New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016) - Page 13

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Jassu Kya mast update tha...

Masti, jhagda, emotional all in one package u gave us..

Zara is cute...

And looking forward to their love story now.

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing update

Loved reading it to the core

Loved how zoya has mingled up with zara and is spreading happiness all around

The way zoya handled asad was a treat to read

We got to read a deeper emotional bond between the two

Looking forward to know how the story and asya love progresses from here

Please try to continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

Originally posted by: -jerry-

l❤️vin it

Originally posted by: AMMY12

Nice pary
Cont soon
T.c

Originally posted by: Sp8699

Hey it was great waiting for next part do PM

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

I forgot dat dis was a FF. Maine title poora padha hi nahi bahot din se. Muje laga ki ye 10 parts SS hai. Vo doosra baby AsYa ka khud ka beta hai na montage mein?

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part Dear👏😊

Zoya n Zara bonding is lovely😃. I wonder whether an infant can really understand people around them so much. Her scenes were d best part of dis part.

As much as I liked Asad n did not had any problem in d last part I hated them in dis part. How can Asad just be rude to his childhood friend just cuz she is loud n messy? I don't think there is any excuse for Asad to behave like dis wid his childhood best friend unless she turned out to be terrorist. I did not liked Asad manhandling Zoya n leaving bruises. Which gentleman does it even to a anyone man or woman? Asad did not wanted to celebrate Zara's b'day cuz his Ayesha baby died. Really? Wat will he say to Zara wen she grows up some years 4m now? Dat her mom died cuz of her so her b'day will never be celebrated? Zara will be miserable then. If he truly loves his baby he sud celebrate Zara's b'day in a grand way so dat she sud not feel her absence n never feels guilty abt mom her being dead. Its good dat Zoya made him understand but he sud have known on his own. Sorry, I ranted too much but day before yesterday I heard a dialogue in a show dat just cuz ur stressed out did not give to license to be weird n stressed out it no excuse...Period.

I felt Ayesha's character sketch somewhat boring like being simple, homely, calm, polite, reserved. Hope u don't mind. She herself is d fault of her own death n poor Zara is suffering wid Asad foolishly not wanting to celebrate her b'day. Wat was d need to hide her pregnancy complication news? Wat was d need to bcum mahaan of not aborting d baby? D baby cud have come in any other way but her life wud not have come back.

Loved how Zoya made Asad explain everything by showing him how much happy Zara was. Asad really needs to understand dat if he don't celebrate Zara's birthday, he will only make her depressed on her every birthday wen she is supposed to be d happiest on dat day.

Loved Asad n Zoya's hug. I am worried dat if in d next part Asad will blast on Zoya getn embarrassed dat he let out his emotion n hugged Zoya pouring out his emotions.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Again Jas...😊

About the note again at first , I guess yess Zara is the cutest child here , but I understand the writer's POV too...so carry onnn...

Well coming to the update...this was a very good part , with many revelations and well written also...👏

Soo Zoya and Asad were very good buddies phir yeh dono mein who connection pehle kyun nhi hua joh ab future mein hoga...😕😆

Ayesha ka character sochke meko Prachi Desai from #AZHAR movie yaad aati hai...I guess meko imagine karne mein easy hoga...and if marriage to Ayesha was a Arranged affair to Asad ...so was that love too...???

Then toh SRK ne KKHH main bahut jhoot bole hai ...😆

The whole past part was very well scripted...I was soo into it...👏

Starting mein Zoya complaining about Asad and both Dilshaad and Zara scolding her was a very cute scene...

Last part was again emotional...you have a good grip in writing emotional parts...I must say..

I guess now we can see more bonding and moments of ASYA in the next part..

Continue soonish...😃

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi again Mayur 😃 u out of few ppl r who give me decriptive comnt & i abolutely love & look 4ward 2 know ur POV

I know FS hai isliye I m restricted 😳

Tu bola means nice part tha sachi

Are cuz Zoya Vilayat main thi & Asad here & it just didn't clicked any1's mind plus according 2 story that time Zoya was studying 😉 & koi pyaar bhi toh nahi tha na

Maine Azhar nahi dekhi... but it was normal arrnge mrg Mayur jaise India main hoti hai...I m sure is se tu samjh jayega🤣

Then toh SRK ne KKHH main bahut jhoot bole hai ...😆
main samjhi nahi

Thank u... U & me r such readers who find such smallest things in updts nahi... main wohi sochti hun koi point out kyun nahi karta but than i realize ok abhi main writer hun reader nahi😆😆

Yeh story kafi jump marte hue aage badegi Mayur🤣 hold on tyt😆

stay tuned & thanks 4 lovely comnt😃

aaj main khush hun laging abhi nxt part de dun but nahi dungi 😆 but teko jlane ke liye bta deti hun nxt part is ready 🤣😈 except some alterations here & there

Originally posted by: MayurChan

So first of all Hello again...😊
Hello😆

I don't know mein itne descriptive comments deta hu...but jab samajh aata hai toh likh deta hu...aur mood pe bhi depend hota hai and saamne waale bande pe bhi 😊
I get that & its very true samne wale pe bhi kaafi depend karta hai... means main achi writer ban gayi hun not bad yohoo🥳

I guess as U r the writer...don't restrict yourself to anything...
Restriction yeh hai ki main drag nahi karna chahti unecessry Zra scene's deke baaki Asya toh leads hain hi unhe toh footage milni hi hai😉

Aur haan mere bolne ka kuch nhi...Update sahi bhi aacha tha...but Zoya ko thodi deir aur gussa dikhana chaiyeh tha...baad mein Asad ko cake dena chaiyeh tha...😆
Han han abhi kon bol raha tha Mard ka humdard nahi koi 🤣🤣

That is what I wanted to hear from U..., see as an ASYA fan we expect them to fall in love whenever or wherever at whatever age they are...but then in realty harr baarr aisa nhi hota hai...
I know right... U know i feel jab hum reader hote hain hum sochte nahi jab writer ban jao tab kaafi senerios mind main aa jate hain & u want 2 explore them😊

And specifically maine who hee Movie ko isiliye bataya tha kyunki iss Ayesha ke description mein meko wohi fit lagi...baki sab sahi hai...jaise aapne bataya...
Once again maine movie nahi dekhi😆😆

SRK ne itna bada monologue diya tha na " Ki Hum ek baar jeete hai , Ek baar marte hai , Pyaar bhi ek baar Hota hai and Shaadi bhi " yeh sabse jhoota qyote hai uska...who khud isko kayam na rakh saka...and if Asad loved Ayesha then we can say he can love Zoya too...yaa main galat hu ki Ayesha ke saath sirf ek emotional attachment thi and Zoya ke saath saacha pyaar...??
Sahi pakde hain it can happen that we can't forget our 1st love but Pyaar dobara ho sakta hai... abhi nahi bolungi kuch bhi...but on other side maine abhi socha nahi is bare main😆 so keh nahi sakti kya karungi in d end

Confusion door karein plzz...

And aapki story hai Mohtharma ...toh dhayan deke padhna hota hai...
Oh really...good boy😆

And seat belt bandh li hai maine...tension nhi hai...bas ab update dedo...likes hote hee..😆
LOL wohi toh i remeber last time bhi itni jaldi likes mil gaye the main shocked hi reh gayi thi😆😆 Is baar dekho

It is good U r happy...warna sabke Siggy's padhke meko bahut ajeeb laga raha hai aajkal idhar..
Sahi pakde hain Mayur har seggi kuch kehti hai 🤣 but see meri seggi kitni achi hai na & inspiration & motivational etc etc...😆