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priya

@preetiasya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#561

Very well written cont soon

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

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Posted: 8 years ago

#562

It was a great update..

Asad decide to tell her everything but his health didn't allow

Zoya n her outburst..

Asad was suffocating and he was not in a position to listen all that..

Ok..

😭both are in pain..

Now AsYa are together n both will fight the disease

I know you will make Asad fine..for Zoya..for Ahad n for all readers..

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Daljit Dhami

@Always_asya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#563

Wonderful update
loved it
finally you revealed asad's disease
zoya did not let asad speak anything and told what was in her heart
let see what happen next
waiting the time when asad will come to know about ahad
thanks for pm
update soon

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#564

res

mera 15,5001 post 🥳

Happy Dhanteras Bidu 🤗 baad main unres karungi 😉

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: jas91
res

mera 15,5001 post 🥳

Happy Dhanteras Bidu 🤗 baad main unres karungi 😉

bole toh congratulations bidu 🥳 🤗

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shweta_yadav

@shweta_yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#566

unres mere ... res update ke baad hai but me yahi unres kar rahe hu

Firsly happy dhanteras to all.. god sab ko bahut laxmi dena n thora mujhe bhi

Coming to the update ... yo baby i knw it .. asad ko kya bimare hai ( heart disease ) .. but heart attack :(

i thought zoya will slap asad... but after reading whole part i m glad see didn't... she still luv him alot ..n poor asad

Zoya ka gussa was fine ,, but atleast she should let him speak na ,,, kam se kam sab truth to samne aa jata ,,,, ( but mere ek baat samjh nahi aaye ,, , asad toh zoya ko us night ke agale morning ko he chor kar chala gaya tha ... thn use apne bimari ka pata kya usse pehale tha ,)

I also mehar is cardiologist :)

N mene asad ka chr KHNH se relate nahi kia .. bcz i dnt like srk ,,, so i happy untill u dnt kill asad i this story ...bz asad ko jeena hona hoga mere lie, zoya n ahad ke lie bhi ...

i hope asad will soon come to knw about ahad ,, bahut ho gaya ek baap ko use bete se juda karna

will wait for next chptr ,,, untill u can start wrting WHT bcz sund is nt 2 far ...

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anuv6

@anuv6

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Posted: 8 years ago

#567

i knew it asad had got some serious pblm
bt i didnt expected the truth this much earlier, he didnt even aplogized for his mistakes fr hurtng zoya, she was in pain for 5 years and when they met asad' was being alwys like, he was also in pain bt still he wants the pain by staying away from her. what's wrong with him?
he hav to try to be with zoya atleast bt he doesnt seems like even realizng his past mistakes,
just his mom , his frnd and he himself feelng pitybe rem the pasts, yaar zoya bhi bahuth hurt hui hai., nd nw she kind of begged him to be with her.
yess, he had hav ill health bt... i feel so sorry for zoya
dnt knw ,what'll happens when asad comes to knw that he is a father nd nw wat'll happens when his family comes to knw about this incident...?!
so coming to ur writing its asusual awesome nd amzng, beautifully written specially u write the emotions between ASYA...wow
waiting fr the nxt update ,.. update sooon