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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
But very sad too
I guessed it right asad do have a heart problem
But plz make it possible for him to survive dont make him amaan
He has to live for ahad and for zoya
Poor thing couldnt even speak
Zoya lashed out and she lashed out hard
5 yrs of pent up anger came out
Oh when she said the famous mangalpur lines
Tht took asad to his knees
So zoya figures what is wrong with him without him tell her
So now her full attention will be on her husband and the father of her son
Waiting for next update
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome chapter.
so,asad is suffering from rare heart disease..that is the reason he left zoya.
hope zoya will tell him about ahad soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
sooo sorryyy ashiii for commenting sooo late
and sorryyy for not unres on previous page


coming to the update
actually I feel speechless when it comes to TSB updates and you have again nailed it with your exceptionally beautiful writing skills...I have no words at all

UPDATE WAS JUST PERFECT( madhuri style)

I mean how you revealed asad's disease to zoya and us (readers) was wonderful

and guesss wat the story being compared to one of myyy favoirite moviesss kal ho na ho

I realllyyy loved the dialogue " apne mera bharosa toda h ,mera dil toda "


secondlyy the mangal pur role reversal "wo din kab ayega jab ap humesha k liye merii zindagi se rukhsat honge "

I realllyyy loved the part , zoyas outburst and some truth revelation

zoyas anger justified but realllyyy waiting to knw asad side of story

awsume , fantabulouslyyy , beautifully , amazingly wonderful


thanks a tonnn for pm

continue super soon becoz I am unable to wait for nexttt part


love
shona

P.S : are you srk fan ???? I am a biggg srk fan...I realllyyy adore him...n asad mkes me remember aman bt at the end we all want asya sooo asad has to liveee

Edited by shonajain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shonajain

sooo sorryyy ashiii for commenting sooo late
and sorryyy for not unres on previous page


coming to the update
actually I feel speechless when it comes to TSB updates and you have again nailed it with your exceptionally beautiful writing skills...I have no words at all

UPDATE WAS JUST PERFECT( madhuri style)

I mean how you revealed asad's disease to zoya and us (readers) was wonderful

and guesss wat the story being compared to one of myyy favoirite moviesss kal ho na ho

I realllyyy loved the dialogue " apne mera bharosa toda h ,mera dil toda "


secondlyy the mangal pur role reversal "wo din kab ayega jab ap humesha k liye merii zindagi se rukhsat honge "

I realllyyy loved the part , zoyas outburst and some truth revelation

zoyas anger justified but realllyyy waiting to knw asad side of story

awsume , fantabulouslyyy , beautifully , amazingly wonderful


thanks a tonnn for pm

continue super soon becoz I am unable to wait for nexttt part


love
shona

P.S : are you srk fan ???? I am a biggg srk fan...I realllyyy adore him...n asad mkes me remember aman bt at the end we all want asya sooo asad has to liveee


yes I'm SRK fan 😳 but not that big... haan par I like him more than Salman Khan 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Well Written Update Ashii...
In a way after all the glitches and pain in the past , even if today ASYA stand a chance and they want to reunite , they have to come out of the past and by taking out all the hurt , anger and clearing out all the secrets and misunderstandings it is possible that they can plan to live in peace in future..
Rest I don't know about others parr meko itna pata hai Aspirin is used for fever na , iska Heart se kya Rishta ??

Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
TSB update on Sunday In Sha Allah
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally kal TSB ka update milega
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Posted: 8 years ago
FINALLY caught up with the last two updates
And both were really high on emotions
finally the much awaited confrontation between asya
But still their reunion seems far away
So asad is suffering from a rare heart disease
Just glad about your assurance that he is not going to die in the story
Looking forward to know what happens in our beloved asya's lives
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey peeps! Hope you all are fine.

I know I'm suppose to update TSB tomorrow but I can't. Actually my Choti Dadi passed away and I didn't get time to write anything. I'm trying to write something from last 2 or 3 hours but it seems my mind is blank right now. Please try to understand my situation, kindly bear with me and I assure you I'll update really soon.

Ashii...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read last 4 parts in one go ashii..
Those were beyond superb.
Ahad understood Asad is his father
..thn afra's mystery out..dilshad knew the truth..Zoya's engagement..finally about Asad's disease..
Many things happened...
Dialogues were superb ashii...
Very emotional too..
Update next part soon..
N sorry 4 late reply..i was little busy..issliye..

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