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Part 17:

It had been an hour and the function was over, Fahad was looking for Zoya, he knew she must be upset because of Asad and when he came to know that Asad was also missing, worry took over him... Dilshad and Afra were calling Asad continuously but his cell phone was unreachable while Zoya's cell phone was at home... Meher was the one who strongly felt Asad and Zoya were together only and she wanted they sort out everything...
Asad was driving on the isolated roads, he didn't know where they were going but he just wanted to go away somewhere far, so far... Zoya didn't say him anything, she sat there in complete silent but stole a few glances of him... Asad's grip was tighter over the steering wheel and his eyes were fixed on the road, he was aware of Zoya's gaze but didn't dare to look back and increased the speed every time he felt her gaze on him...
When Zoya got irritated with his silent treatment, she took a deep breath and turned towards him...
Zoya: Mr. Khan...
Asad neither answered nor looked at her, he just increased the speed as usual but Zoya wasn't going to buy that attitude...
Zoya: Mr. Khan I'm talking to you...
Asad looked towards her, she was adamant and her eyes told him she was hell angry... he fixed his eyes back on the road and kept driving...
Zoya: stop the car Asad! she almost shouted...
Zoya had had enough, she knew he would stop hearing his first name and it worked too... Asad immediately hit the break and the car stopped with a jerk...
Asad turned at his left and found Zoya looking at him only, he locked his eyes with hers for a few seconds but he himself broke the trance and came out of the car...
Zoya was little bit irritated, when he locked his eyes with hers, she found the same love for herself in his eyes but something else was also there and if she wasn't wrong that something was longing and yearning... the way he looked away it clicked her something was holding him back and then she remembered Dilshad's words that he did everything for her happiness, she was tired of that statement, did he really think she can be happy without him, was that even possible???
Asad knew that it was do or die situation for him, seeing a determined Zoya he decided to tell her the truth but the thought of telling her each and everything was enough to shoot his BP... he took a few deep breaths to calm himself down but it was getting hard by each passing moment and in suffocation he removed his jacket and opened the first two buttons of his shirt...
Zoya too came out of the car and stood beside him... Asad wiped away the drops of sweat from his forehead hurriedly and looked away to compose himself but Zoya grabbed his arm and stopping him...
Zoya: not today Mr. Khan...
Asad stood facing her, when he didn't object or move away Zoya decided to ask, finally...
Zoya: why Mr. Khan... why are you doing this to me and you dare to say it was only for me, I'm fed up of all this nonsense... apko kya lagta hai mai khush hoon??? Do I look happy Mr. Khan??? Do you really think I'm happy without you???
Asad: you want to know the truth right, but let me clear one thing sach jaan kar tumhe bohat takleef hogi...
Zoya: oh its means you actually think I'm happy now... she cried as tears brimmed in her eyes...
Asad: nahi tum ghalat samajh rahi ho...
Zoya: toh or kya samjhon mai...
Asad: jhoot bolna jitna asaan hota hai na sach bolna utna hi mushkil hai or us se bhi zaida mushkil hai sach sun'na or usse qubool karna...
Zoya: agar mai apki bewafai ko dill se qubool kar sakti hoon toh apka sach mere liye matter nahi karta...
At that moment Asad closed his eyes, he remembered his bewafai, how cruel he was that day, he said so many hurtful things to her and literally forgot how she would feel...
Zoya: I didn't want to ask you anything, for me it was clear cut thing that my husband left me just because I was his enemy's daughter... you didn't bother to accept me when I was ready to leave my father for you, you preferred your enmity over our love... aap kya mujhe sach batayenge Mr. Khan, mai apko batati hoon sach kya hai... sach yeh hai ke aap ne mera bharosa toda hai... sach yeh hai ke aap ne mera dill toda hai... sach yeh hai ke aap ne mujh se KaBhi mohabbat ki hi nahi or mujhe afsoos hai ke mene aap jese insaan se mohabbat ki...
Asad heard each and every accuse looking down in shame, she was right at her place, he deliberately hurt her but that was nothing beyond the pain he went through while saying all those things...
Zoya: our nikah was a secret one but it was as pure as others are, koi or mujh pe ungli uthata or kehta ke mai apki biwi nahi hoon toh mujhe bura na lagta... par aap ne toh khud mujhe biwi maan'ne se inkaar kar dia... you know what Mr. Khan ek aurat bhalay apni mohabbat nibhaye ya na nibhaye, woh apne rishte zaroor nibhati hai or yehi wajah hai ke mai aaj bhi apki biwi hoon...
Asad was already feeling down, but after hearing her out his condition worsened, his heartbeat accelerated and at the same time he felt suffocated... what he wanted, to see her happy and he knew she would not be happy with him, that's why he left her... but he never knew from what she went through just because of him...
Zoya: till yesterday you were ready to mend things between us, but after meeting Fahad you changed your mind and backed out why Mr. Khan??? can't you take a stand for me??? is our love that week???
Asad didn't know she would ask all this, he was prepared to tell the truth but when she preferred their love over his so called truth, it clicked him how wrong he was... Zoya was aware of his emotions, his eyes spoke volumes and she knew he was more than guilty, she took a step towards him and placed a hand on his chest right over his heart...
