AsYa FF ~ Broken Souls ~ Ch 17 Updated on Pg. 128 - Page 47

Originally posted by: asyafreva

Maya is such a sweetheart!

God bless her for making Zoya realize that she was going for the wrong person!

Oh my God!!

The room temperature suddenly increased by 100 or what?

A nude portrait? Of the Greek God?!

Asad has fallen deeply in the love pit!

Oh my! I loved Zoya's demand for her commission!

Though she didn't need to! That guy Has fallen for her hopelessly!

Please please get them together soon!!

Wonderful update!

Thanks dear
Glad u liked this update
Ha ha yeah the room temperature has raised above hundred 😉
Let's see what happens next :)

Originally posted by: Amina...

Awesome update👍🏼

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good Update Piaa..
Well have nothing more to say...Anita's word were painful but truth...Not all Fairytales end like that i guess...
The silent treatment started...& Zoya is getting confused about what all is happening around her...once a Bully now she has to wait and live through this helplessly...
Well I am suprised...that after ignoring her personallly for 3 weeks why has Asad come up with such a Deal of a Nude Potrait...of his.
What is going on in his mind.
Interesting part.
Continue soon.

Thanks Mayur
Glad u liked this chapter
Yes Anita's words were trye and it did affect Asad...that's why he was staying away from Zoya
His POV will come in the next chapter and why he started talking to her again after three weeks 😃
Will update soon :)

Originally posted by: blueberry02

Update was superb :-)
tell me 1 thing are u a writer in real??? :-/
Coz ur way of telling a story is quite amazing...keep it up
i m reading on ur previous stories again nd agan
i just cant write one paragraph properly :-(
coming to da story
dey hav very complicated relationship
both like each other may b love each other...but not ready to initiate it
okay he wants her to paint his portrait nd dat too nude wala...ahem ahem
dont no how both of dem wud control their inner feelings now
nd maya...i think her actions wil make zoe come close to asad nd no her feelings for asad
as asad said she vil open up to him nd discuss her past with one day nd i can c dat day is not so far
overall loved it :-*
sory for da long cmnt cant help it...i really luv good stories
nd thanq so much for writing

No Yaar I am not a writer but these stories have been written by professional writers
Like I've mentioned in the beginning these stories are adaoration of famous novels :)

Glad u liked this chapter
And yes, their love story is complicated because both want different things in life
Let's see who Wil compromise :)

Originally posted by: cutie15

Omg what did asad just do.. nd zoya agreed to it as well... haha this is gonna be so fun to read..
Loved this partt..
it was hilarios and superb.

I cant wait to read when zoya will tell him about her past nd asad will see her scars..
ahh these two are so good.
loving it..:)

Thanks dear for this lovely comment
Glad u liked this chapter
He will see her scars one day 😭
That will be a good scene :)
Will update the next part soon

Originally posted by: ayat20

Nice part

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Hahaha😆😆

Can't stop laughing at how it ended...

Anita and maya both played a good role here...

Zoya and her big mouth😆

But I want to know what is going on with Asad?

First ignore n then seduce...

Continue soon..

Couldn't Unres my last comment..

Thanks Tehs 😃
Glad u liked it
Asad's POV and what's going on his mind will come in the next chapter :)

Originally posted by: Shreedhoni

Plzzz

Plzzz

Plzzz update soon plzzz

Can't wait anymore plzzz

What is zoyas past ?????

How did she get those scares !!

And how will asad react ??

Can't wait too excited

Plzz update soon

Thanks
Glad u liked it
You'll get all your answers after few more chapters 😃

Originally posted by: KABHIrabab786

Great chap
Poor asad tried so hard to stay away from her but couldn't
Zoya too has fallen for asad
Nude painting wow can't wait read
Wanna know about zoyas past what happened that caused her so much pain n scars

Thanks dear 😊
Glad u liked this update
The end was awesome ...let's see if Zoya will make the portrait or not 😉

Nice update
Loved it
Curious to know what happened next
Thanks for pm