AsYa TS: Galatiyan - Part 2 on PG 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello people!

I'm back with an OS. Was watching the first few episodes of the show again, and ended up watching 2 months worth 🤣

Anyway, in the scene after Zoya unites Asad and Ayaan (after they had promised their respective Ammi's that they would never meet again), Asad pins Zoya to the pillar in the Khan Villa. And in his anger rips up the paper with a clue to her Abbu's search.

I've always felt that Zoya should have reacted more. And of course the following scenes wouldn't have happened then, but it just bothered me that he got away with it, and didn't realize his mistake until a whole month later.

Anywhooo! Here is part one 😉 More of a prologue 😆

Galatiyan

"Agar ainda aapne mere zindagi mein dakhal dene ki koshish ki, to I swear, mein aapki jaan le loonga," seethed Asad, as he snatched the paper in Zoya's hands and ripped it to pieces. Zoya's eyes grew wide, glistening with unshed tears.


A loud crackle echoed in the Khan Villa as her hand flew across his face. Asad stood there with his face turned to one side, stunned. He looked back at her with anger, but found he couldn't say a word. The look of utter rage in Zoya's eyes stopped him mid word.


"Yeh aapne kya kiya, Mr. Khan!? Aapko wakei lagta meri niyaat itni kharab hai? Meine aapko aapke bhai se milani ki koshish ki, taaki aapka dard kam ho jai, aur badle mein aap meri bezati kar rahe hain?" She paused, realizing they'd taken a few steps away from the pillar to which he has essentially pinned her. Her ever word cause her to take a determined and angry step forward, while Asad mirrored her steps, in retreat.


"Dekhie aapne jo kiya-"


"Nahin, Mr. Khan!" Zoya cut him off sternly, watching his eyes widen for a change. "Meri baat khatam nahin hui abhi tak." Asad's hand fisted themselves, as he fought against himself from pinning her to the wall once again. "Aapko pata hai, ki jo kagaz aapne abhi abhi phada usme kya tha? Kaise pata hoga," she continued, sarcastically. "Aapko aapke gusse aur gham ke alawa kuch aur dikhai nahin deta. Uss kagaz par mer talash ki ek lothi clue thi..." Her voice cracked as she let out the last word, looking down to hide her tears.


Asad's ears perked up. Talashi?


"Ab mein apne abbu ko kaise dhundhungi..." whispered a distraught and tired Zoya. Asad's eyes widened again, and he felt himself go numb. Woh, apne, abbu ko, dhund rahi hai...?


Before he could form another thought, she pushed him aside and ran to her room, closing the door with a loud thud behind her. Asad stood frozen in the same spot, her last few words repeating themselves incessantly in his head. She was here to find her father, her abbu. And in his anger, he destroyed her only clue in months. His hands fisted themselves again, but this time, from self-loathing.


Sure she annoyed him. She was messy, she was loud, she was incredibly rude and overly curious. But she made his ammi laugh, and smile. And he had to admit, Najma adored her as a friend. She may be a nuisance to him, but she was a joy to his mother and sister, and all her messes were failed attempts at helping their family. He sighed. Despite how he felt about her, she didn't deserve what he'd done.


How was he going to fix this?


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Until next time! 🤗


Part 2

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WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Monicaaa.. oh my darlinnggg


WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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haiyee seriously main apki jaan le loonga days came flooding back 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

haiyee seriously main apki jaan le loonga days came flooding back 😭


haha aww yehi toh iraada tha mera 😉😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mochhug


haha aww yehi toh iraada tha mera 😉😳


Whatever u may call it, i just started humming the song Dilruba reading those words 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting Prologue.
Will be waiting to see what is your take on this particular track..
Hahaha...I know Asad got away with that Letter thing easily..but A SLAP ...was to hard for a Man's Ego..pura crash hoo gaya hoga...
Khair...Continue this soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty


Whatever u may call it, i just started humming the song Dilruba reading those words 🤣


Kuch kuch ho tha hai jab bhi Asad Ahmed Khan ka zikar hota hai 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Interesting Prologue.
Will be waiting to see what is your take on this particular track..
Hahaha...I know Asad got away with that Letter thing easily..but A SLAP ...was to hard for a Man's Ego..pura crash hoo gaya hoga...
Khair...Continue this soon.



Haha well he's very arrogant in that time of the show. And as much I love how cutely he apologizes to her usually, I hated that they didn't address his mistake here for a whole month. I know they wanted him to find out about her search much later, but it just bothered me haha.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mochhug




Haha well he's very arrogant in that time of the show. And as much I love how cutely he apologizes to her usually, I hated that they didn't address his mistake here for a whole month. I know they wanted him to find out about her search much later, but it just bothered me haha.


This Character ASAD AHMED KHAN.
Still has this power and magnetism that people are still angry over his inital days deeds..and also fall for him..at the same time for his character...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Damn
I remember that episode
Yeah
What if Zoya really slapped Asad
Whoa
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