Zoya: Asad mai aap se pyaar karti hoon, or hamesha karti rahongi and I know you love me too then why are you punishing us, don't you think last five years were enough for that???
Asad: nahi Zoya... he jerked her hand away...
Zoya was already hurt and when he pushed her away, it hurt her more...
Asad: I can't do this to you, I just can't... he spoke gasping for air...
Zoya: then why are you back??? To leave me once again, wasn't last time enough for you??? Mene aap ke baghair jeena seekh liya tha phir aap kyun wapis aaye, kyun Mr. Khan??? she shouted in anger...
Asad: you don't need to worry, I'm not going to trouble you again... I'll go away from your life before you know it and I promise I won't come again...
Zoya: and what about your truth???
Asad: koi sach nahi hai Zoya... na KaBhi tha or na KaBhi hoga... hamari zindagi ka sab se bada sach yeh hai ke hum chahty huwe bhi saath nahi reh sakty so it's better be part our ways...
Zoya: aap shayad bhool rahe hain ab hum saath nahi hain Mr. Khan... sahi kaha aap ne hamare chahne na chahne se kuch nahi hota, kyun ke aap woh kar rahe hain jo aap chahty hain jo apko theek lagta hai... par ab nahi... ab woh hoga jo mai chahti hoon...
Asad: kya chahti hain aap???
Zoya: chahti toh mai apka saath hoon...
Asad asked with tearful eyes while Zoya replied looking back in his eyes, both were hurting each other badly... Zoya had had enough, she didn't have the courage to face him anymore, so turned to the other side and spoke...
Zoya: par mai jaanti hoon yeh mumkin nahi hai... toh ab wohi kejiye jo aap hamesha se karte aaye hain, mujh se door chale jaiye Mr. Khan bohat door... mai hi pagal thi jo aap se umeed lagaye bethi thi, mujhe bohat pehle samajh lena chahiye tha... first you choose your friend over me and turned my happiest day into bad one... she said while tears rolled down of cheeks on their own and she didn't bother to wipe them away...
Asad also cried with her, she was right, he had always taken her for granted and never cared to look back... he fisted his hands as it pained him, his uneven breaths got worsened and took a few long breaths but it didn't work...
Zoya: then you choose your responsibility over me and told me to go away... that day I actually felt maybe my love wasn't that pure and I decided to go back... later you confessed your love to me, was that really love, I don't think so Mr. Khan... pyaar hota toh aap mujhe Ayan ke saath KaBhi nahi jaane dete, sab mujhe Ayan ki biwi samjahty the par mere dill pe sirf ek naam likh tha... Asad Ahmad Khan...
Asad was trying hard to be strong but it wasn't in his hands, he took long breaths via mouth and luckily it worked but within a minute he closed his eyes as he felt severe pain in his chest...
Zoya: I was so happy when I came back to you, that night was the beautiful night of my life and how easily you regretted that night Mr. Khan just because I was your enemy's daughter... actually ghalti meri hi thi, I was at fault, I believed you and thought maybe you love me more than anything in the world... I was wrong, you don't love me Mr. Khan, jahan pyaar ho wahan dooriyan nahi hoti or apko dekh kar mujhe yaqeen nahi hota aap wohi Mr. Kahn hain whom I love with all my heart...
Asad knew he didn't have the energy to stand and hear her out, he was ready to take every blame but right now he wasn't in that condition, he moved closer to her and placed a hand on her shoulder...
Zoya: mujhe hath mat lagaiye Mr. Khan... she yelled in anger...
Asad was literally shocked seeing her angry, her anger was justified but not now...
Asad: Zoya... he gasped... we can talk later... he paused and took a deep breath... now we need to go...
Zoya: oh now you don't even want to talk, apko wapis jana hoga na...
Asad: tum ghalat samajh rahi ho... he reasoned...
Zoya: of course I'm again at fault, but don't worry Mr. Khan mai apko rokongi nahi... apko jana hai na jaaiye...
Asad: please Zoya not now... he spoke calmly...
Zoya: you need to go right, then go... aap hamesha se yehi karte aaye hain, jab jab mujhe apki zaroorat thi aap mere saath nahi the Mr. Khan... aap ko pyaar karna aaye ya na aaye par chor kar jaana apko khoob aata hai, lekin ab nahi... is se pehle aap mujhe phir se chor kar jayen mai khud aap ko keh rahi hoon meri zindagi se door chale jaaiye, bohat door... aap hamesha ke liye door chale jaaiye, aap hamesha mujhe chorne ke liye hi aaty hain na toh baar baar aane se acha hai aap ek hi baar chale jayen... Khuda jaane woh din kab ayega jab aap meri zindagi se hamesha ke liye rukhsat honge...
That was it for Asad, he fell on his knees and a lone tear fell out of his eye... she wanted him out of her life, he too wanted the same but not like that while Zoya stopped as she realized what she said in anger...
Zoya: Mr. Khan I... I didn't mean to... she sat in front of him and cupped his cheeks in her hands...
Asad: but you don't want me in your life... he replied with a heavy heart...
Zoya: no Asad... I didn't mean it... I didn't realize what I was saying, the truth is that I can't imagine my life without you... she cried seeing him hurt...
No doubt Zoya was also hurt but when she spoke in anger and the way Asad reacted was enough for her to realize her mistake, she can't even imagine anything like that, not even in her wild dreams...
Asad: I did wrong but I never knew you will hate me this much...
Zoya: I don't hate you Asad, I don't... she moved closer and hugged him...
Asad: I should go Zoya... mujhe tumhari zindagi se chale jaane chahiye, hamesha hamesha ke liye... I should go... he didn't hug her back and kept mumbling...
Zoya: nahi aap aisa nahi kar sakte, aap jaante hain mai aap se pyaar karti hoon... apko mere saath nahi rehna theek hai par aap kahin nahi jayenge, suna aap ne...
