AsYa SS ~ The Hidden Twin ~ Ch 16 (Last) Updated on Pg. 142

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ayat

@ayat20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#911

Amazingly written

Zoe is such a bitch..

I hope asad finds zoya n apologies to her...

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Jalpa

@kadia717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#912

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superb update..👏

i was waiting for this update egarly..

evil devil zoe😡

huh i knew it, asad will blame zoya and will not trust her..

bt now he knows everything..

now he belives that she is selfless and innocent,😡cant he see in her eyes and experience..stupid zoe ki baato me aa gya...

poor zoya...

but asad will find her any how...

and when zoya left, and lily started crying nonstop...well shown..it was like her mother left her...

waiting for next part...

thanxs for all the pm and sry for not commenting in previous update...

Edited by kadia717 - 9 years ago

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ksen

@ksen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#913

amazing part

well written

asad and zoya's conversation was written brilliantly

too bad that asad didn't believe zoya

glad zoe showed her true colour instantly to asad

hope asad finds zoya soon

poor lily ,crying for her mother

waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

Edited by ksen - 9 years ago

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#914

Finally the face off...

Thankfully Asad proved he was always the man in control.

He kept the situation as tight as he could.

I don't blame him at the outburst..it was natural.

I know sad for Zoya but she should have waited for the driver lol😉😆

I know Asad will fix it all..

But I want a huge punishment for the evil Zoe.

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#915

awe Pia u made me cry in d end

Thank God Asad found it soon & we r saved d drama

Zoe was disgusting good Asad saw it himself

but Zoya is gone

Asad wid a crying baby who was crying 4 her mother this last line teared me😭😭

Pia mind u girl I m telling u I can't wait 4 another 2 days no way in hell 😭

I want nxt part abhi ke abhi plz give me I m dieing 2 know nxt part

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#916

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Finally the face off...

Thankfully Asad proved he was always the man in control.

He kept the situation as tight as he could.

I don't blame him at the outburst..it was natural.

I know sad for Zoya but she should have waited for the driver lol😉😆

I know Asad will fix it all..

But I want a huge punishment for the evil Zoe.

Tehsu ditto I agree wid every word😉😃

but meko nxt chahiye abhi koi bolo Pia ko😆

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MonnaS

@msingh27

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Posted: 9 years ago

#917

Oh man!!! What a brilliant update.

Asads anger was totally justified but he realized it quick. & as for Zoe, what a pain(want to use the B word but refraining from doing so) such a liar. Hope Zoya learns now not to trust her or do as Zoe wants... at least she didn't get her way this time...cannot believe she was trying to seduce asad...if I was Zoya, I would so shunn her out of my life for good

Thank you for this amazing chapter & for the PM.

Edited by msingh27 - 9 years ago