AsYa(KaBhi) TS - Mere Mukaddar ka khel *last part * 11 May *COMPLETED* - Page 11

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

OMG

Im so happy

Cant wait for the next part

😃

I am glad you are liking the TS ... will update soon.

Originally posted by: urvisaini

Nice chapter

Asad and zoya helped each other and as a gentleman Asad deviated zoya s mind and dropped her safely to her home...

But the star moment was when Asad tells the truth behind burning his hand to zoya

That was the best part of this story so far

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

thank you ...
I am glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: jas91

I m here
Affu wonderful part
but serious type sa lga is baar thoda khair
as expected Asad came & saved Zoya
that house part wid prayers was very well written
meko bhi janna tha yeh burning candle ka kya meaning hai good Zoya asked
ending main Gaffur is coming I guess mango Asad ka rishta
but it was so funny d way Asad saying Ammi is bare main aap baat mat karna 😆 😆
it was really good Affu 🤗 Hope everything is fine at ur end...Take care bache 😃

PS- & tera sig is so mast 😆 😆

Thank you mummaa...

Haha mujhe perfect laga bas aur baat cheet kum honi chahiye thi 😆...

everything is fine mumma.. Alhamdulillah...

Will update next part soon...

Haha siggy rakho toh mast ya na rakho :p

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

A beautifully written TS.

Loved both the parts. Wish to read the next part.

Please update. Can't wait.

thank you..will update soon

Originally posted by: Amin21

Very very beautifully written yaar👏

Really wonderful update

Asad burning his finger scene was awesome yaar

Just perfect👏

Eagerly waiting for next update😊

And do update MTZH😉

thank you so much..
I'll update soon...still working on MTZH

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Loved it
Zoya was shocked first to see his actions & even more surprised by his answer. He left her to her home safely. Liked the mothers talk to respective kids. Now Zoya family coming to asad house. Asad told his mother not to talk abt alliance. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

thank you bhai...will update soon

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

One more part updated..

Very very very good part..

Burning hand part was very well explained.

The mothers are quite excited

Let's see what turns out at the family meeting..

waiting for next part

thank you ... will update soon

Originally posted by: -jerry-

l❤️vin' it'

thanks

Originally posted by: Persiko

haan baba dekha...
No doubt about wonderful readers but about writer.. doubt tha , hai aur rahega shayad...
aur khud ko kum samjhne se aur improve hone ki chah rehti hai

Originally posted by: binuuu

Doubt rakhne ki koi zaroorath nahi Ms.pagli..

U r doing a wonderful job...

Yeah...aisi h toh..think like that...improvement hoga ;)

But I have no doubt about u :p

I am flattered ☺️