AsYa(KaBhi) TS - Mere Mukaddar ka khel *last part * 11 May *COMPLETED*

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suni_104

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Awesome
Made for each other

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Awesome update
Loved it
Full story was written beautifully
I liked the way you explained everything.
Agreed that muqaddar will change when we make DUA truthfully.
Thanks for pm

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Well ab Hello bolu ki Salaam bolu aapko Writer Sahiba...😊

Joh bhi hoo aap clear kardena...😆

Coming to the update...well sincerely ek baat maine notice ki , ismein Religious talk hodi kum thi compared to the other 2...I feel like that..

That word... " Isthekhara " that was the first tough word I have learnt while following ASYA in its initial glory...but not on this some other forum...and I kind of knew what it means...😆

I like these lines...don't know why..., itni shyari laati kahan se hoo aap..😳😎

Badi shiddat se intezaar hai uss sawaal ka..
Jiske jawaab me mai aur woh...Hum dono kahanege...
Qubool hai Qubool hai Qubool hai

Jas and Zoya ka moment was also good...

All and all it was good reading this story and version of ASYA...

Continue soonish...with OTHER STORIES of yours...😃

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Persiko
Thank you so much Mayur...
Serious?
mujhe bas theek lage and correct lage... dono deen pe the and Zoya was behaving normal like she would and Asad was correct in his behavior too koi over cheesy ya nautanki nahi kiya seeing the woman he likes in front of him...😆

Mummies apne kids ke life kuch bhi kar sakte hai!

Actually haa...jaise maine yeh comment mein bola hai...Keeping in view the context of your story...yeh mujhe serious lagey...and yaar free spirited bande ko cheesy yaa nautanki hona zaroori nahi hai...but yes meko aise hee ASYA padhne ke aadat hai like the way U wrote in #PGJ ..

Maybe I would read that story again...ab joh yaad joh kiya hai...😳

And haa Mummies kids ke liye kuch bhi karlete hai...sochke ke and kabhi bina soche bhi..

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Very nice ending

Both their prayers were answer

They r married

U never know what is faithed for u

Well written

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Amina...

@Amina...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

BEAUTIFUL Update ...!!!
It Was Amazing ...!!!
Very Beautifully Written ...!!!
Loved It ...!!!

And as you said , you read it somewhere , i have also heard this story before , very long time ago ... someone had told me this ...

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Ramya

@jazz2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

wow the story was amazing
loved the way u described the traditions of islam
hats off 👏
again wow

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Lovely Ending.😳

Zoya's Parents respected Zoya's decision was so Nice.😊

Asad(KSG) reaction when Zoya's Parents came for their Alliance was so Interesting.😊

Zoya and Jas Conversation was so Cute.😳

The way Allah showed Bright sign about ASYA(KABHI) relationship,I Likes it.😊

ASYA(KABHI) feelings towards each other was so Beautifully explained.😳

ASYA(KABHI) Wedding Night and their conversation was so Lovely explained.😳

The Last Para about Destiny was Awesome.😊

The Whole ASYA(KABHI)TS was Amazing.😊

Please write like this on ASYA(KABHI) and PM to me,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Superb awsm update.
To gud luvd it.
Plzzz do write morr ffs and ts.
Thnx for d pm
T.c.

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#130

I can't believe it has ended
It was an amazing story
And it was written so well
A very good job done
I loved the last update too
Awesome ending

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