Zoya didn't know how to tell him that she said those words in anger and didn't mean it at all, she cried and hugged him tight assuring him but before she could have assured him, she felt his entire weight on her, she tried to pull him away but he didn't move...
Zoya: Mr. Khan...
Asad didn't answer...
Zoya: Mr. Khan aap sun rahe hain na... she asked in fear...
Main Taan Jiyan Na Maraan
Haay Ve Dass Main Ki Karan
When Asad didn't reply again, fear took over her... Zoya broke the hug and found him unconscious, she put his head in her lap and patted his cheek... she rubbed his palms but it didn't work, fresh tears brimmed in her eyes remembering what happened a few minutes ago...
Dil Jude Bina Hi Tut Gaye
Hath Mile Bina Hi Chhut Gaye
Ki Likhe Nae Lekh Kismat Ne
Zoya: Mr. Khan open your eyes, you can't do this to me... please open your eyes, I said na I'm sorry now please stop this nonsense and open your eyes... Asad aap sun rahe hain na... Asaddd!!!
Baar Baar Ron Ankhiyan Tainu Jo Na Vekh Sakiyan
Khoh Leya Hai Yaar Kudarat Ne
Zoya cried and pleaded holding his hand, she didn't mean it at all... she was angry and didn't realize what she was saying, when Asad broke down in front of her, it clicked her what she had done, she immediately took her words back but the damage was done...
Kattan Main Kiven Din Teri Saun Tere Bin
Main Taan Jiyan Na Maraan
Asad was still unconscious, Zoya rested her head on his chest and cried her heart out... she literally forgot to take him to the doctor, she sat there with him in the middle of an isolated road... suddenly she heard cell phone's ringtone, at first she didn't react but when the phone rang again she realized it was Asad's phone... with the trembling hands, Zoya pulled out his cell phone and answered it...
Zoya: hel... hello...
It was Meher on the other end, she was trying Asad's number from half an hour as she knew he must be with Zoya...
Meher: shukar hai tum Asad ke saath ho, ghar pe sab pareshan hain Zoya tum dono ho kahan???
Zoya: Meher... fresh tears brimmed in her eyes... Asad isn't talking to me, woh theek nahi hain...
Meher: tum ro rahi ho or Asad ko kya hua... she asked closing the door of her room as she didn't want anybody to hear...
Zoya: I don't know yaar, he just passed out... she cried...
Meher: sab se pehle tum rona band karo or mujhe batao tum ho kahan???
Zoya: pata nahi, we are here at somewhere outside the Mumbai, Asad isn't responding and I don't know what to do... she replied looking around her...
Meher: Asad ko hua kya hai, zaroor woh kal ki tarha faint huwa hoga, tum dekho na Asad ke pass koi medicine hogi, a tablet or an injection...
Zoya: yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai... she cried closing her eyes...
Meher: stop crying and look for his medicines...
Zoya checked his pockets and found nothing but suddenly she remembered Asad's jacket which was in the car... Zoya ran towards the car and picked up his jacket, she found a small bottle of tablets...
Zoya: I got it Meher but koi tablets hain...
Meher: okay, what's the label read???
Zoya: Aspirin... she was back to Asad but stopped in her tracks as it clicked her something... Meher its Aspirin... she repeated...
Meher had heard at first and she was stunned as her biggest fear turned out to be true but when Zoya told her again, she knew it Zoya also got the hint...
Meher: Zoya... you sure it's Aspirin???
Zoya looked at the bottle again and it confirmed her fear, she looked towards unconscious Asad and her eyes moistened, was that even possible???
Meher: Zoya you there???
Zoya: hmm...
Meher: listen to me carefully, just take him to the hospital... right now...
Zoya: but how's that possible Meher???
Meher: stop wasting your time and take him to the hospital yaar...
Zoya: no it can't be a... she stopped in midsentence...
Meher: it is Zoya... it's a heart attack and you have to be strong... are you listening, Asad needs you right now, just take him to the hospital...
Zoya: yeah I'm heading towards City Hospital...
Meher: be strong Zoya and I'll be there before you...
Zoya ended the call and with an heavy heart she stepped towards Asad... she sat beside him and placed her hand on his heart, fresh tears brimmed in her eyes but she knew it wasn't the time to sit and cry, she took a deep breath and mustered the much needed courage, she managed to take him to the car and made him sit on the front seat and fastened the seat belt... she sat on the driving seat, took his hand in hers and spoke...
Zoya: you have to be fine Asad, for us and for Ahad...
Glancing him for one more time, she put on her seat belt and hit the accelerator while Meher left for Mumbai excusing for a medical emergency...
CP... abhi pata chala how hard it was for me to keep the secret when you related TSB to KHNH...
Aspirin is a medicine recommended to every heart patient, five years ago, when Rashid met with an accident, he was in coma for 3 months and later he diagnosed with a heart problem that's why Zoya knows about Aspirin... baki Meher toh Cardiologist hai and I'm surprised no one noticed it...
NOTE: Asad is suffering from Ischemic Cardiomyopathy (IC), a rare heart disease... (Ab mai AAK ko khali peeli thodi bemaar karongi, disease bhi rare wali hai)... Kindly don't label him as Aman of KHNH or else I'll end up like the movie only... and I'm pretty much sure you don't want that, so please bear with me and I assure you AAK won't die... and yes I'll explain IC in the next update...
P.S Sorry Choto I can't show angry Zoya anymore, I agree she suffered a lot but if I did so then it will turn out as WHT... here I actually want AsYa in one team, Zoya ek dum se normal nahi hojayegi but woh Asad se door bhi nahi rahegi... haan is ke ilawa I'll do whatever you say...
Sooo that's it... No proof read...
Kindly ignore my mistakes and errors...
Please hit like and leave your precious replies...
Ashii...

