AsYa TS: Galatiyan - Part 2 on PG 10 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Hey
I have read many of your older works n had liked them all..
Well welcome back...
N this was just superb...
Just like u I have been watching the old episodes n happened to watch this one too a few days back.
N i completely agree that Asad could get away with such acts so casually...

Actually sometimes I felt Zoya would just let him have his arrogant ways without putting up a proper fight..

But whoa here she came back with a slap🤣

Great...now looking forward to what will AAK do..

Please pm your future works too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
It's soo great to see you with another TS Monica 🤗 I'm still waiting for MJ update though ;)
Oh dear...you fulfilled my 'dil ki tamanna' 😆 I've always wanted Zoya to react more at this instead of just shedding few tears. I'm sure I'll you'll do justice to it :)

Update soon now. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
😊
Please do continue soon...
Really loved the start..
Please do pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Interesting prologue
Would love to see where you take this track and how Asad repents for his mistakes

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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice start :)
I cant wait to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Monicaa, my love. How are you?! It has been so so long and I have missed you dearly.
This piece made me tear up, it brought back so many memories, some good some bad. But it made me miss KaBhi and our Asya to the core. It made me nostalgic and I don't even know how to explain in words what I am going through right now. I have never felt anything as strongly for any other couple like I did for Asad and Zoya.

You always write perfectly and this was penned beautifully. This Asad and Zoya I love watching and reading about. I avoid going back to watch old scenes because they make me cry like you did with this. But it awakened my desire to go back and watch and re-live those memories again. Sighs. What a beautiful journey that was, too bad it ended how it did.

Thank you so much for writing this. I really enjoyed it, despite the tears. And sorry I haven't been able to read or comment on any of your works for a while. I have stopped reading anything due to my hectic timetable but this is just LOVE.

I want to read more, I want to live ASYA through your writing. I adore your writing and missed it dearly. I have always wanted to see Zoya like this. He totally deserved that slap. WRITE MORE PLEASE.

LOVE YA <3 XOXOXOXOXO
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan

Monicaa, my love. How are you?! It has been so so long and I have missed you dearly.

This piece made me tear up, it brought back so many memories, some good some bad. But it made me miss KaBhi and our Asya to the core. It made me nostalgic and I don't even know how to explain in words what I am going through right now. I have never felt anything as strongly for any other couple like I did for Asad and Zoya.

You always write perfectly and this was penned beautifully. This Asad and Zoya I love watching and reading about. I avoid going back to watch old scenes because they make me cry like you did with this. But it awakened my desire to go back and watch and re-live those memories again. Sighs. What a beautiful journey that was, too bad it ended how it did.

Thank you so much for writing this. I really enjoyed it, despite the tears. And sorry I haven't been able to read or comment on any of your works for a while. I have stopped reading anything due to my hectic timetable but this is just LOVE.

I want to read more, I want to live ASYA through your writing. I adore your writing and missed it dearly. I have always wanted to see Zoya like this. He totally deserved that slap. WRITE MORE PLEASE.

LOVE YA <3 XOXOXOXOXO


Ahh omg!! *rubs eyes* I can't believe what I'm seeing!

I missed your amazingly heartfelt comments. They always made my day 😳

I missed you too!! I was actually reading one of your monster comments on Bitter Truth and realized I made the GRAVE mistake of not replying. But now the thread is closed 😭 But! I will send you a PM soon with the reply 😃

Aww I know the feeling. As much as I love rewatching old scenes and epis, I also get really angry because it also reminds me of how much potential this couple had to make a really good show through and through and how it all went to crap 😔

But enough sadness! I should be continuing this soon! Been a little busy with school but slowly reducing my workload 😳

So happy to be back! I missed this forum and all of you like anything! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Mona

u r back on d writing desk seriously 😉...Resuming pending works & starting new
U know its unbelievable but so happy feeling at same time that so many season 1 members r coming back & resuming there stuff 😊
& we all feel awesome for that this is d power of season 1😎
coming 2 OS a very fresh concept kya kehte hain Nayi soch(rishta wahi soch nayi😆) Star plus ki tagline churali maine lol🤣
Wahi same situation but if Asad would have known it pehle than kya reaction hota
A very thoughtful & interesting subject⭐️⭐️
Looking 4ward 2 read ur version😉
Btw there r so many such tracks whch were poorly handled by PH now its seems IF writers have taken it on themselves 2 correct there mistakes😆😆
go 4 it girl 👍🏼
PS- Sent u Buddy rqst accept it plz😳


Heeey haha thank you for the lovely comment! 😛

I've always had some problems with some of the scenes and how the CV's handled them. But thats why I love the forum. Only place you can dream and devise an alternate version 😳

🤣 I know the subject is not very original 😆but kya karein? It's a classic favourite 😛😆

Stay tuned for Part 2!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: _Annie_

It's soo great to see you with another TS Monica 🤗 I'm still waiting for MJ update though ;)

Oh dear...you fulfilled my 'dil ki tamanna' 😆 I've always wanted Zoya to react more at this instead of just shedding few tears. I'm sure I'll you'll do justice to it :)

Update soon now. :)


Thank youuu! I'm planning to update everything soon. Just dealing with some school workload 😳

Thanks for the lovely comment 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Pretty interesting!!!


Waiting to read more!!!


Bring it on...


Thanks for pm.

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