AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#441

Awesome update

I guess now zoya won't ship for rehan i guess

Asad too has realised some feelings i think

The last part was shocking

Asad actually thinking of stripping nude.

Things have actually heated up

Waiting for zoya's past mystery to be solved soon

And also the letter misunderstandings to be cleared soon

Please continue soon 😊

Edited by muskaan17rocks - 9 years ago

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Aashka

@Chillichick

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#442

Maya is such a sweetheart!

God bless her for making Zoya realize that she was going for the wrong person!

Oh my God!!

The room temperature suddenly increased by 100 or what?

A nude portrait? Of the Greek God?!

Asad has fallen deeply in the love pit!

Oh my! I loved Zoya's demand for her commission!

Though she didn't need to! That guy Has fallen for her hopelessly!

Please please get them together soon!!

Wonderful update!

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#443

Very Good Update Piaa..
Well have nothing more to say...Anita's word were painful but truth...Not all Fairytales end like that i guess...
The silent treatment started...& Zoya is getting confused about what all is happening around her...once a Bully now she has to wait and live through this helplessly...
Well I am suprised...that after ignoring her personallly for 3 weeks why has Asad come up with such a Deal of a Nude Potrait...of his.
What is going on in his mind.
Interesting part.
Continue soon.

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blueberry02

@blueberry02

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#444

Update was superb :-)
tell me 1 thing are u a writer in real??? :-/
Coz ur way of telling a story is quite amazing...keep it up
i m reading on ur previous stories again nd agan
i just cant write one paragraph properly :-(
coming to da story
dey hav very complicated relationship
both like each other may b love each other...but not ready to initiate it
okay he wants her to paint his portrait nd dat too nude wala...ahem ahem
dont no how both of dem wud control their inner feelings now
nd maya...i think her actions wil make zoe come close to asad nd no her feelings for asad
as asad said she vil open up to him nd discuss her past with one day nd i can c dat day is not so far
overall loved it :-*
sory for da long cmnt cant help it...i really luv good stories
nd thanq so much for writing

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#445

Omg what did asad just do.. nd zoya agreed to it as well... haha this is gonna be so fun to read..
Loved this partt..
it was hilarios and superb.

I cant wait to read when zoya will tell him about her past nd asad will see her scars..
ahh these two are so good.
loving it..:)

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#446

Hahaha 😆😆

Can't stop laughing at how it ended...

Anita and maya both played a good role here...

Zoya and her big mouth😆

But I want to know what is going on with Asad?

First ignore n then seduce...

Continue soon..

Couldn't Unres my last comment..

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Shreedhoni

@Shreedhoni

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#447

Plzzz

Plzzz update soon plzzz

Can't wait anymore plzzz

What is zoyas past ?????

How did she get those scares !!

And how will asad react ??

Can't wait too excited

Plzz update soon

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Fatema

@DoremonLove

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#448

Great chap
Poor asad tried so hard to stay away from her but couldn't
Zoya too has fallen for asad
Nude painting wow can't wait read
Wanna know about zoyas past what happened that caused her so much pain n scars

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#449

Awesome...hey i read your previous story it was superb and i loved every bit of it and so this story...everyday i wake up and check for your update...