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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

Overwhelmed..
Can't speak right now..
Hope to see update soon..
Only one request..plz end fahad track soon...
Plzzz


I now it was something unexpected but you have to manage

and about fahad give him a chance dear and you love him too

thanks for reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shaikhsabreen14

Love this part and yeah dont end it like khnh
and indeed you are a talented writer


thank you dear

i promise i won't end it like khnh

keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Beautifully written update Ashi
Zoya didn't listen to him & told him what was in her heart. So asad has rare heart disease. Waiting for next update soon to know what happen next. I want zoya to fight with him to hide that with her. Thanks for pm


thank you so much asif

yes zoya will fight for sure

stay tuned for future updates
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ayat20

Nice part

Hope all goes well


thank you dear

and yes all will go well i guess
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ayat20

Amazingly written

Loved it


thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Hmm

Bolti bandh kardi thi tumne meri..
This outburst by Zoya was so so needed.
But when Asad was in a mood to say the truth she should have waited for him to speak up..

And i understood the scene when sach ye hais started..
Mera question answer round iske liye tha😆

Very very emotional part where I felt bad for both of them..

And Zoya ne to Asad ka mangalpur dialogue Maar diya..
And Mr.Asad out.😭

And see my guess was so right..😃😆
And I'm glad you decided to end the torture for both..

U made me all emotional towards the end..
And really loved this part..


And yes I'm NOT proud of your regular updates 😉


meko nahi pata tha apki bolti bhi band ho sakti hai 😆

don't give me that look

i was expecting a solid reaction... like mujhe pata tha aisa hi hoga and our talk regarding KHNH thing... par aisa kch nahi hua...

aap toh aise hogaye
😆😆

or aaj apko ehsaas hua na ek update ke peeche kitni mehnat ki jati hai

that night i was doing 🤣 when u told me exact dates and helped me a lottt

seriously CP mujhe woh scenes ache se dekhne the and thanks to you ap ne mera kaam asaan kar dia tha love you 🤗

haan abhi bohat rona dhona hogaya, abhi truth time and i guess it came out well

kehte hain jab tak apko khud feel nahi hoga tab tak readers bhi feel nahi karenge

i drownwd myself in the whole scene and typed like i was watching all this

acha likha na 😳

or apko pata hai yeh kis ne kaha hai???

the great writer AkaiBara aka Ashii 🤪 🤣

jokes apart i'm really happy apko acha laga

love u CP ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mirage--

It was a great update..

Asad decide to tell her everything but his health didn't allow
Zoya n her outburst..

Asad was suffocating and he was not in a position to listen all that..

Ok..
😭both are in pain..

Now AsYa are together n both will fight the disease
I know you will make Asad fine..for Zoya..for Ahad n for all readers..



thank you dear

i'm glad you liked it and hope you would like future updates too

stay tuned
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Wonderful update
loved it
finally you revealed asad's disease
zoya did not let asad speak anything and told what was in her heart
let see what happen next
waiting the time when asad will come to know about ahad
thanks for pm
update soon


thank you so much dear

asad will come to know abt ahad's truth soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

res

mera 15,5001 post 🥳

Happy Dhanteras Bidu 🤗 baad main unres karungi 😉


500 posts or hogaye and still no unres

go and enjoy Kaira

AsYa ke liye mai hi kafi hoon 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

unres mere ... res update ke baad hai but me yahi unres kar rahe hu

Firsly happy dhanteras to all.. god sab ko bahut laxmi dena n thora mujhe bhi

Coming to the update ... yo baby i knw it .. asad ko kya bimare hai ( heart disease ) .. but heart attack :(

i thought zoya will slap asad... but after reading whole part i m glad see didn't... she still luv him alot ..n poor asad

Zoya ka gussa was fine ,, but atleast she should let him speak na ,,, kam se kam sab truth to samne aa jata ,,,, ( but mere ek baat samjh nahi aaye ,, , asad toh zoya ko us night ke agale morning ko he chor kar chala gaya tha ... thn use apne bimari ka pata kya usse pehale tha ,)

I also mehar is cardiologist :)

N mene asad ka chr KHNH se relate nahi kia .. bcz i dnt like srk ,,, so i happy untill u dnt kill asad i this story ...bz asad ko jeena hona hoga mere lie, zoya n ahad ke lie bhi ...

i hope asad will soon come to knw about ahad ,, bahut ho gaya ek baap ko use bete se juda karna

will wait for next chptr ,,, untill u can start wrting WHT bcz sund is nt 2 far ...


see baby i knew it too... zoya slapping asad kisi ko acha nahi lagega that too after truth revealing scene 😉

you readers are so greedy na... sab kch aaj hi pata chal gaya toh who will read further 😆

mujhe ache se pata hai asya nikah k next day yeh sab hua tha so asad ki beemari ka sab sach samne aayega

wait a sec... asad ko tumhare liye kyun jeena hoga 😲

AAK is MINE haan 😳

haan story ke liye woh zoya ka hai so yaha bolo asad have to live for zoya and ahad too 😉

anyways thank you sooo much dear

i'm so happy you liked it

stay tuned and keep reading

thanks again 😃

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