AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#931

very interesting and intriguing update..👍🏼

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aashiqua

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Posted: 9 years ago

#932

When will u update...its after ages that I read some work in Indiaforum...and guess what I am glad...am intrigued...update soonish...plz

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

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Posted: 9 years ago

#933

Well Asad will make everything right..hopefull he is not too late in finding Zoya and making everything right...

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Shaila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#934

it was nyc n tnxx fr pm luved it

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Devakshilover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#935

is BFTMB the original novel's short form?

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Shaila Banu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#936

Awesome update pai
So Asad know the truth now and he got angry at zoya 😔

Now she is gone 😔
Zoe 😡😡 glad asad thrown her out 😡
Now he has to find Zoya
Continue soon 😊

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Vrinda

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Posted: 9 years ago

#937

Fantastic update

Asad was so shocked

Seeing both of them together

Zoe didn't leave a chance to blame zoya

And asad believed her

He didn't listen to zoya

She took the right Decision to leave

Now asad will realise how wrong he was

After having a conversation with Zoe

She is exactly like ayaan described her

And no way like zoya

Hope its not too late for asad

And lily guesses something is wrong

No wonder she is crying so much

To get her mother back

Can't wait to read more

Update soon

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#938

Originally posted by: iluvasya

If you have read the book already then you know how he reacts
I have made some changes. I hope you'll like it.
Will update soon and thanks for the lovely comment 😃

Even though I have read the original novel

I still find ur's more interesting

The changes u have made to the story are marvelous

U did a great job

Though u have taken the concept

But u have presented is such a beautiful manner

So these changes are what has kept me hooked to this story

I am always curious about where will u put a twist

What will change and how

All unpredictable things that happened i n the story

All in all u r doing a great job

In keeping me addicted to this story

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fatima30

@fatima30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#939

Awww my poor Asya...
Hope Asad finds Zoya soon...

Looking forward to a sweet confession

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Prazeena Bhattarai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#940

Hey Pia. Commenting after a long time I know. But college has started and I hardly get time for IF. I just read the last few chapters in my college library, because I couldn't stop once I remembered this story during my law class. Lol

So so beautiful. All those romantic scenes between Asad and Zoya. How they spent nights together holding onto each other. How Asad despite everything fell for Zoya. Mary knowing the truth and her support to Zoya. Asad's fathers death and how he came around eventually just before he died.

And Zoe made an appearance. She's really a high class bitch . Everything Zoya isn't. Truely!

But Thanks God Asad realized it. Now Wife/Mommy hunt..

Keep PMing sweetie.

I will go through it when I get time.