Edited by AkaiBara - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ye update finally

Will read nw n unres by tommorow..but maybe on other page 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Res

Ye update finally

Will read nw n unres by tommorow..but maybe on other page😃



But I want review like right now ! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
O MY GOD!!!!!
MIND BLOWING UPDATE AASHI... IT WAS WONDERFUL...!!!
I HAD EXPECTED SOMETHING LIKE THIS... BUT AFTER READING THE UPDATE, I M FEELING SO OVERWHELMED... AT LOSS OF WORDS...!!!
IT WAS REALLY AMAZING DEAR...!!!
VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN... EVERY EMOTION WELL DEFINED... SO BEAUTIFULLY EXPRESSED...!!!
LOVED IT TO THE CORE...!!!

I M DYING TO READ FURTHER... CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE BEFORE NEXT THURSDAY 😭😭😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
loved the dialogues!!

I want more...lol
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Posted: 8 years ago
Overwhelmed..
Can't speak right now..
Hope to see update soon..
Only one request..plz end fahad track soon...
Plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love this part and yeah dont end it like khnh
and indeed you are a talented writer
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautifully written update Ashi
Zoya didn't listen to him & told him what was in her heart. So asad has rare heart disease. Waiting for next update soon to know what happen next. I want zoya to fight with him to hide that with her. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice part
Hope all goes well
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hmm
Bolti bandh kardi thi tumne meri..
This outburst by Zoya was so so needed.
But when Asad was in a mood to say the truth she should have waited for him to speak up..

And i understood the scene when sach ye hais started..
Mera question answer round iske liye tha😆

Very very emotional part where I felt bad for both of them..

And Zoya ne to Asad ka mangalpur dialogue Maar diya..
And Mr.Asad out.😭

And see my guess was so right..😃😆
And I'm glad you decided to end the torture for both..

U made me all emotional towards the end..
And really loved this part..


And yes I'm NOT proud of your regular updates 😉
Edited by sweet_tehs - 8 years ago

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