AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142 - Page 95

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey piya
really sorry 4 not commenting on previous parts
busy with all da festivities now a days
btw happy pongal...(dont no u celebrate it or not)
coming 2 story...
Finally both sisters came infront of asad...
Nd zoe is really mean yaar
she only cares about money n herself
asad dint listen 2 zoya...dis man is always in a rush
ek baar sun to leta...
Now zoya left...but where?
hope asad finds her soon n brings her home...jaldi!!!! nd also complete zoe's story 4 4ever
waiting 4 nxt part
update soon
thanq
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read the story in one time its an interesting one pls continue soon .loved it so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Pia,

Am back. Will start reading as soon as i get free. I've got so many chaps to read

Hopefully by the time im done with these u'll post the next part as well.

Tc..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: laks_vish

Amazingly written...Pia you saved us from too much of drama

..very well written. Finally I am happy he knows the complete truth



Thanks dear 😃
Glad u liked this chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina...

Wonderful Update Piya ...
It was Amazing ...
Finally everything is clear ...
Felt really bad for Zoya ...
Hope Asad will find her soon ...
Plz Continue soon ...



Yeah, finally everything is clear
Glad u liked this chapter 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

R

Unres
Omg
Someone hold me back plz
I want to strangle tht bitch
Really zoya is the bad guy
She put it all on zoya
And Asad like the dumb ass believed her
Can't believ the way he removed zoya hands
And the way he talk to her his argument with her
Poor zoya trying to explain but he just wouldn't listen
Men always think too late and tht is Asad
He totally is mad because he has fallen when he swore he wouldn't
In all of tht zoya still had it in her heart to beg him not to let lily be with Zoe
And to protect her and care and love her
He asks her to leave and he will divorce her
So she left right away without his knowledge
Omg then thw witch and Asad sees her true colour
She just shine and shimmer her despicable ways and nasty attitude even to her own blood
Wow she wants him she wants to marry him
Glad he finally sees the light and realizes what a horrible mistake he had just made
So he refuse the bitch and strike her a deal
Money hungry s**t ready to sell her child
So Asad will be her father legally hopefully zoya too her mother
So now searches for her the simple selfless shy woman the virgin
With his apology all rehearsed
And she is not there she is gone from his and lily life
Will he be able to find her the woman he has fallen for the mother for lily
Waiting

Sorry back log but has comment on last one too
Sorry for lateness




No problem dear...take your time :)
Your feedbacks are truly amazing 😃
I am glad u liked this chapter...I had added lot of my own inputs :)
I am sure Asad will find Lily's mother soon
And that 🤬 will get her deserved punishment.
Next one is the last chapter. Will update in the evening 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: allwaysasya

wonderful update
Zoe shows her true colour infront asad
asad realized zoya's place in Lilly's life
brilliant update
update soon


Thank you 😊
Glad u liked it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kobeb

Awesome update, finally the truth is out and now asad go get ur lady love back!!



Thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Oh god..! I knew it asad wont understand zoya on the first go..!!
Had he lost his mind..??!!
And i hate zoe.. She is such a b****h
I cant wait for the next part
Asad will accept zoya finally.!

And will the next chapter be the last one..??
Noo i am so loving this story..:(
Dont want it to end..:(




Awww I know you love this story a lot
But yes, next chapter is the last one
Zoe will be punished 😃
Asad will find Zoya 😃
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Well written part..
All the possibilities that how Asad will react after knowing this truth were proven right just when he snapped at Zoya...
But what suprised me was how very quickly he realised that Zoya was not totally at fault...
Very Good part..
Continue soonish.



Thank you Mayur 😃
Glad u liked this chapter
Story is about to end...that's why he realized the truth so quickly 😆
His anger was justified. I am glad he got to see Zoe's true color.
He can see what a gem Zoya is 😳
Will update the last part todayv 😃

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