Thread#3 AsYa FF 'Thodi Si Bewafai...' Thread#4 Page 1

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Assalam o Alaikum !!!

welcome to the 3rd thread of "Thodi Si Bewafai..." 🥳

thank you sooo much for showing your infinite love towards this story 🤗

keep showing more and more love after all TSB is your favorite one

BTW mine too 😳

will update next part ASAP

lots of love

Ashii...


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Part 11 Page 4
Part 12 Page 22
Part 13 Page 36
Part 14 Page 57
Part 15 Page 57
Part 16 Page 77
Part 17 Page 95

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arshu... i'm trying my level best to update ASAP
bas thoda sa sabar rakhna plz... 😳
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res for jas tehs mayuur aroo affu annie yum asif bhai anopama di binnu
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Congratulations for new thread Ashi
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Eagerly waiting
please disclose some secret
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For God sake open the secret why did asad left + who is this new girl+what relationship she has with asad...plzzz an mein se koi se b aik secret open karo????. Katna chapter rhata hain jab asya sat hon ga having an romantic moment...plzz kuch tuo update karo...:( :(
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Congrats for the new thread ...
Waiting for the update ...
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Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Congratulations for new thread Ashi


thank you asif
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Banner Credit goes to Immortal Love 🤗


Part 11:


Asad didn't knew how to react, his so called father was referring Zoya as his daughter in law, he was looking at Zoya only, he wanted to confirm what he had heard was actually true... Zoya wiped her tears, took some deep breaths and came to Haseena Bi and took her to the isolated corner as she didn't wanted to create a scene in front of the guests, Ayan and Humaira attended the guests while Nikhat took the kids away...
Zoya: what's your problem aunty???
Haseena Bi: Zoya main toh bas...
Zoya: let me finish aunty... on every happy occasion, you do this, every time you make a joke of my personal life...
Haseena Bi: it's not like that Zoya beta, main toh bas tumhary achy ke liye hi bolti hoon...
Zoya: oh really... if you think, telling everyone about my personal life and ruining our happiness, is for my good only, then please stop doing this, I'm not saying anything just because you are elder, or else...
Najma: bhabhi... she interrupted Zoya...
Zoya looked towards Najma as she nodded her head in no stopping her from going further, Zoya sighed and stopped, but Imran came to her and placed a hand on her shoulder and blinked his eyes at her in assurance, Zoya smiled at him, he was indeed a gem, he supported her because he knew his own mother was doing wrong while Haseena glared at her own son for not supporting her...
Zoya: or else you know what actually I can do...
Haseena Bi: you can't do anything Zoya, if you would have been able to do anything, toh aaj tumhari shadi kamyaab hoti...
Zoya: you don't need to worry about my married life... she tried to be in limit, after all Haseena Bi was Najma's MIL...
Haseena Bi: okay, but what about the society, I'll be quiet, but what about others???
Zoya: I have my family with me, they will support me... she replied in a calm tone...
Haseena Bi: konsi family Zoya, tum shayad bhool rahi ho yeh family tumhari nahi Asad ki hai... jab waqt ayega yeh log Asad ka saath dengey, wese Asad bhi toh yahi hai, itny saalon bad aaya hai, par lagta hai uska faisla ab bhi wohi hai...
Zoya: dare to involve him and I swear I'll forget aap kon hain or is ghar se apka kya rishta hai... anger rose in her and she almost shouted...
Asad heard his name, without thinking twice he too joined them, Dilshad and Afra followed him because they can't afford another fight letting him go alone...
Haseena Bi: kya baat hai Zoya, aaj bhi itna pyaar karti ho, ya phir itni nafrat karti hai ke uska naam tak nahi sun sakti...
Zoya: it's none of your business...
Haseena Bi: Allah... itna gussa... ek baat toh hai, Asad or tum gussa kamal ka karty ho...
Zoya: enough... she shouted... apko ek baar main samajh nahi aata, shadi main aayi hain, izzet se rahiye or apne kaam se kaam rakhiye... you will not stop right, main hi jati hoon...
Zoya left from there, she needed some moments for herself, she was some steps away only when Haseena Bi started again...
Haseena Bi: Dilshad Bi... kya bahu mili hai apko, bilkul aap par gayi hai???
Dilshad looked at her in confusion, first she did not understand what the hell was happening and now Haseena Bi involved her too, while Zoya stopped in her tracks...
Dilshad: what do you mean???
Haseena Bi: look at you, you spent your whole life being Rashid's wife or I can say, a wife whose husband never accepted her... abhi Zoya ko hi dekh lo, she is following your steps only...
Asad was going to follow Zoya, thousands of questions were running in his mind, he wanted to talk to her in private, but Haseena Bi started taunting his mother, he forgot everything and came to his mother's rescue...
Asad: aap shayad bhool rahi hain I'm here only...
Haseena Bi: main jaanti hoon tum yahi ho, Dilshad I'm really disappointed, you had taught him everything, see how he took stand for you, kaash apni biwi ke liye bhi...
Asad: what I do or don't, is not your problem, so please stay away from my family...
Haseena Bi: and what about Zoya???
Asad: as I said please stay away... he warned...
Haseena Bi: don't you think its lil unfair with Zoya...
Zoya had had enough, she wanted to kill her like right now while the other family members didn't interrupted as they knew Zoya will shut her on her own...
