AsYa(KaBhi) TS - Mere Mukaddar ka khel *last part * 11 May *COMPLETED* - Page 10

Originally posted by: Linsie

Wow well written...story..

how your afraid to do wrong follow the right teaching is important...

continue soon...

thank you so much

Originally posted by: Linsie

thank you

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

Awesome update

Waiting for the dinner

Loved how you are teaching us about your religion through your story

Well written

😊

thank you so much

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Amazing chapter

Loved reading it

So asad saved zoya. It was a treat to read their conversation

Zoya's family coming for a dinner at asad's house makes me feel as if something is definitely going to happen then

Looking forward to know what happens next in the story

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

Thank you so much...
will update soon

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Awesome Part.😊

Asad(KSG) saved Zoya,it was so Nice.😊

The way Asad(KSG) be with Zoya was so Nice.😊

I Likes ASad(KSG) Character so Much.😊

Dilshad wanted to make ASYA(KABHI) Marriage,it was so Interesting.😊

I think Zainab also said this thing to Gafffor.😊

Zoya and Family came to Asad(KSG) House,it was so Interesting.😊

Waiting for What will Happen next?😊

Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊

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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)

PriyaCherry.

Thank you so much...
Even I like this character...
I'll update soon

Originally posted by: anopama

Omg omg

I can't wait for the other update

So Asad came to zoya rescue

So predicted that

He was so shocked seeing her face

I love how they did their prayer like a married couple (maybe I am wrong not Muslim)

Haha she slept with a scissors

He chuckled

Can't believed the reason why he was burning his hand and he told her too

So days goes by she is smitten

Well we all know Asad was smitten from school days

But he doesn't think they r of same standards

Omg omg so her parents r coming to the khans for dinner

So awesome guess gaffur listened to his wife

And it seems Zainab didn't like hearing tht name Ahad

So waiting for next update

Like now plz

I await your comments... Thank you so much... Let's see what happens when Gafoor and his family arrive at Khan's house

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Anothr beautiful updt.
I dnt knw anythng abt muslim culture,bt i like some of it & respect it.
Sure zoya's parents cming with rishta.hope so.
Tht was so well written whn asya was stuck.
Thnks 4 pm.cntu soon

thank you so much

Originally posted by: binuuu

Unres on page 11

dekhliya aur reply bhi kardiya Miss.Nautanki

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<div></div>haa..yeh bhi sahi hai.

😎

Originally posted by: MayurChan

<font color="#000066" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Very good and well explained part Afra...</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sooo ASYA recognized eachother...but yeh dono toh kuch zyada hee serious type log hai...taking it into this concept of the story then they were very good...</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Dono mummies ke dimaag mein kuch chal raha hai...😆</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Dekhte hai aagey kya hota hai..</font>

<font color="#000066" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Continue soonish..😊</font>

Thank you so much Mayur...
Serious?
mujhe bas theek lage and correct lage... dono deen pe the and Zoya was behaving normal like she would and Asad was correct in his behavior too koi over cheesy ya nautanki nahi kiya seeing the woman he likes in front of him...😆

Mummies apne kids ke life kuch bhi kar sakte hai!