aisa lagta hi nahi hai ki vo tera pehla story tha.

No Juhi really that was my very 1st attempt at writing 😆 well i guess i was a reder 4 long time so mayb that helped cuz while writing i think as redaer's POV & become my own critic ki main reder hoti toh will i like it so that helps😳

I don't know much abt little kids as I only saw them closely in my village where I had my cousins. We wud visit for maximum only a week. 4m 12 years, I did not went to my village.
Oh well that explains but it's also different wid every kid some r smart than their age while others r not

Vo kya hai na bahot saare story me kiss ya hug k baad Asad aur gussa ho jaata hai aur aise react karta hai ki vo galat tha isliye muje thoda doubt hua.
It's ok i understand Juhi & being reader i know we all start guessing after each updt ki aage kya hoga... that itself means how involved u r in a story.. & it's my pleasure that u r liking, enjoying & is curious 2 know more😃

Hey, I did not meant dat Asad can't have a partner of his choice but I personally get bored of d women wid Ayesha's description u mentioned but I will also get irritated wid a girl like Zoya always doing uchhal-kood n eating like 2 years. In QH, Sanam was somewhat of Ayesha's description & I did not liked her much. More than Zoya n Sanam, I liked Seher as she was bold, modern, intelligent n did not acted childish but she was also made dumb like Sanam to show Tanveer as intelligent like cvs made Zoya dumb to show Tanveer intelligent.

I didn't watched d show after season 1 cuz i knew it will fail 4 sure after such a big blunder they did in season 1... It's not like Qh 1 was always top class but still i found that better enjoyed able & hooking so i liked it... Khair again i'll say d same thing every1 have their own choices & yes i didn't menat u were wrong i just said it was his choice 😳

Next time jaldi update de na😆

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Haha...Thankew ji...bur seriously sometimes Chah hoke bhi Raah nahi milti...*sigh*

ohh...it's nice then that you added her scenes...and you are so perfect on writing that part...i can imagine Zara's reactions...so cute that was...

yes...everything happens for reason...and I hope it will lead their relation towards the new path...

of course...koi shaq hai aapko...

ready hai...to update jaldi na...tarsao mat...

Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

It was splendid Jas darling!!! 👏

Managed to cope up with all the pending works...thanks a lot for the pm sweetheart!! 🤗

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Loved it
Zoya & Zara, partners in crime. Liked their scenes when Zoya was complaining & dilshad fakely scolded her & Zara also did. Asya scene was good. It was but emotional. Asad understand Zoya PoV & the dam broke. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ajanshul

Beautiful update

Continue soon :-))

Originally posted by: sweetie_angel

Nice one
Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Chocochip...

loved it..CONTINUE SOON