New Asya FS ~ Sab Teraa ~ posted part 4 (15/7/2016)

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ChipChipiBhaalu

@OriginalJuhi_04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

I forgot dat dis was a FF. Maine title poora padha hi nahi bahot din se. Muje laga ki ye 10 parts SS hai. Vo doosra baby AsYa ka khud ka beta hai na montage mein?

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: -Prinky-
Jas Darling 🤗

Res mera 😊

Unres

Wow I am first...wo bhi badi mushkil se res kiya tha maine...

Coming to the update...It was Awesome !!!!

I loved AsYa's childhood story...

And Zara is so cute...the way you narrated her reactions...loved it !!!

AsYa as always fight like a tom & jerry...

Asad don't want to celebrate Zara's birthday...I don't like it how he blasted on Zoya...(Typical Mr. Khan) But I loved it the way zoya make him understand...touching moment...their hug...all his pain came out...

Dilshad is content that Zoya came with new Happiness in their life...

Looking forward to know their journey from hereafter...

Continue soon... 😊🤗

Congrats Depu 🤗 jahan chah wahan raah😉

I know 1st part mera bhi fvrt tha... Zara is story main kam rehne wali thi but phir i added so many scene's of her😆 & i m happy wid d outcome😃

yeah desi tome & jerry😆😆 but they r harmless ekdum cartoon ke jaise😉

Ab Asad chup chap maan jata & blast na karta toh baad ka patch up scene kaise milta Depu😉 everything happens 4 a reason na

I m hopeful u'll love this bumpy ride hearafter too 😆

nxt part ready hai btw🤣

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@Sp8699

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Hey it was great waiting for next part do PM

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: anopama
Love the update
Tht is ok I tried my best
So asya started their Tom and Jerry fights
Poles apart but r magnets
So Sya were best friends they seek each other out and supported each other fully
Zoya seems to have forgot Tht but ahe heard the story from Najma and dilshad
Aww the big blow up on Zara bday
But glad zoya reach out to him and the talk was good
So he has to live for Zara and don't make her feel the pain and the regret on her bday
So guessing this to be the turning point in asya relation
Cont

Hope it wasn't difficult 2 manage Anopama 😳
Yeah she doesn't have such clear memory cuz she was very small that time but Asad wasn't that's why he is amazed seeing her changed completely 😆
Hopefully yes this will d a turning point in there story😉
Thanks 4 d lovely comnt dear🤗

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Monali5
Nice update :)

Originally posted by: allwaysasya
Amazing
asya fight everyday and other enjoyed especially zara
zoya complaining about asad to dilshad
update soon

Originally posted by: SanKsgian
Lovely
Continue soon

Originally posted by: raspi
It was just awesome n cute nd plzzz pm me also fr the update

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav
40 likes me se 1 like mera done 😛. Update is super duper...next prt update soon

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Superb part
Zoya bonding with zara and dilshaad najma wonderful
Asya childhood story wow
Asya moment is amazing
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next
Continue soon

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Awesome!

Originally posted by: sasir
Loved it..

Thank u so much all of u 4 comnting on my story😊...I m happy u all r liking it😃...Keep supporting me ...Thanks again😊

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Amina...
WOW !!!
MIND BLOWING UPDATE JAS ...!!!
IT WAS SUPERB ... AMAZING ... SOOO BEAUTIFUL ...!!!
VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN ...!!!
LOVED IT SOOO MUCH ...!!!
CONTINUE SOON PLEASE ...!!!
AND PM ME IF YOU CAN ... I HAVE SENT THE BUDDY REQUEST TO YOUR PM ID ...!!!

I m glad u liked it so much😊
Thank u so much 4 comnting 😃
PM's will definately reach u once u r added in PM id😳

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: cutie15
Awesome update
I loved the way zoya confronted him and soothed him
And asad hugged her back
So cute
Zara is seriously cute
Loved it
Update soon

Thanks a lot 4 d lovely comnt cutie😃... yes Zara did came out 2 b really cute 😆

Originally posted by: suganti
nice chapter.
zoya celebrates zara's birthday without asad's consent.
later she got to know that ayesha died on the same day.
love how zoya consoles asad..

Thanks 4 comnting Suganti😃...Actually Zoya knew but she didn't thought Asad will b so offended😳

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: jas91
Loved this 1

grrrhhh found d best gif but it isn't visible 😡😡

I was talking about this one Jas...the GIF you were not able to find...

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Ohhh one of my favorite scenes...

😆

Yes late hai comments...
I don't come everyday these days...

And yes I am late here too..

which scene is this?

nahi toh Tehsu atleast mere thread pe aap late nahi ho😃...kal hi toh updt kiya tha😆