Zoya: what the hell is your problem, apko ek baar main samajh nahi aa raha kya, is it necessary to create a scene in front of everyone???
Haseena Bi: I was just trying to help you...
Zoya: help... are you mad... who told you to help me, in fact who the hell thinks I need help???
Haseena Bi: ab kya saari zindagi Dilshad ki tarha rahogi???
Asad was about to interrupt as his mother was being involved but Dilshad stopped him...
Zoya: when, where and how I live, is not your bloody business... she said angrily...
Haseena Bi: bhalayi ka zamana hi nahi raha, Dilshad ne bhi yehi kiya tha, or tum bhi yehi kar rahi ho, ek aisy insaan se umeed lagaye bethi ho jo...
Zoya: now you are crossing your limits, just stop right here... she warned her for the last time...
Haseena Bi: you are doing the biggest mistake of your life, Asad will never give a damn to that piece of paper and...
Zoya tried to stop her but she was in no mood to stop, she was involving Asad again and again, that was it, without caring about the outcome, she slapped her hard shocking everyone...
Zoya: I didn't wanted to do it, but you forced me to do so, and that's not an ordinary piece of paper, it's called Nikah Nama'... what kind of relationship I and Asad share is not your problem, you better stay out of it... dare to talk on my personal life again, my reaction will not be in your favor...
Haseena Bi looked at her son who was standing with his down, feeling helpless she left from there, instead of going Zoya came to Asad who was still shocked, she snapped her fingers and brought him out of his thoughts...
Zoya: and you... I don't care what you think or not, whether you like it or not, whether you accept it or not, according to Shariyat' I'm your legally wedded wife and you can't deny the fact that I have all rights to be called Mrs. Asad Ahmad Khan'... she said shocking him to the core and took some steps away from him...
Asad looked at her in disbelief, legally wedded wife, Nikah Nama, what the hell was going on, his mind was going to blast with questions and questions while Afra and Dilshad looked at each other in utter shock...
Najma smiled with tears, came to Zoya and took her in a comforting hug... breaking the hug, she cupped her face and dropped a kiss on her forehead...
Najma: that's like my bhabhi... acha kiya aap ne unhy bhaga dia warna main unhy khud jaane ko kehti...
Zoya: I'm sorry Imran... she said looking towards Imran...
Imran: no please, don't be sorry, ammi was wrong, anyways, we should get back, Humaira is driving Ayan crazy and if we didn't help him out, then we will be in trouble... he tried to lighten the mood...
Zoya: yeah let's go...
Zoya smiled at his bad attempt of joke and left with Najma and Imran while Dilshad came to Asad and placed a hand on his shoulder...
Dilshad: Asad...
Asad: huh... he came out of his thoughts...
Dilshad: what's going on Asad, do you know about that Nikah Nama...
Asad: nahi ammi, I don't have any idea...
Afra: but she is your wife Asad, and you never bothered to tell me about that Nikah thing... she said with hurt visible in her tone...
Asad: no affu, it's not... he tried to explain...
Afra: it's like that only... she cut him off... you go and talk to her...
Dilshad: I think Afra is right, tumhe Zoya se baat karni hi hogi...
Asad: hmm... he agreed with them...
Later, Zoya performed the rituals and took Nuzhat's wedding dress from Saira Bi, all were enjoying the light moments when Asad came to Zoya and stood beside her... Zoya took a step to move away but Asad placed his hand on her back and pulled her closer and made her stand with him...
Zoya: Mr. Khan, what are you doing??? she asked...
Asad: can we talk...
Zoya: no... she tried to remove his hand...
Asad: okay fine, then stay here only... he said tightening his hold around her...
Zoya: all are looking here only, let me go... she pleaded as she found everyone's gaze on them...
Asad: I don't care, some minutes back, you yourself admitted you have all the rights to be called Mrs. Asad Ahmad Khan, so what's the problem in standing with me Mrs. Khan... he whispered the last part and looked directly in her eyes...
Zoya: if you think you can force me, then you are wrong Mr. Khan, I don't need your permission or orders to do anything, so its better you stay away from me... she freed herself from his grip and created a reasonable distance between them...
Asad: Saira aunty, don't you think bride's family is forgetting something...
Saira Bi and others looked at him not understanding what he wanted to say...
Asad: don't look at me like that, I'm talking about dance competition, Zoya's dance is still due...
Zoya glared at him, he was doing this intentionally...
Asad: so Zoya have two options, either she has to dance or...
Zoya: but I never agreed for the dance...
Asad: so accept your defeat...
Zoya: defeat and me, never and ever Mr. Khan...
Asad: then go for it Mrs. Khan...
Zoya didn't wanted to dance, actually she was in no mood to argue with Asad, but he was taking advantage of the situation, she can't refuse in front of everyone, having no other option, she agreed...
Meher and Afra had heard the talk between Asad and Zoya, both knew that Asad was doing this intentionally, he wanted to talk which Zoya would never agree, so he was on mission of irritating her so that she herself came to him and talk...
Zoya came in the middle, she was the centre of attention, feeling lil bit nervous, she closed her eyes, when she opened her eyes she was much better, she looked at Asad whose eyes were fixed on her only, she started singing...
Nazar jo teri laagi main deewani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi
Zoya took some steps in his direction, she didn't broke the eye contact, she felt tears brimming in her eyes... she remembered their bitter past and their present moment and, her words were coming directly from her heart...

Mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahaani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi...
Asad felt tears in his own eyes, he knew that was not only a song, it was her feelings, seeing her in that condition he remembered everything what he had done with her, he felt ashamed of himself...

Kehte hain ye deewani mastani ho gayi
Zoya started dancing but never averted her gaze from him, she knew that he too was feeling the same, but nothing was in their hands...
Mash'hoor mere ishq ki ye kahani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi...
Asad saw that pain and longing in her eyes, he wanted to erase her misery but he can't, what he had 5 years back was for Zoya's betterment only... he left her on purpose, but he had never imagined that she was living with his name only, he only knew about that Nikah in front of the moon, Nikah Nama and all was new for her, that's why he wanted to talk to her...

Kehte hain ye deewani mastani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi
Zoya found Asad lost somewhere, she knew what exactly he was thinking, she had dropped the bomb of Nikah Nama on him, she didn't wanted to tell him but maybe that was written in their destiny that's why she herself called her Mrs. Khan of him... Zoya came to Asad and held his hand in hers, he came out of his thoughts and looked at her in dilemma...
Zakham aisa tune lagaya
Deewani, deewani, deewani, deewani ho gayi
Asad saw her crying, he wanted to wipe her tears, he didn't knew what he had done or will do, all he wanted to embrace her in his arms... Zoya came closer and continued singing, whatever Asad did with her was wrong but the best part was that he gave her Ahad, her son, a reason to live...

Marham aisa tune lagaya
Ruhaani, ruhaani, ruhaani, ruhaani ho gayi
Zoya took some steps away from him as he was about to wipe her tears...

Pehchaan mere ishq ki ab toh
Pehchaan mere ishq ki ab toh
Rawaani, rawaani, rawaani, rawaani ho gayi
Asad looked at her with teary eyes, the way she was singing and dancing was enough for him to die several deaths after all he was the sole reason of her condition...
Ho... mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Kehte hai yeh deewani, mastani ho gayi
Haan deewani, haan deewani, deewani ho gayi
Zoya cried her heart out via dance, she wanted to him that he had hurt her beyond repair but she still love him a lot...

Mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi
Asad had had enough, he can't change their past, at least he can try to rectify his mistake, after all what he did was only for Zoya, and what he wanted to do was too for Zoya only, he can't erase those bitter memories and her pain, but he can stop hurting her more...
Kehte hain ye deewani, Mastani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi
Zoya started spinning around him while he took some deep breaths as he was gaining some courage to be determined on his decision...
Sab noor noor sa bikhra hai
Ek tu hi khayalon mein utra hai
Bas jhoom jhoom jhoom jhoom jaata hai dil
Asad opened his eyes, he was more than determined, due to continuous rounds Zoya was about to fall but Asad was fast enough to catch her on right time...

Tu mastani hai...
Tu deewani hai...
Paakeza hasti hain teri, tu noorani hai...
Zoya felt his arms around her, she opened her eyes slowly only to drown in his dark orbs, both forgot everything as they looked in each other's eyes, hurt, pain, anger, everything was there, so that love...
Sab noor noor sa bikhra hai
Ek tu hi khayaalon mein utra hai
Asad made her stand on her feet but didn't let her go out of his grip, Zoya felt fresh tears seeing his teary eyes, Asad wiped her tears gently and nodded his head in no saying her not to cry, he inched closer, Zoya closed her eyes as he placed his lips on her forehead, both felt like someone had lightened up the burden from their hearts...
Asad and Zoya were silent, they didn't utter a single word, their eyes do the talking, without wasting more time, Asad pulled her closer and hugged her, Zoya too placed her arms on his back and hugged him as tight as possible...
Sooo that's it...
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Ignore my mistakes plz...
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Ashii...
Edited by AkaiBara - 9 years ago
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